Abhigya Fiction -The Turning Point -Completed-epilogue pg28- 12/10 - Page 3

Oh my god.
This is beautiful love, honestly. The fic sort of has a melancholic feel to it, the words flit around each other so wonderfully, weaving the story together like threads of silk. If you haven't guessed already, I am in love with this fic 😆

Sarla is an amazing woman here man. I love how she didn't back down, no matter what, and took Pragya with her.

And the second update, man, it maybe kind of broke me. She kept walking, and he couldn't -didn't- do a single about it, because he didn't know what to do, why to do it.

Chashmish toh chali jayengi

When Pragya said this in the episode, it made me ache a little because it was true, she was going to leave one day.

And now you added the line to the story in such a profound way, man.

You really need to update soon love, I mean it <3

Originally posted by: -mina-

res :) unres! :D

ohhh my goshhh i have chills!!!! this is perfection! picking up so many open threads from the show, gathering them into one powerful new narrative with a really exciting possible road ahead. aiieee!!! awesome!!

loved sarla insisting she was going to take pragya home; the ultimate rescue isn't it? and pragya's relief when she realized that it was going to be over and she'd be back with her loved ones...wow, i found that so resonant. it was supposed to be freedom for abhi but it really was liberation day for pragya, and one that she couldn't possibly have imagined. wow ❤️❤️❤️

abhi's paralysis and then his false security that nothing would change were both so fascinating to read. and i lovvved the way you wrote his wacky thoughts, very true to abhi and so funny!! 😆

and who knows what happened upstairs, but daadi has somehow accepted this. looks like abhi is really in trouble from all sides now. exciting! haha that's not even a strong enough word. mind-blowing and amazing, how about that? 😉

and the last echo - that's drunk pragya's cutesy voice isn't it? omg, 1000000 points to you (idk what kind of points...whatever you like, house points if you're into harry potter, or maybe just life/writer points 😛) for calling back to that. so much was buried in those episodes that the show may never pick up on. but thank goodness for your awesome imagination for bringing them into this story!! (disclaimer: if the show has brought it up in the last two weeks, i don't know about it yet. but i assume the show hasn't because shows are obtuse like that. 😳)

this chapter was a great read and i will surely re-read it once my heart stops racing with adrenaline hehehe. if you really are able to update it every day that would be a treat beyond anything! but yeah write and post at whatever pace you like, i'll certainly keep following this story, not least because you have the evil genius of ending on the most tantalizing moments!!

thanks for posting!

Originally posted by: -Martinski-

Wow! BeUtiful! The count down thing !!! <3

Abhi's monologue!

And best was the way you described Pragya's change of expression!

Love this sarla aunty!

Thanks ! Cant wait for more :p