The romeo and juliet of KKB (abhigya) updated on page 2 11/11/ 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi everyone. im usually a silent member but i felt like posting a story on abhi pragya in the form of an os so i hope you like it (this is my first try so im a little nervous).


"yeh mujhe kya horaha hai? aisa kabhi pehle kisi ke liye feel nahi kiya maine. tannu ke liye bhi nahi. khair tannu ke saath jo bhi moments maine spend kiye woh saare jhoote the jab woh khud hi fake thi toh uske saath jo feelings maine experiance ki thi woh kaise saach hongi?" abhi thought as wave of bitterness came over him as he thought about tannu's betrayal. "whatever" sighed abhi as he pushed away tannu's thoughts. "main uske ke bare main soch hi kyun raha hoon i should be thinking about these stupid feelings ughh pata nahi kya hogaya hai."
abhi threw his favourite pillow (which he was holding in his hand) on the bed in frustration. he plonked himself on his bed and reached for his laptop
"har problem ka solution log google main dhoond te hai toh main bhi apni problem ka solution idhar se hi dhoond tha hoon. "
he started typing whatever kinds of emotions he was feeling in the search box and feeling rather dumb doing it.
"iss chashmish ki wajah se kya halat hogayi hai meri itni stupid harkatein karraha hoon aane do usse samne ek punch marke uske ugly face ko aur bhi ugly bana doonga... nahi waise uska face itna bhi ugly nahi hai actually thori si pyari hai..." abhi's heart started beating really fast once again.
this had been happning for the past few days whenever he mentioned pragya.
"yeh lo phir se shuru hogaya yeh stupid dil" he tapped on his heart "kya masla kya hai tume? can't you behave normally?" abhi's frustration had reached its peak as he couldn't understand what was happening with him.

" hey mr rockstar, tum itne bewakoofon ki tarah kyun behave karrahe ho?" said a familiar voice.

"kisne bola? how dare you call me bewakoof? kaun hai?" asked abhi,looking around trying to locate the owner of that voice.

"oye idhar udhar kya dekh raha hai idhar hoon tumhare peeche"

quite shocked abhi turned around not believing what he was seeing, another him! "ok so clearly am i so tired that i am hallucinating. very good just what i needed."

"come on abhi, how can you be so dumb? why don't you realize ke jo tum yeh feelings experiance karrahe ho woh tum kyun feel karrahe ho"

"haan pata hai mujhe main yeh sab kyun feel karraha hoon itna stupid nahi hoon main" abhi defended himself.

"acha toh bata" abhi number 2 retorted " kyun aise feel karrahe ho tum"

"because i have some new exotic type of disease" abhi said as a matter-of-factly

"WAKE UP ABHI! you don't have any disease, well actually you may have dumbadosis but we can't do much about that because that is a manufacuring fault. anyway the point is that, you. are. in. love. with. pragya. you are in love with ur chashmish!"

to be continued... if guys liked it then i will post the other parts (this was just a trial part)

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part 1 pg 1
part 2 pg 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is AMAZING!!! So funny and so true to Abhi and so smart and so making me crazy for more. Please please please do post more!! You have a gift for humour and I really really loved reading this! Thanks for sharing :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice update I like how he says he will punch her etc so funny and typical Abhi, I like the name of the diease, cannot wait to read the next part
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Amazing updates. Loved it. Excited for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice..
Waiting for the next part..
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Please continue... It was fabulous... Eagerly waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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im so glad that quite a few of u guys liked it i will definitely try to post the next part soon 😃
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Part 2
"kya?! pagal to nahi hogaye ho kya? main? ROCKSTAR abhi in love with that chalu chashmish? pfft." denied abhi.

"oh come on you and i both know that she of all people is not 'chalu'. it was your fault. you thought she was wrong."

"janta hoon, she is not the person i thought her to be..." abhi admitted riddled with guilt. "in fact she is proably the most innocent person i have ever met. not to mention her caring heart, sweet nature, stunning smile, her-"

"oh majnu" abhi no 2 interrupted. " i get it, your hopelessly head over heels but please stop before you break out into a love song, in your besuri awaz" abhi no 2 muttered.

"how dare you, tu-" before abhi could complete his sentence, a voice that made his heart beat increase (x50).

"yeh aap kya karrahe hain? who are you talking too?" asked a perplexed pragya

suddenly abhi no. 2 vanished and just the original abhi was left standing there, eyes glued to pragya.

"why is he staring at me? ab maine kya kardiya?" thought pragya mentally going over whatever she may have done to irk abhi. "k-k-kya hua?" stammered pragya. even though she loved him beyond limits, she still got scared of him from time to time.

abhi could not hear a word pragya was saying. All he noticed was pragya's innocent face. even though she looked the same as always, however today abhi couldn't help but notice her every aspect. He was in awe of not only her physicality but also her personality.

" isne aaj kuch alag kiya hai apni appearence ke saath, shayad she trimmed her hair or something. isiliye she is looking attractive" abhi thought trying to reason with his current feelings. " nahi kuch alag toh nahi kiya baalon ke saath." gradually abhi started mentally going over pragya's features trying to detect what she could have changed from her features that would trigger his feelings like this. " she hasn't changed anything about neither her appearance nor her... her personality" thought abhi as realisation dawned on him. Actually more like punched (abhi style) him in the face. " what is going on? kya mujhe sach mein chashmish se... se PYAR hogaya hai..." suddenly abhi felt like he was floating on air. He had never felt so happy.

Everything felt so perfect at that moment. but what abhi had not realised was that while he was pondering over all of his feelings he was walking towards pragya as if in some sort of trance. and this was scaring the living daylights out of pragya. With each step abhi took forward pragya took one backwards thus ultimately leading her back to be rested against the wall, with no place to go

Abhi was oblivious to his surroundings, all he saw was the woman he loved right in front of him, the most beautiful girl in the world. actually no beautiful didn't do justice to her beauty in abhi's eyes. in his opinion pragya's beauty was more ethereal.

" why is he staring at me like that" thought an overwhelmed pragya. Abhi had never looked at pragya with so much depth and passion in his eyes. " if he doesn't stop soon my heart will explode."

Abhi reached for pragya's hand shocking pragya out of her wits in the process
" i will just tell her how i feel. main typical lovers ki tarah nahi karoonga jo pyar karte hai lekin sharmana ke chakkar main they end up losing their chance. Whether she loves me or not woh baad ki baat hai " decided abhi. " chashmish mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai"

By know pragya had recovered from shock and was now in her dreamworld. It was like she was hypnotised by abhi's love. " ji..." whispered a hopeful pragya.

"main..." abhi stopped midway "kya karraha hai abhi. you are not an ordinary person. you are ROCKSTAR abhi. apne love ko aise confess karega? bilkul nahi tu special hai toh tareeka bhi special hona chahiye." thought abhi.

"boliye na... aap kya kehna chahte hai?" pragya questioned. Pragya felt as if for the first time her feelings for abhi were being reciprocated. She truly felt abhi was going to say the three words any and every girl wanted to hear.

"woh main... yeh bolna chahta tha ke..ke..ke tumhare chashme toot gaye hai. dekho glass main crack hai." abhi said covering up his real intention.

"kya?" inquired a crestfallen pragya. "kahan se" she rushed to the mirror to examine her glasses. "koi crack nahi hai. mere glasses bilkul theek hai."

"acha? my bad. ab pakkana band karo mujhe ek zaroori kaam karne jaana hai."

"suniye kya aap vakiye yeh bolna chahte ya...ya kuch aur baat thi."

abhi walked towards pragya. leaving almost no space between them. "nahi actually tumse kuch aur bolna tha. tumse yeh kehna tha ke tumhe queen of england se award mil raha hai. aaj sham ko funtion jaldi tyaar ho jao. haha. as if" abhi jokingly said. "bye." with that abhi left leaving a half smiling and half disapointed pragya alone in the room.

"sabse pehle i should tell aliyah about this. im sure woh bohut zyada khush hogi." thought a giddy abhi, clearly overestimating his sister.

Abhi knocked on aliyah's door, taking the first step towards the destruction of his love.

"aliyah?"

to be continued...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice work selena! but oh what a dark turn at the end!! so fearful of what will happen now. first step of destruction? please let fate intervene and save this delicate love! uff! thanks for a great scene, lots of tension and fun as abhi figured out his thoughts and pragya reacted to him... :)

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