Abhi-Pragya fiction: 'Proof' reloaded (a dedication to -mina-'s Proof) - Page 4

Wow... I am speechless. Its mind blowing.

Originally posted by: vivkriti

Wow... I am speechless. Its mind blowing.

Originally posted by: -Tia-

What is it with this fic and speechlessness?😕

Thank you Miths!

Lol Tia! I just realized most of the comments had speechless in them!! 😆 But that was indeed our first reaction!!⭐️

Arey, you all can't go speechless on me like that. Kuch more bataao.

Originally posted by: -Tia-

Arey, you all can't go speechless on me like that. Kuch more bataao.

your story is great, really well written, I like how Pragya told him to find out himself she has never been with anyone else

Originally posted by: -Tia-

Arey, you all can't go speechless on me like that. Kuch more bataao.

Originally posted by: Mkgp88

Tia..funny thing...my mouth just drops open every time I read this...no words to explain...but will try over the weekend...I'll have to go find my words first!

Woah ms Tia this was amazing

You need to write mature or 18+ somewhere in the title :)

You describe abhi and his emotions soo well. He has a good real gentle side which you showed us in your second half and this cruel rough mean side that you describe in the beginning. But because you describe everything so well I can imagine his exact exact expressions. Favorite part was how he described the first kiss exactly like how he feels after a concert.

Pragya is just bowled over by all these emotions she has and gets to experience from him. He has so much practise so she's in for a lot of surprises. Favorite part was imagining the image of her expression from yesterday's episode when he was gonna kiss her and instead teased her and stared at her...you described exactly that expression plus kept going. I am so so glad Pragya got to experience the aftermath of that and we got to feel it through your writing

If you haven't noticed I've been hooked to your writing. Hmm do you write on qubool hai? cus I would love it if you pm your index. Or if you can put a link to your other works at the end of each story that'd be great cus then I can easily go to another story. Hmm but so far this is my favorite!

Thanks for a great great version of abhigya

Pinky, I PMed you an index of my fics. They all are AbhiGya one shots. I don't write or watch other soaps.

omg buddy that was very emotional... i think u should continue it ..it would be a beautiful story to read to see how their relationship progresses and to c abhi change himself for her =)