~~Zaroori Tha~~||An Abhigya FF||Updated Chapter 4 on page 19 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: smala

Loved it .

Awesome update .
Can't wait to read what is going to happen next.
Thank you for the pm.
Please do continue soon.


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: indi

Thank you, lasya. That was sooo lovely ... at last they meet!!!! And what a cliffhanger you've left us with ...😃 ... waiting for more!!!

Thanks for the PM 🤗!!!!


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786

Great update!!

Loved it!!
Continue soon...eagerly waiting 4 the nxt update!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
|| TEASER ||



"Abhi ... ! Abhi ! ... Abhi ...Abhi ...ABHI ! ! " roared the audience...

There was silence for sometime as he did not turn up... Slowly the mutterings and confusion raised among them, there was no sight of him and then suddenly ...

"Look !!!! " shouted a woman ... "He is there !"...

"Whoa " "GASPS" "OMG****"... "mutterings"

There is the rockstar doing an aerial act much to his fans amusements... This concert was no ordinary one...

He lands on the stage to start his chartbuster song of the year ... his guitar satrats creating magic over people

"Abhi ... ! Abhi ! ... Abhi ...Abhi ...ABHI ! ! "

Audience start swaying their hands...

Na re na re...

Mera har pal ab toh bojhal
Veeran sa, dil yeh har dum
Lakhon hai ghum, tanha hai hum
Kaise sahein itna sitam
Tu milna paaye, hum jee na paaye
Kahin marna jaaye, kaisi hai, kaisi hai bebasi
Dil phir se chaahe
Teri hi panaahein
Kahin marr na jaaye zindagi
Gunaah kiya dil maine, yaar ka todh ke
Gunaah kiya usse ik din tanha chodh ke...

He was reminiscing the moments with her ... her smiles , his smiles, their fights and her tears filled with anguish and helplessness... and the song was over ...there were cheers and applauds but Abhi was lost ... He found his eyes filled with tears of remorse ...


Pls let me know your reviews 😊 ... Sorry for my long absence in the forum



Edited by lasyap3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
The song ' Gunaah ' (which has been pebneed in the above teaser ) is from the movie ' Blood Money ' ... 😊
Edited by lasyap3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cutestar12

Lovely update continue soon.


Thanks dear ...

Would do soonish 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello Folks ! 😃

Sorry for the late update guys...😭

I was busy with my studies and was in a very tight schedule, so pardon me..

Here comes my chapter four of my FF...⭐️

Happy Reading 😳

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CHAPTER 4 : EHSAAS-E-DIL - TOOTE RISHTE


The next day, at Delhi , at live concert in a stadium

"Abhi ... ! Abhi ! ... Abhi ...Abhi ...ABHI ! ! " roared the audience...

There was silence for sometime as he did not turn up... Slowly the mutterings and confusion raised among them, there was no sight of him and then suddenly ...

"Look !!!! " shouted a woman ... "He is there !"...

"Whoa " "GASPS" "OMG****"... "mutterings"

There is the rockstar doing an aerial act much to his fans amusements... This concert was no ordinary one...

He lands on the stage to start his chartbuster song of the year ... his guitar starts creating magic over people

"Abhi ... ! Abhi ! ... Abhi ...Abhi ...ABHI ! ! "

Na re na re...dhirena dhirena dhirena...

Audience start swaying their hands...

Mera har pal ab toh bojhal
Veeran sa, dil yeh har dum

He was reminiscing the moments with her ...


Lakhon hai ghum, tanha hai hum
Kaise sahein itna sitam

her smiles , his smiles, their fights and her tears filled with anguish and helplessness...


Tu milna paaye, hum jee na paaye
Kahin marna jaaye, kaisi hai, kaisi hai bebasi

Dil phir se chaahe Teri hi panaahein
Kahin marr na jaaye zindagi

He found his eyes filled with tears of remorse ...He had lost her...and he cursed himself for that...


Gunaah kiya dil maine, yaar ka todh ke
Gunaah kiya usse ik din tanha chodh ke...

and the song was over ...there were cheers and applauds but Abhi was lost ...he thought, that one day, he hoped that they would be together soon but his hopes has been crashed...His Pragya was no longer his ... She had moved ahead in her life...much more ahead and he was there only, struck in the past , those three years back...

Yesterday night at the reception of CITY HOSPITAL


Pragya is totally shocked to see the personality before her...


Lafz kitne hi tere pairon se lipte honge

Tune jab Aakhiri khat meraa jalaaya hoga


Her eyes turn watery...all the past memories,swiftly come across her eyes, and start making her emotional...afterall he was the LOVE of her LIFE...All the prescription papers and reports start flying, due to the wind and rain...


Tune jab phool kitabon se nikaale honge

Dene wala bhi tujhe yaad toh aaya hoga


Unable to see into his eyes, she just closes her eyes...for a moment.Abhi just watches her in astonishment... He was staring at her, mesmerised by her beauty...he was cursing himself that why he had not realised this feeling before...Finally he had met her...after three long yearning years...he had mixed feelings...he was elated and guilty too...

She is not the same lady...Her face,hmmnn...her spectacles...she was no more wearing her *adorable* glasses !!! ...and she is looking quite stylish...half sleeves,and a saree...Abhi smiles seeing that still there is something in these three years which remains unchanged,her habit of closing her eyes,when he is at her close proximity...


Naa... Aaa...

Teri Aankhon ke dariya ka utarna bhi zaroori tha

Mohabbat bhi zaroori thi bichadna bhi zaroori tha


And like this he was just in his own thoughts,thinking,staring at her continuously...But suddenly he sees a lone tear escaping from her eye...Abhi is puzzled to see her in this state...


Zaroori tha ki hum dono tawaaf-e-arzoo karte

Magar phir arzowon ka bhikharna bhi zaroori tha


He wipes the tear from the corner of her eye, using his thumb...Pragya quickly opens her eyes and follows his hand moment, to see into his eyes...That is the moment when their eyes lock...


Too many questions to answer, too many emotions to deal with and too many feelings to express...


Ahem...urmnm...(the sound is from the people staring at them..)


He just lifts her up and makes her stand...


She was unable to control the emotions,she knew that ...and before another tear could escape her eyes, she heard a voice...


Mumma !


She turns around and is both surprised and happy, to see the child...

"Additi !!"


The child comes running and hugs her...she too hugs back lovingly...afterall the child was her BACCHA...

"Aap yahan kaise bacche ! "

"Madam, actually main yahan pe unhe lekar aaya tha, baby bohut zidd kar rahi thi !"

"Accha hua ki tum use yahan lekar aaye Dev! Waise bhi mujhe shaayad kuch aur din yahan pe rukna padega ..."

She hurriedly holds Aditi and signals Dev to take her to home... She wanted to turn back and

Abhi,shocked and tormented to see this,leaves from there...

She sees that he is gone ! She runs from there...and goes to the wall and leans on it...She recollects their encounter and is disturbed by the flow of emotions in her ...

Abhi is furious and feels sad ... He sits in his car and starts driving crazily...


Wahi hai sooratein apni wahi main hoon wahi tum ho

Magar khoya hua hoon main magar tum bhi kaheen ghum hoon,


He recollects his encounter with her ... He drives faster and faster ...


Mohabbat mein daga kit hi So kaafir the who kaafir hain

Mili hain manzilein phir bhi musaffir the musaffir hain


Tears are forming in Pragya's eyes ,but she is not letting them leave her eyes ...


Tere dil ke nikaale hum kaahan bhatke kahan pahunche

Magar bhatke toh yaad aaya bhatakna bhi Zaroori tha


Abhi in anger dashes a tree and his car is damaged...his head gets a small injury and he storms out of his car and calls his driver to bring a car to his location... He again calls a person and says , "Theek hai main kal aa raha hoon app saari taiyyariyan keejiye"


Mohabbat bhi zaroori thi bichadna bhi zaroori tha

Zaroori tha ki hum dono tawaaf-e-arzoo karte

Magar phir arzowon ka bhikharna bhi zaroori tha


She slides down the wall and closes her eyes finally letting the tears out from her eyes...She doesn't wipe them ...


He goes home and then remembers that today was his engagement with Tanu ! He sighs and thinks to pacify her ... His mansion is deserted and all the guests have left ...Nobody was actually waiting for him... This was happening from past two years ...Nobody knew when, where and why he would go and the members of the family have stopped being concerned fro him... And today Aakaash was there...


"Bhai , aap ese bina bataaye kuch achanak chale gaye the toh hum sab ko fikr ho rahi thi"

Abhi glances around and sees no one ...Tanu and Aaliya have also left ...


"Nahi who main Daadi...ko" Damn it , he had forgotten totally about Daadi , after his encounter with Pragya ! Now anyway it was in vain ... He had another plan for that ...


"Kya bhai? "


"Kuch nahi Aakaash, Good night and kal ke concert ke liye hum jaa rahe hain,so be ready.."


Present at the concert venue


As soon as he finished his concert, he goes into his vanity van, his head was feeling dizzy, he didn't remember when he had properly eaten last time ...He was probably having a hangover due to drinking heavily ...


He freshen ups and then comes out of his vanity only to be surrounded by media and their new controversy about him... He neglected them and started walking to his car , when a question suddenly stopped his feet...

"Sir, suna hai ki aap aapki engagement se achanak kahi gaayb hog aye the aur uske baad ek ladki ko apne bahoon mein pakade hue , ek hospital mein the "


"What rubbish ! Kya bakwaas hai ye ?!!"


"Sir tasveerein kabhi jhoot nahi bolti,aap khud hi dekh leejiye"


He sees himself and Pragya's picture which was clicked at the hospital...he gets angry and snatches the news paper from the journalist and asks them to get out from there ...He stares intently at the picture ...He is seen holding her and thankfully the picture did not show her face ... she was merely recognizable in the picture ...

Tanu sees this news on TV and gets furious , she throws the remote on the TV and shouts angrily.

"Argh ... Teen saal hogaye aur ab tak uss Pragya ka peecha nahi cchoot paaya Abhi se... Main usse chodungi nahi...Kal hamari engagement thi Abhi... Yeh tumne theek nahi kiya..."


The reporters still don't stop and continue interrogating him...


"Sir,aapki love life aur married life main kaafi kuch kisse hue hain, suna hai aapne aapki wife ko khud ...Kya aap ab bhi un se pyaar karte hain?"


"Aur jo gaana aapne aaj cincert main gaaya , use sunke toh yeh lagta ha koi apna dard baayn kar raha hoon, kahi woh shaks aap toh nahi ! Boliye Abhi sir !..."


"Haa, sir , bataayiye, koun hai yeh ladki jo aapse hospital mein mili hain?"


Aakaash comes there and says "Stop it ! No more questions ! Thank you for coming...,Aap ja sakte hain yahan se..."

"Aap please chaliye bhai ..."


Abhi is preoccupied with thoughts of Pragya and sits in his car ...


Yesterday, in hospital


After Abhi left her ,Pragya wipes her tears and composes herself , she washes her face and comes out only to know that someone has been watching from all this time ...


"Tum ?"


"Aap apne dard ko bhula nahi paayi hai...Pehle bhi aap apne takleef ko bayan nahi karti thi...Sab kuch seh leti thi ... Lekin ab ...


"Ab sehti nahi hoon, sirf saamna karti hoon..."


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I hope you enjoyed this chapter...😉

Please hit LIKE buttons and drop your views in the COMMENT section😊.

Please ignore my mistakes,this is not proof read😕

Edited by lasyap3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update, continue soon plz.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --simmi--

Wow! Very nice teaser!


Thanks Simi ! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hailly

Nice update, continue soon plz.


Thank you ... Would do it 😃

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