~Friendly Stranger~ (AbhiGya OS by mina)

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Lovely OS Mina. Loved the part where you described Abhi's jealousy, him walking over to claim Pragya as his wife...wife? Wow! you wrote it well... Ending...is it really an ending...more like a beginning...😉

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: .SajnaVe.
great os

Thanks, glad you liked it! Thank you for leaving a comment 😊

Originally posted by: rutu83
love your writing- pls write more ⭐️

Thank you so much! Haha will try 😊

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: MissAsian
Lol i know i should comment something on Abhigya
but i really loved that stranger and his cheesy lines

Haha awesome!!! So glad you liked the stranger 😆

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA
Lovely os

Thank you Shreya, I really appreciate your comment!! 😊

Originally posted by: suhasini2727
Lovely. ...do write more. ..

Thank you, so glad you liked it!! Will try to write more 😃

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Ravinanaik
amezing

Thank you for your comment! Glad you liked the story

Originally posted by: -MyMy-
I love this! This was so funny and cute. Do write more.

Thanks so much! Really glad you liked the humor and cuteness 😆 Thanks for commenting, I will try to write more 😊

Originally posted by: .logs
awesome os yaar...

Thanks glad you enjoyed the OS! Thank you for commenting 😊

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: JazzyM
Lovely OS Mina. Loved the part where you described Abhi's jealousy, him walking over to claim Pragya as his wife...wife? Wow! you wrote it well... Ending...is it really an ending...more like a beginning...😉

Thanks for your comment Jazzy! Haha so glad the jealousy part worked for you <333 I wished I could've written more detail about jealous Abhi but things just kind of wanted to unsaid 😳 It didn't really feel like an ending but I ran out of ideas so we'll have to see if I can take this beginning somewhere...! Thanks again, I am glad you enjoyed the OS 😊

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vivkriti

@vivkriti

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Amazing OS. Abhigya were rocking

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-DarkSlayer-

@-DarkSlayer-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Hey!

I'm new on the forum and this was the first thing I clicked!

I have to say, I loved it from beginning to end! It was simply fab!

I was thinking that maybe Abhi would interfere at the beginning and make a scene but thank god that didn't happen. I'm not a big fan of predictable story lines so this one was a pleasant surprise.

I loved how you incorporated Tanu's storyline as well as AbhiGya's.

What made it more enjoyable was that we saw a protective Abhi but there was no outright confession. It's perfect just the way it is.

I loved it!

❤️

Raz.

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indi

@indi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

@ Mina ... Thank you! It was awesome ... loved it !!! So Abhi calls it "indigestion"???🤣 !!!! Loved the jealousy!!!! Please give us more 😊!!!

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Shamsa aka Sam

@Shamsaaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

this is absolute amazing enjoyed reading it :)

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Hi Mina I love your fanfics! I just went back and read your back list and yours are my favourite in this forum! Your language is crisp and story line is romantic but not cringey. Really enjoyed it. I was also happy to see that you love Bet Me as well - it's really a modern romantic classic. Please write more, will be eagerly waiting. 😃

P.S. You may have inspired me to try my hand at writing this too...

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