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LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome OS Mina Di!Pls do write more on AbhiGya & pm Me!

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Mina

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: rbb1
nice update, it's good that her dad is here now

thank you! yes it's interesting what he could add to the story, maybe others will run with the idea, i can't think of anything more at the moment

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever
Awesome OS Mina Di!Pls do write more on AbhiGya & pm Me!

thank you dear, sorry i forgot about PMing. i usually only PM for ss/ff, not for os, but maybe next time 😳

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-Eris-

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Aww this is such a cute idea..Abhi needs to be taken down a peg or two and who better than Pragya s dad :) I love the ending but little does he realize he s the one who created this mess and he is getting trapped in his own web .

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

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awesome one shot.

very well written 👏

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indi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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@ mina ... Thank you! It was lovely!!! Really enjoyed that squirming Abhi 😆!!!! Pragya is, as always, the calm sensible one!!!! Abhi, the hot head!!!

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...Shakti...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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unres

first off mina im sooo sorry i didn't get a chance to unres until now (was a little busy with work)

mina this OS literally made my day i was laughing so hard!!

and esp with the illustrations

😆 abhi getting caught in his own taunt and how he was stuttering in front of prags dad 🤣

really loved this OS👏

Edited by shakti_arsha - 10 years ago

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Trisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Nice idea. I like this idea of the father being there, but I really don't want Abhi to be saying such stuff in front of Pragya's father. And I saw that Naved Aslam was dressed exactly like DK.

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Mina

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: samarth300
Nice idea. I like this idea of the father being there, but I really don't want Abhi to be saying such stuff in front of Pragya's father. And I saw that Naved Aslam was dressed exactly like DK.

Thanks Trisha! I really appreciate your reading & comment. Yes you are not alone in being disgusted by Abhi making such comments in front of papaji. And yup the pictures are from Pavitra Rishta, good job recognizing it. Hee hee love Naved Aslam <3

Originally posted by: shakti_arsha
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really excited to read this

dearest Shakti, still awaiting your comment! 😳 😆

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JazzyM

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Eris-
Aww this is such a cute idea..Abhi needs to be taken down a peg or two and who better than Pragya s dad :) I love the ending but little does he realize he s the one who created this mess and he is getting trapped in his own web .

yeah, someone equal in either popularity or money level would bring Abhi down a peg or two. Who better than Pragya's dad.

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...Shakti...

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Posted: 10 years ago

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mina meri jaan unres finally 😆😊

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