ABHIGYA TS : The ONLY SOLUTION pt3@7 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mindblowing update Dear!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon & pm Me!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Lovely story, plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Read all the three parts all together and as usually all r awesome ... Loved ur work Magati ... Plz send me pm whenever u update it :) I really hope nothing will happen to Pragaya ... She is such a sweetheart and I really love it ke Abhi ko uski galti ka ehsaas Hoya hai ... But hate that Aliya ... She is so mean ... Love that how bulbul behave with Abhi it shows her consern for her sister ... Thanks dear :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is really good. so much drammaa. I'm excited to see the next update. PM me please!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Hey read the story in one go. ..awesome it is. . Please update it asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Read all story in one go.
It was amazing.
Please do update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Please continue soon !!!!!!!! I loved the story please please please please please please please please please please please please!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

hello people...

sorry for making you guys wait so much...

i was very busy with college

PS : i have not done any proofreading tho gramatical erors ho sakta hai uske liye sorry


PART 4


" abhi beta , kya hua bahu ko ? aaj ka din hi kharaab hai , aaliya ki shaadi ruk gayi , pragya ka accident " daadi asked abhi

Abhi had just come from giving blood

Abhi hugged daadi and cried out loud " sab meri ghalati hai daadi , sab meri ghalati hai , ye kya dar dia maine daadi , agar usse uch ho gaya tho ?" abhi weeped

" nai beta , aise bolte , himmat rakho , kuch nai hoga bahu ko " daadi patted abhi

Abhi broke the hug

" aakash tera blood group B positive hai na ?" abhi asked

" haan bhai, kyun ?" aakash asked

" pragya ko khoon ki zaroorat hai " abhi said

" bhai aap tension mat lijiye , main khoon dunga " aakash said immediately and went towards the blood donation room

" bhai...coffee ?" purab offered

" nai " abhi said looking at the ICU door

Just then the doctor came out

Abhi rushed to him

" doctor , meri bivi teek hai na?" abhi asked immediately

" jee nahi , unka operation karna zaroori hai " the doctor said

" haan tho kijiye na , kis baat ka intezar hai aapko ?" purab asked

" internal bleeding bohut zyada hai , jab tak wo stop nai hota , hum tab tak operation start nai kar sakte aur agar aise halaat main operation kia tho unki jaan jaa sakti hai " the doctor said

The minute the doctor said jaan abhi got angry and caught hold of the doctor's collar " kuch nai hoga meri chasmish ko , suna tumne ?"

Abhi immediately realised what he said and straightened his collar " sir please , please save my wife " abhi begged

" aap samajne ki koshish kijiye , we are trying our best " the doctor said and left

Abhi looked at the ICU door and walked into it after opening his shoes

He sat next to her and caught her hand

" I am sorry chashmish... please don't leave me , I promise I'll make ti up to you all my life , tum mujhe jo punishment dena chahti ho wo do , par please teek ho jao , I am very sorry , mujhe tumse waise baat nai karna chahiye tha , mujhe tumhaara dil nai dukhana chahiye tha , main tumhaare gunegaar hoon , mujhe sazza do , kuch bi sazza do but please don't leave me , please ut jao , please teek ho jao " abhi cried and kissed her hand

He felt her hand move , so he looked at her immediately but pragya was struggling to breathe

" nai pragya , please don't give up on me " abhi said and ran out

" doctor , usse saas lene main takleef ho rahi hai , she struggling to breathe , please save her , please , I beg you " abhi fell on his knees

The doctors and the nurses ran inside and began checking her vitals

After 15 mins they came out

" unka internal bleeding ruk gaya , we can start with the surgery " the doctor said

Everyone thanked god

" meri bacchii kahaan hai ?" sarla maa arrived

Bulbul went to her immediately

" maa...di operation ke baad teek ho jaayegi , aap shaant ho jaayiye " bulbul said to her maa

" mr mehra , aap please mere saath aayiye " the doctor called abhi and he followed him to his room

" kya hua doctor ?" abhi asked immediately

" iss surgery main kaafi complications hai " the doctor said

" jaise ?" abhi asked

" the most serious is , she can die and agar bach jaati hai tho maybe she never walk again " the doctor said hesitatingly

Abhi sat down , he was shocked

" I cant let her die , please save her " abhi requested

" Mr mehra , hum humaari taraf se poori koshish karenge , aap please inn papers pe sign ki jiye " the doctor said

" kya hai inn papers main ?" abhi asked absentmindedly

" if in case the patient dies then the hospital is responsible , issme likha hai ki aap responsibility le rahe hain " the doctor said

" paanch minute main sign kijiye , main operation ke tayaariyon ka status dekhke aata hoon " the doctor said and left

" kisi din tumhaara sach main accident ho jaayega tho main tumhe nai bachaaunga " abhi remembered his words

" mera bas chale tho main tumhe maar daalunga "

" aaj tumhaara last day hai na ?" he realised the second meaning of his line and cried

He remembered all the times he ill treated her and cried hard

" if in case the patient dies then the hospital is responsible , issme likha hai ki aap responsibility le rahe hain "

He remembered the doctor's words and sobbed

" ye sab meri ghalati hai . ye kya ho gaya ? ye kya kar diya maine " he voiced out and looked at the papers and signed them quietly

" hey bhagwan , plese meri chashmish ko bachaa lo , please usse kuch mat hone dena , please " abhi requested god

" sign kar dia aapne ?" the doctor asked and abhi nodded his head

Abhi caught the doctor's hands " please save her "

" I'll try my level best , have faith in god " the doctor said and left abhi alone

Abhi came out

" kya kaha docton ne betaji ?" sarla maa asked

" kuch nai aunty , aapki beti bilkul tek ho jaaye gi " abhi lied and walked towards the temple

He didn't have it in him to tell her mom that her daughter was struggling for life all because of him

" tum kya bulbul agar chasmish ko kuch hogaya tho main khud bi apneaap ko maaf nai kar paaunga " abhi said and fell on his knees


to be continued


so guys ... i know update chota hai

but i am writing a new story on abhigya so issliye

please comment and give me your feedback

it means a lot to me

love you all

Edited by magati - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Wow!! Thanks for updating this is really good!
Pm me when you finish writing the other abhigya story!!
You are a very talented writer!!!!' 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
All the parts are supper good.. Waiting for the next update.. Plz continue soon..
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