ABHIGYA TS : The ONLY SOLUTION pt3@7 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg buddy y did u stop there i want to read about abhi saving her plz pl z plz continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Too good yaar 😃 👏.. ❤️ed it .. Update it soon.. Eagerly waiting... 😊 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update.
Waiting fr next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
wow yaar it ws fantastic the prologue pragya's dialogue ws superbb...and that allliyyya...grrr😡...nice one update sooon k
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have finally found one FF that I can say is the closest to the actual characters in the show. Since the show pisses me off to the core cause well let's face it, the whole MU is baseless, I wanted to fantasize how the truth would come out. I read many os's and FF's but somewhere in between the characters wouldn't go with the actual ones in the show. So far, ur ff is THE closest in their characterizations with the show ones, which is why I enjoyed ur way of telling the revelation story the best. I enjoyed ur two parts a lot and I hope to read more parts, thank you for sharing it.
-shivani
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
a big thanks for all the comments... Thank you so much for encouraging me sooo much
I am sorry for not replying to your comments because I don't have that much time...
PS : I have typed on my phone so there are chances of gramatical errors and spelling mistakes... So uske liye bi sorry
Now this is no more a two shot ... But I don't know of how many parts it will be
I actually get bored while writing a short story so at that time I might just end this up... So please keep encouraging me
Love you all
PART 2
" hello di , hello?" bulbul asked getting tensed
She started crying uncontrollablly
" what happened bulbul? What did di say?" purab asked getting worried
" di said she can't take this anymore..." bulbul continued crying
ABHI'S INNER TURMOIL
" she was like a sister for him , oh my god, what sort of human am I ??? No after all I did to her I can't be named as a human , I insulted her today very badly, she never slapped me but today she slapped me , I crossed all my limits today , I have broken her beyond repair , what if she tries to hurt herself??? No no she is very strong, she won't do anything that would hurt her family, but today is a different day , I promised her that I will hurt her family , god where is she now , I have to save her " abhi decided
" will you guys stop your drama? Bhai this pragya and bulbul cheated us , this pragya she made us believe that purab loves her so that she can get purab for her sister , she is so cunning" aaliya blamed pragya
" don't you dare say a word against my di , I don't know what I'll do to you , iif you and your brother being so famous did a little background check then you would have known that it was me who worked in purab's office, but no all you people know is to spoil lives , if you guys used if not more than atleast some amount of brains then today my di's life wouldn't have spoilt , her dreams would not have crushed , and don't worry I have never blamed you or your rich rockstar brother for her life, I have always blamed myself for wrecking her life , even purab in that case have hated himself for doing this to pragya di " bulbul said angrilly
" bhai..." aaliya started
" enough is enough aaliya , we can talk about this later , the most important thing right now is where is pragya ? Bulbul please tell me where is pragya ? What did she tell you? I promise I will never hurt her again and you only will marry purab " abhi said
" do you think I am selfish like your sister?" bulbul asked angrilly
" no , you can't be selfish because you are chasmish's sister" abhi said softly
" you know jjiju ?? You don't deserve my sister " bulbul said
" bulbul where is pragya " abhi begged
" you know what even now my di doesn't want you reality to come out , she is coming her to accept all your blames , she feels maa will be angry with her but one day maa will forgive her , she is coming here to accept the crime she didn't commit " bulbul cried hard
Abhi fell on his knees
" i married an angel and I treated her like garbage, how will I apologize? I don't have the guts to even see her face " abhi thought to himself
" bhai these people spoiled my life " aaliya complained
abhi got angry , he stood up
" pragya was right, I have spoilt you by pampering you so much that you have become self centered , don't you realize what we have done ? Maybe you don't, but I understand the extent of my crime, I have married the most beautiful, most loving, most caring girl god has created, I have actually married the girl of my dreams , but what did I do ?? I insulted her almost everyday, I made her life hell , I made her regret marrying me and she bared it all , for whom ? For her family , I married a girl who let go all her dreams for her maa's happiness, I married a girl who continued to pray to god even after knowing that god didn't save her from the problems she was in , I always saw truth in her eyes but I called it hypnotism, god what sort of monster am I ? Yeh kya kar diya Maine ?? I can never forgive myself for all I did to her , and today I crossed all my limits , she slapped me , she will never forgive me , I have lost the precious diamond god gave me " abhi finished
" jiju , even today my di didn't blame you, she has infact never blamed you , she says that whatever you did is for your sister, its out of love, so she was never angry with you , you are lucky to have got my sister and now no matter what I won't let you hurt my sister anymore, its my promise" bulbul said
Just then her phone rang
" what? What are you saying? Which hospital? I'll be coming immediately" bulbul said
" what happened bulbul?" purab asked
" bulbul please tell me what happened?" abhi caught hold of her arms...
To be continued
So people don't forget to give me your feedbacks...
Will be waiting for your comments
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Wow very powerful chapter!! Was waiting so impatiently for the next part of this, very happy to see your update. Awww wow amazing that Abhi is thinking Pragya was the girl of his dreams!! Loved how Bulbul didn't bother to answer Abhi's questions 😆 Hoping Pragya is ok, please keep writing and thanks for posting!! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Hospital??? Cliffy

A very good chapter finally Abhi to his senses

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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
buddy why do u keep me hanging lol...awesome part buddy
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Thank you! Loving this!!! Please continue!


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