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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Anbhigya
Honestly i was a bit hesitant to open it coz m a rabul admirer... But u surprised me.. Dis OS was subtle... Nothing made me cringe in between... So good job buddy.. Its a nice OS... N A n P expecting... Ha ha ha...:D:D

Aww Shikhu thanks for taking a chance on my story! I know it is a difficult idea for most RaBul admirers to imagine Subul and I'm so flattered that you read it anyway. Haha I know the title is misleading but I really couldn't call it anything else 😆! And haha like how everyone is so excited abt Abhigya baby too. Thank you for reading and commenting, it means a lot to me that I didn't upset you as a RaBul fan!

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Anbhigya

@Anbhigya

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: -mina-

Aww Shikhu thanks for taking a chance on my story! I know it is a difficult idea for most RaBul admirers to imagine Subul and I'm so flattered that you read it anyway. Haha I know the title is misleading but I really couldn't call it anything else 😆! And haha like how everyone is so excited abt Abhigya baby too. Thank you for reading and commenting, it means a lot to me that I didn't upset you as a RaBul fan!

ur welcum yaar..:):) ha ha ha.. IKR.. Abhigya baby.. Just imagine!! I noticed abhigya dere too when abhi came as dance partner wid prags.. N suresh was forced to go wid bul..:):):):):) keep up da gud work!!

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Great job on this story Mina! Usually stories with consummation scenes make you cring but you've executed it so subtly here that it seems to suit the character's personalities and the relationship that they could potentially have. 👏

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Baljodh

@Haisisterz

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

This was so nice! TFs =D

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ABCDesiGirl93

@ABCDesiGirl93

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

omg! was def not expecting that ! well written <333 it!

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Amazing OS!!!

Even though I'm a Rabul fan I loved ur OS on subul!!

Beautifully written...loved how u portrayed subul's relationship!!

Awesome ending...Pragya's pregnant...nice one😆

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: putturani
Great job on this story Mina! Usually stories with consummation scenes make you cring but you've executed it so subtly here that it seems to suit the character's personalities and the relationship that they could potentially have. 👏

Aww thank you so much! Heh I guess it helps that there wasn't a consummation scene as such. I'm so pleased you thought it suited them! Thank you for your lovely thoughtful comment, I really appreciate it! ❤️

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: -HeyJude-
This was so nice! TFs =D

Thank you for reading and commenting!! Really appreciate it, glad you liked it 😊

Originally posted by: ABCDesiGirl93
omg! was def not expecting that ! well written <333 it!

Haha thank you! Yes i guess the title is misleading. Thanks for reading and commenting! ❤️

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786
Amazing OS!!!
Even though I'm a Rabul fan I loved ur OS on subul!!
Beautifully written...loved how u portrayed subul's relationship!!
Awesome ending...Pragya's pregnant...nice one😆

Thank you SO much. I can't even tell you to know how much it means to me that as a RaBul fan you were still able to read and like my fic. Thanks for giving it a chance and I'm so glad you liked it!! Thanks for reading and commenting and lots of love to you! ❤️

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Lkb79

@Lkb79

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Oh gosh, Mina. This is wonderful! Sorry for the delayed reaction.

This is perfect and brilliant. You've created vignettes just detailed enough to show gentle progressions but brief enough to make the reader consider and be creative about what moments happened in between to allow those subtle progressions. At least that's what was thinking about - the moments in between those first times.

Now I hope you do one for Abhigya and dare I say it, Purab and Aliya?

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