FF-Luv U Hamesha Pt17 page 16 7/11/05 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
Thank y0u t0
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I'm glad that U guys R loving this FF. I like U am having a ball writing it. No charactors can match upto Ranbir he is so exciting to write about and i feel alive doing this FF.
Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: matwamango

Thank y0u t0

spate22
desaigirl101
miss.sonia
ash_music
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Jaslove
I'm glad that U guys R loving this FF. I like U am having a ball writing it. No charactors can match upto Ranbir he is so exciting to write about and i feel alive doing this FF.

Awwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!😳🤗 I'm glad you enjoy it too!!😃
Shreya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
hey ayesha ,
gr8 update.
m waiting to see what cassanova's comeback will be. i really love ur version of ranbir and kanya.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
i love this ff and eklaveye hes nice
but i imagen eklavye as milind of kayamta😊
becauseto ranu's in one ffi get confused
anyways updtae ooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35

Part 9

Recap-Eklavya and Kanya get their plan into action. Kt is jealous but so was Ranbir. Bhumi and Joydeep were making the most of their time together oblivious to what was going on between Ranbir, Kanya, Eklavya and KT.

Kanya sits with KT trying to get any reactions from her. She looked mad. Good sign. Plan was working. She looked at the dance floor and caught Ranbir looking at her. Stupid fool was dancing away with his barbies. She looks away not being able to stomach the sight. It bothered her until she glanced back at KT. She felt bad for her friend having to put her through this but KT was stubborn. She'd never make a move and Eklavya would never know if KT remotely had any feelings towards him. Kt looked at Eklavya and then at Kanya. She was appalled by their behaviour. Specially Kanya. She couldn't believe her own friend would do this to her.

K-U seem lost in thought KT is there anything wrong?

KT-Like U don't know!

K-KT i'm a little slow. Whats the matter? Did i do anything? Say anything? Did anyone hurt U?

KT-I want to know why U R dancing so close to Eklavya like that?

K-Like what? We R just good friends U know that.

KT-Do I?

K-KT what is it U think thats going on?

KT-U two getting a little too close.

K-Eklavya asked U to dance U said no so he came to me naturally i am his friend but the more U push him away the more prone he is to find another partner. KT U always manage to alienate yourself. As a friend i'm telling U upfront. If U don't do something then i swear i'll make a claim on him.

KT-U wouldn't?

K-Try me! He deserves better KT. I want him to move on with his life but he's stuck in neutral for too long. KT this isn't a game in real life happiness is shortlived. U know that as is life. Have U seen Eklavya this alive before?

KT-NO!

K-He tries too hard with U to make U love him. See him only. He has done some things he isn't proud of but haven't we all. Look at that floor. Most girls there can't wait to get their claws into him. Us women R like vultures we won't spare anything or anyone to get what we want. Look at him even now he wants U and only U. what is it that U want?

KT-Do U love him? He wants U.

K-I love Eklavya but only as a friend KT. He is looking at U notice his eyes. I repeat what do U want? He isn't going to wait forever..... U wait and think because this is ridiculous. U sit here and stew. I'll take Eklavya. After all friendship is the first step to love. By then it will be too late. He brought U guys here for romance and he isn't getting anything from your side. Take risks for once KT and stop playing it safe.

Kanya walks away. Why was KT so stubborn? Women she'd never understand them even with her being one. Always made things so complicated when it was so simple. Ranbir crossed paths with her.

K-Get out of my way.

R-NO!!!!!!!!!

K-I said MOVE!

R-What's your game Kanya? Do U have no shame cavorting yourself with a married man. U really R something. If U wanted a rich guy U could have come to me. I am richer than Eklavya sole heir to my fortune. Gold diggers like U don't need to resort to stealing other women's men. I have a lot more than Eklavya will ever have or give U.

K-U would know shame. Guy like U is an insult to his own family. All your dirty deeds. U disgust me. I'd rather be Eklavya's other woman than yours. I wouldn't want to insult myself being with U. Who knows what kind of illness U might have. U R nothing like Eklavya. U have all the bad qualities that Eklavya doesn't have. He's a million times better than U so don't compare U will fall short. The only thing U both have in common is money and temper thats it. Don't U dare judge me. U have no right to say what i can and can't do. Its my business not yours not get lost before i scream the place down. [Kanya fighting to control her tears] Oh another thing before U come to me accusing me of all sorts have a closer look at yourself. U despise me. I can't believe i ever thought U were a nice guy. U aren't even worth hating. U proposition me i thought i'm beneath U. I guess U will go off with anything that moves.

Ranbir just stands there dumbstruck. He was on fire and some of what Kanya said hurt him a great deal nobody but Kanya had ever spoken to him like that before. He could see the hurt in her eyes. Part of him wanted to believe she deserved it for using Eklavya but he knew that he had crossed the limit. She just wound him up. She claimed she wasn't a materialistic kind of girl but here she was trying to hook up with Eklavya. He knew his friend was hurt and looking for solace but Kanya was the wrong girl to be doing this with. He had a good mind to pound some sense into Eklavya. He looks at the bar. Aditya bhaiya was busy getting hammered. He had to talk to his filmy brother. He didn't know what to do with his intense feelings.

R-Bro i need to talk to U.

A-Tell me whats the problem?

R-Its that witch! Kanya! I've been trying to do what i do best be with my women but since i met her i can't think straight.

A-Then do something about it. Go tell her she's making U mad or ask her out!

R-R U kidding? I asked her if she wanted a sugar Daddy and she just insulted me straight in my face. I got to save Eklavya from her clutches. I don't think he knows how dangerous Kanya is.

A-She's only a small thing how dangerous can she be?

R-Very! I don't know why but i keep getting angry when Eklavya touches her. He's my friend but what is wrong i don't know. What do i do? I can't even enjoy myself here! I keep focusing on her.

A-I think all this hate is turning U soft towards her. U talk about her alot. Hatred is the next step to love.

R-WHAT? I think the booze has gone to your head. I will distract myself and won't even look at her calling me filth. I'll show her filth.

She walks back towards Eklavya who was already dancing with some random woman obviously trying to pull. She looked in KT's direction. The message looked like it was finally sinking in Good. Eklavya looked at Kanya for help and she did what a best friend did. Help! Both dance in each other's arms.

E-So how is it going? R U ok?

K-That wife of yours is giving me serious migraines. She knows she wants U but is scared that she'll get hurt. She doesn't trust her kismet.

E-I have to go to her.

K-Let her come to U. we just need to push her. I kind of mentioned that friendship was one of the first steps to love and if she didn't do something i would.

E-Kanya!!!!!!!!!

K-Sorry!!! What was i supposed to say? But fear not its coming together. U just need to really be touchy feely with me. This is so uncomfortable Eklavya but if it works which i have full faith then its worth it.

E-U really R a good friend Kanya. I'm sorry for all this.

K-Don't be but please never ever cheat into marrying anyone else. I am dead set against it but i do understand why U did it.

Eklavya pulls Kanya really close towards him. Kanya buries her head against Eklavya's shoulders hiding her face a little. She see's Ranbir from the corner of her eyes. He was giving his trademark smirks which was replaced by this look of anger. Eklavya caressed Kanya's bare back with Kanya blushing a deep red. She gave him a little kiss on the cheek. Noticing KT's discomfort. KT couldn't take this any longer. She went over towards the floor.

K-Idiot!

E-Sorry i didn't meam.................

K-Not U RANBIR! Kamina. He's been staring at me for ages. He looks like he wants to kill me.

E-U and Ranbir huh! Whats the deal? U don't love him right?

K-Please LOVE him he isn't even worth hating. He's bought into us being together. We must really be that good if he thinks U can play away.

E-I can tell he's hurt your feelings. Don't take to heart anything he says its all talk. He's really a nice guy.

K-Please i nearly fell for that when we got stuck in the storm but he showed his true colours. I don't want to talk about this just do what U R doing KT is coming over here. Don't look.

E-So is Ranbir! I think he likes U.

K-I don't have time for him but KT looks like she's going to slap me. Eklavya i'm scared. For U and for me.

E-So am I. Where R Joydeep and Bhumi?

K-I saw them leave. Do U think KT will kill me first and then U or will she make her move.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
Di, you have to end it there. I can't wait for KT's reaction. Wonderful chapter. Enjoyed Kanya's dialogues. Well done.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
oh my god i loved everyone word of it
it was just wonderful,brilliant,brilliant,brilliant,cool,awesome,
i could just go on and on complimenting your ff & updates
plz plz plz lz plz plz plz plz plz plz continue
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: desaigirl101

oh my god i loved everyone word of it

it was just wonderful,brilliant,brilliant,brilliant,cool,awesome,
i could just go on and on complimenting your ff & updates
plz plz plz lz plz plz plz plz plz plz continue
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

Well keep an eye out for tomorrows episode. it will rock u off your feet. This FF is too full of DRAMA.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
noooooooooooo!!! u had to end there.i want more.
cannot wait for the nxt one.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
Thanks for updating!!!! But did you have to end it there?!!! 😭 I can't wait for the next part.😃
Shreya

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