Abhigya TS: I Can't Understand You Updated Pg2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey everyone! So I tried my hand again at another short story. Actually its basically a stupid fantasy of how I want the whole kkb hall jail thing to end. I tried putting most of the dialogues in hindi because idk some things just sound better in hindi than english. Please excuse my mistakes, it's not my first language. So the backdrop is that Abhi beats up Mr. Corporator so the corporator gets really mad and bribes the police officer arresting abhi to beat to him up really bad in return. I also added a new character, Rahul, to knock some sense into Abhi hehe. Enjoy!

Abhi is ruthlessly thrown into the police station while the head police officer hounds him, hitting him repeatedly. Pragya and Tanu follow them in.

Aap ko kya laga? Aap itne badi rockstar hai toh kuch bhi kar sakate? Aap kanoon ki aage kuch nahi ho! yells the Police Officer while he continues to hit abhi with his baton. Abhi, helpless, tries to avoid his blows. Pragya with tears streaming down her face screams, Stop it! Aap usse asi nahi mar sakatha! but the Police Officer heeds her no notice. She turns and grabs Tanu's arm shaking it in frustration, aap kuch karo na, aap ek supermodel ho, aapki baat shayad maan jayege.

Main kya kar sakate? Do you see that police officer's anger? If I try to intervene he might hurt me! Tanu screams back. Pragya unable to stand watching Abhi get beat anymore finally makes a decision. Just as the officer is about to strike again she puts herself between Abhi and the Police Officer (PO), forcing him to stop.

Hey! Tum kya kara rahe hai? Move verna main tum bhi nahi choodungi. Nahi! yells Pragya. What you're doing is wrong. Aap ko koi haq nahi isse asi marna. You are abusing your power. Chashmish tum kya kar rahi ho? Go away, I got this, Abhi says. Yea I can see that, replies Pragya. The PO interjects their bickering by grabbing Pragya's arm and pushes her out of the way saying Tum abhi tak meri power ko nahi dekha.

Abhi, furious at the PO for his crass behavior with his wife, grabs the PO by his collar. Ab tum tumhare limits cross kar di. The PO pushes Abhi away. Acha? he pushes Abhi again. So now you will teach me my limits? pushing him again. Abhi, with steel in his eyes, simply says Yes.

The PO's anger reached new heights seeing Abhi's audacity. He raises his hand to slap Abhi with all his might. At last moment Pragya steps in-between and receives the blow. Her glasses are knocked off and blood starts dripping from the side of her mouth. Everyone at the police station, including the PO stands shocked.

Now enters Akash and Rahul, a very hot young lawyer, who has brought Abhi's bail papers.

How dare you raise a hand on a girl! yells Rahul. He quickly strides into the station and stands right in front of the PO. Maine jaan bujhkar nahi kiya protests the PO, knowing full well he was now very much in trouble. Rahul starts arguing with the PO. Meanwhile, Akash rushes to Pragya's aid. Bhabhi aap teek toh hai? Pragya, uncomfortable with everyone staring at her, tries to reassure Akash that she is fine.

Abhi still stood behind Pragya in a daze. He couldn't believe what Chashmish just did. Unable to take his eyes off her, his mind reels with a thousand questions. What was she thinking? Who does that? This Chashmish always made his mind spin. He can never understand her. Dadi wasn't here and neither was her mom. So what reason could she have had to take his slap? Just then, Pragya turns to look at him, her eyes still wet with tears. That's when he finally saw the blood and the sweltering bruise on the side of her face. His mind just snapped.

Abhi in full hero mode, strides up to Rahul and the PO. He angrily grabs the PO by both collars this time and pulls him close to his face. Abhi scathingly says, Main tumhare vardi tumse chin luga, dehke na. Rahul, trying to avert any more charges against Abhi, comes in-between Abhi and PO, pulling Abhi away. Calm down sir, main hoon na, I will handle it. But Abhi's anger would not be tamed. He yells at Rahul, I want him fired you got it? Not suspended or transferred. Fired!

Abhi then turns on his heel, marches up to Pragya and grabs her hand, leading her out of the police station. Tanu, assured that everything was now safe, runs after them.

Abhi! Abhi! Ruko! Wait for me! Abhi, unable to process where Tanu his so called gf stood in his life anymore, simply turns to Tanu and says, Go home Tanu. He then continues to lead Pragya towards the car.

Suno, Pragya quietly says to Abhi while tugging at their joined hands. He stops mid stride but doesn't turn. Aap teek toh hai? Zyada chot toh nahi lagi? Abhi couldn't believe after all that happened she was asking him how he was! He gives a frustrated sigh and just keep walking. Suniye na, aap teek toh hai? aap mujhe ignore kyun kar rahi ho? Incapable of taking it anymore, Abhi whips around and pulls Pragya towards him in anger.

Tumhare problem kya hai? Who told you to come in the way? Khabhi apne aap ko mirror mein dekha hoon? A strong wind can knock you over. Badi aye mujhe bachayane.

Abhi's angry rant causes new tears to form in Pragya's eyes.

Hurt by his rejection she asks, Aap itne gusse me kyun ho? Main sirf aapki madad karna chaati thi. If you can do all this to save my family's hall, I can't do anything to save you?

Frustrated and still feeling guilty looking at Pragya's face, Abhi screams, Nobody asked for your help Chashmish!

Pragya, unable to understand what she did wrong and why Abhi was so mad at her, yells back, What is wrong with you? Agar Tanu meri jaga hoti, aap itne gussa nahi karte!

Abhi grabs both of Pragya's arms and pulls her angrily towards himself. Don't you get it? Tanu khabhi aisa nahi karte! Woh khud ko asi situation mein khabhi nahi dal denge kahan usse chot aayaga! Abhi yells back.

Both stunned by this sudden revelation, Abhi and Pragya helplessly stare at each other.


That's it for now. Second part will be updated tomorrow :]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it! so much great drama, and finally abhi questioning things. and a hot lawyer oooh! loved the aakash moment. pragya jumping in front to get the punch was oh my goodness so scary!! anyway really looking forward to the next part! thanks for posting 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsum... N yeah u said it right... Some Things sound so good in hindi than in english...:):):):) update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love it!😛
Finally Abhi realizes the difference between Pragya and Tannu!👍🏼 And Pragya standing up to Abhi without even caring about herself and Abhi snapping after seeing Pragya!nicely done!

Thank you for posting... Waiting till the next update! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is just plain awesome!!👏
Abhi being hit by the police in a baton??!!😆 Sorry, if you meant it in a serious and mellow way but I can't help imagining how Abhi would react in the show!!😉
Abhi and Pragya caring for each other!!! LOVE!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mina-

loved it! so much great drama, and finally abhi questioning things. and a hot lawyer oooh! loved the aakash moment. pragya jumping in front to get the punch was oh my goodness so scary!! anyway really looking forward to the next part! thanks for posting 😊


Thanks! yea I feel like we need more drama 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anbhigya

Awsum... N yeah u said it right... Some Things sound so good in hindi than in english...:):):):) update soon...


doesn't it? I hope my hindi wasn't too butchered. took a lot of help from google translator haha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Diahh

I love it!😛

Finally Abhi realizes the difference between Pragya and Tannu!👍🏼 And Pragya standing up to Abhi without even caring about herself and Abhi snapping after seeing Pragya!nicely done!

Thank you for posting... Waiting till the next update! 😊


Thank you! I feel like Abhi needs more instances of Pragya vs Tanu to really get it through his thick skull
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: renukha871

This is just plain awesome!!👏

Abhi being hit by the police in a baton??!!😆 Sorry, if you meant it in a serious and mellow way but I can't help imagining how Abhi would react in the show!!😉
Abhi and Pragya caring for each other!!! LOVE!!


Haha yea even I seriously questioned the whole beating Abhi thing because I really can't see it happening in the show but then I thought hey why not? hindi shows aren't supposed to make sense anyway 😆 anyways glad you enjoyed!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that was a nice update
love it
waiting eagerly for the next part

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