First Times | SuBul OS by mina - Page 4

Originally posted by: Lkb79

Oh gosh, Mina. This is wonderful! Sorry for the delayed reaction.

This is perfect and brilliant. You've created vignettes just detailed enough to show gentle progressions but brief enough to make the reader consider and be creative about what moments happened in between to allow those subtle progressions. At least that's what was thinking about - the moments in between those first times.

Now I hope you do one for Abhigya and dare I say it, Purab and Aliya?

Thank you for your comment! I was hoping you would share your thoughts!

Wow, it's interesting to know that your imagination wandered into the in between moments. That is really cool to know. When I was writing it I was focussed on these key moments and I really have no idea what went on between them, but I did want to suggest that it took time and was a gradual change, so it's awesome if what was written got you thinking about what was suggested. Thank you for your thoughtful response!

As for AbhiGya, the songfic for "The One" is written in a similar style, though it's an AU of how they met. I'm not sure I have a first times type vision for them? Their relationship is so complicated, with so much back and forth and external obstacles in the way too. As for Paaliya, good to know you would be interested! Pretty sure for them it would have to be called Second Chances? Hehe. But I have no muse for them. I don't ship Purab with anybody. Maybe I should challenge myself to imagine a way that he gets his act together and then becomes worthy of someone...hmm. It could be an interesting exercise. I'll see!

Of course if you have any ideas along these lines I am happy to know about them!! 😃

Thanks again for reading and commenting 😊

wow this is awesome and beautiful tale of two people who found their way back to innocent friendship and love.

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

wow this is awesome and beautiful tale of two people who found their way back to innocent friendship and love.

Little events play part in their love and their relation progress positively and get strong gradually and life became impossible to live with out each other presence, thats too beautiful.

I love the way you show the one year span of their life, very well written.

can you please wirte this oneshot for Pragya and abhi, aliya and purab too?

👏 👏 👏

Thank you for your lovely comment! So glad you got the sense that for them life became impossible to live without each other, that was really what I wanted to show!

And aww good to know you would be interested in further stories! Unfortunately I don't really have matching ideas for the other jodis. AbhiGya's relationship is too complicated for this first times concept. And for Aaliya and Purab...maybe there could be a second or third chances story? But I have to find a way to like Purab first, and that's hard for me 😳

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

This was jus beautiful!! CVs should learn from this! 😊

Originally posted by: Kay08

This was jus beautiful!! CVs should learn from this! 😊

I thoroughly enjoyed the slow development among them!

Keep writing!! 👍🏼

Glad you liked it!! Thanks so much for your comment. And yes, it looks like this show will keep me writing 😆

Originally posted by: -Martinski-

Mina!!! This is simply beautiful!!!!!!
I mean the tiny details and the beautiful portrayal of SuBul!

And A and P expecting 😆

Love it all!

It would be so cute to watch Abhi getting anxious over what to expect during Pragya's pregnancy because he's like an innocent child but I think Suresh has it covered because he is the mature adult amongst Bulbul and him 😃😛

Now with banner! Please see page 1 :)

😭This is just 😭

Thank you GM! Subul gets harder and harder to write as time goes on but I've not given up yet 😉

may need to revise this story if we get the characters back ;)