Abhigya ss-'Changing relations' updated Chap 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys m I am totally new to this forum and just wish to try my writing skills on abhi and Pragya. For starters my writing is based on Aaliya's broken marriage with Purab..

Abhigya SS Changing Relations

It had been one week since the truth of Purab and Bulbul's love came out and so much changed..

Aliya was unable to go to any party or even shopping mall without getting sympathized by people and she hated it..

Aliya was sitting in her room completely frustrated .A knock at her door disturbed her. She looked up to come face to face with that Bhenji..., the very sight of which angered her..

Pragya-"Um.. I just.."

Aliya-"Get out..""

Pragya-"You have not eaten since morning.."

Aliya-"Why do you care I am dead or alive? Stop this fake sympathy .No one will understand what I am going through"

At her scream the whole family came out..

Pragya-"For once I am glad to be at the receiving end of your shouts."Aliya looked up at her in shock.

Pragya-"I don't sympathize with you but I am glad that your marriage with Purab did break.."

Abhi was fuming .."What the heck was she blabbering about"

Pragya-"Not and never for Bulbul but for you Aliya.."

Ali-"What do you mean? "with a are you serious look.

Pragya-"Every girl deserves to be loved by her husband, no matter what.You to deserve a guy who loves you..You are not less than anyone.."

Aliya was surprised to here this.

Pragya-"Trust me when I say this but your parents would be really proud to see you like this..."

Aliya looked completely beliwered and that was when something in her heart changed, somewhere this Bhenji was not so annoying anymore..

Pragya-"It takes great courage to face the world after a broken Rishta. Believe me I had it twice and might have it once more..."

Abhi felt a twinge of hurt at that..

Pra-"I know that you hate the very sight of me and I don't feel really good about it but if you really want to let go of your frustration you can please let it out on me alone.."

Aliya looked dazed. Pragya walked to her and sat next to her..

P-"You were never wrong Aliya.,you have the right to get the person you love. Just because of the way you dress up or your attitude doesn't mean you are unworthy..Its just that Purab was not meant for you..You deserve a better person, the one who sees and loves you for the real you,and I feel you will meet him soon. And believe me your life will become a fairytale.."

"Aliya just let it go you are stronger than you think you are. These tears will never make you week..Don't push it or suppress it...Its not wrong to cry..

That was all it needed and Aliya burst out with tears, those which never came after her parent's death or for anything else..

The family watched with teary eyes as they saw Aliya crying her heart out. Abhi stifled his tears as he saw Aliya crying in Pragya's lap and Pragya silently coaxing her with encouragement. This Chashmish had done something he couldn't and he knew something in their relation changed.

Personally I know many hate Aliya but I wanted to show her as human. She does have flaws but who doesn't...

Please let me know if you want to see this as an SS

Toodles..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very very NICE! 👏
Please continue writing stories - I'd love to read them!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fabulous dear
Its a grt start
Eagerly waiting gor d next update
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Would love to read an ss..
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Loved it very much.
Please continue.
Aaliyah changing because of Pragya liked it very much.
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u should definitely continue super soon =)
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Great story!! I really love the Pragya-Aaliya bonding. You are so right to show it this way - who buy Pragya could better understand a broken-hearted Aaliya? Amazing concept and well written. Would definitely love to see more about how the AbhiGya relation changes with a better bond between bhabhi and nanad :) Thanks for posting!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's very good. I like the concept a lot.
Please continue!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is really nice please continue soon can't wait to read the next part it will be great
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Just loved the way you showed Aaliyah !

Very nice !

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