Can We Start Again?- Three Shots Completed Pg. 5 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Anny90

*claps*

you write amazing!!

you should write more seriously!

" How he notices this difference between the Pragya standing in front of him and the Pragya he was married to. And I can see his longing for that old Pragya. No one and I mean not even one person in these four years ever looked at me that way. And I guess that's what melted my heart."

no one has written this nicely..I have same kind of thoughts in my mind when i see pragya in KKB also!

We're over before we had the chance to begin, Abhi

Thants the second best line!He is being so honest to her that she has ti give in..

you pulled it off the way it should have been!

it is so near to reality!

"Main parinda besabar

Tha uda jo darbadar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjarey ko ghar
Naye mausam ki sehar
Yaa sard mein dopahar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjarey ko ghar"

*song from ek villain*

though it was predictable..it was fun too read.

ah! glad you like my previous comment...and sorry that was not written by me but that song is i was listening at the time i was reading your update..i felt its perfect for your update..

Originally posted by: Lkb79

Oh Renukha, this is so sweet and beautiful. You need to write more stories.

I especially loved this: I am weak now. Throw sticks and stones at me. I won't walk away. I will get a rock and break your head. Yes, I've turned to this kind of horrible person. But the funny thing is everyone sees this as a strength. I can't see it that way for some reason. I missed the old me. The old Pragya who could smile despite all her pain.

We want Pragya to fight back and get angry and get revenge so much because we want her to be strong. But we forget that there is strength shown in rising above it, in not being petty. It's not in her personality to take revenge. This passage was a nice reminder of that,

Kudos on a lovely story. 😊

Originally posted by: Anbhigya

Awsum awsum awsum.. Dis is 1 f d best TS i have read on this KKB forum... :):) *hugs* lots of love* n i want more.. Ha ha... Greedy me!!

Originally posted by: -Tia-

Aww! Loved that they could talk and sort it out. Pragya's POV came out very convincing. Glad she was able to finally let go.

The kisses!! Loved that it was her second kiss! A moment of shock for him... Hahaa

Thanks for the lovely story!

Originally posted by: indi

Wow!!! That was wonderful 👏!!!! Loved it!!!!

Thank you!

Originally posted by: -Martinski-

renuuukha!!! BEST EVER !! I HAVE SO MUCH TO SAY BUT IM TOO EXCITED TO TYPE!

THE DESCRIPTON OF HER STYLE AND HER HOUSE HER NEW LIFE

HER LOVE FOR HIM HIS LOVE HIS REDEMPTION OMG!! !

PERFECT!

Originally posted by: vivkriti

Awesome. Loved it