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nitarata

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sparikh
That was so beautiful! - very emotional date.
-Sona

Thanks Sona.😊

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Dolly-heart

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: tiaradeol

Dolly, I enjoyed writing every word of it.. But if a reader enjoyed too, it's all worth it.
Thank you so much.
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You are welcome. You can see from all the responses that many loved your work.

Your enjoyment is very evident in your writing.

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MagicalKash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Oh my. This is exactly what I'm waiting for .

You my dear write beautifully, and you need to write more to get us through the long wait we'll have to finally get this scene!

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nitarata

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: MagicalKash
Oh my. This is exactly what I'm waiting for .
You my dear write beautifully, and you need to write more to get us through the long wait we'll have to finally get this scene!

Thank you so much Magical Kash, for those kind words. I know it might a long wait for AbhiGya to get there... 😆

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Arshiishraragna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Wonderfully and beautifully written 👏 Do write more.. will be waiting for it 😃

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Mina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

I think I have never commented on this, but I have to tell you I've read it at least 10 times over the last week. It is such a lovely story. 😊

I really like the bantering dialogue between Abhi and Pragya, showing that they have developed a comfortable friendship. It's just perfect how you sketch in the background of how the year has passed without getting into details. 👍🏼

You show Pragya's underlying distress and pain in a really subtle way, making me feel more and more empathy for her until she finally breaks down. Similarly, the way you show Abhi's thoughts made me more and more convinced of his love for her.

The dream date is very sweet, and that's a very thoughtful choice of song you picked for Abhi! The first time I read the fic I was nearly screaming at the screen when Abhi thought about how 'Pragya needs Suresh' 😵, and that just moments after I was feeling heartache for Pragya thinking about Tannu 🥺.

Anyway the final confrontation in the ending was very well done and so cathartic. I am happy to leave the story with the image of them kissing by the roadside, they have earned it! 👏 But I do hope you will keep giving us Abhigya stories because you're great at them! 😃

Edited by dekhiki - 11 years ago

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nitarata

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: -Yuks-
Such a wonderful OS

Thank you very much.

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nitarata

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: dekhiki
I think I have never commented on this, but I have to tell you I've read it at least 10 times over the last week. It is such a lovely story. 😊
I am honored! Thank you so much.

I really like the bantering dialogue between Abhi and Pragya, showing that they have developed a comfortable friendship. It's just perfect how you sketch in the background of how the year has passed without getting into details. 👍🏼
Ahh I was worried that since it's a one shot story, how I am gonna cover one year and show that they even fell in love in that time...But saying this, you put my burden off.

You show Pragya's underlying distress and pain in a really subtle way, making me feel more and more empathy for her until she finally breaks down. Similarly, the way you show Abhi's thoughts made me more and more convinced of his love for her.
Again, yaar.. You just stole my thoughts.This is exactly was my purpose.

The dream date is very sweet, and that's a very thoughtful choice of song you picked for Abhi! The first time I read the fic I was nearly screaming at the screen when Abhi thought about how 'Pragya needs Suresh' 😵, and that just moments after I was feeling heartache for Pragya thinking about Tannu 🥺.

One of my fav songs, so sweet but sad too.. hmm? Yeah just torturing both of them until granting them their dream.😆

Anyway the final confrontation in the ending was very well done and so cathartic. I am happy to leave the story with the image of them kissing by the roadside, they have earned it! 👏 But I do hope you will keep giving us Abhigya stories because you're great at them! 😃

😳 The kiss couldn't have waited any longer.

Oh my God, Mina, Thank you so much. Seriously, I just woke up and you have made my day. When someone understands where you are coming from perfectly, your purpose is fulfilled. Hugs to you for this.