FF-Luv U Hamesha Pt17 page 16 7/11/05 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
yay i finally logged in!!
rahima dee you have made me totally happy reading your update
left me in suspense i loved it!!
you had to end it!!
kanya's dialoges were simply the best..
ha i found the last scene funny wen both rannu n KT are cumin towards them!
now all you gotta is update soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
why why why
why did u end it there?
it rocked i loved it,...
pls pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
Speaking of continuing soon, KC please update your FFs as well. There are some unfinished ones, I forgot the names but please continue them soon. I'm still waiting.😉😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44

Part 10

Recap-Ranbir and Kanya get into another argument with Ranbir accusing her of being a god digger. KT is burning with jealousy and Ranbir just wants to snap Eklavya and shake some sense into Kanya. But both knew they had to do something and separate the two before things heated up.

Kanya looked a little bit nervous as she didn't know if she went a little bit too far. She'd never helped anyone get jealous before just to realize their love. She couldn't let go of Eklavya as she found him a shield against her own fears but it didn't help with him being just as nervous if not scared. She stayed frozen in his arms still looking at a marching KT. Eklavya had his gaze on Ranbir. He'd never seen the guy move so fast. He quite enjoyed messing with his friend and deliberately placed his head on Kanya's back and kissed her there. He looked at Ranbir. Yep that defiantly got the reaction he was hoping for. Looks like there was fire on both ends. Kanya and Ranbir. This should be fun. He just hoped Ranbir didn't punch his lights out not that he was scared but they both were famous for their temper.

K-Eklavya R U trying to get me killed on purpose. KT doesn't look like she's in the mood to greet us but hit us. Stop it.

E-Good maybe this time i will get a reaction from her. U just play along Kanya.

K-Play along i'm too scared. U should be too. This could break your marriage. Don't talk now she's behind U.

KT pats Eklavya on the shoulders while Ranbir twirls Kanya round to face him and gives her a the shock of her life a kiss that lasts a long time. KT and Eklavya have a little awkward moment but she finally confesses that she loves him and can't bare seeing him flirt with Kanya nor touch her. It should be him touching her not Kanya.

KT-Eklavya ab bohut hogayi hain. I can't do this. I love U Eklavya. I have done so for a few days maybe longer i don't know how all this happened but U never believe in me. Always suspicious of me and Laksh.

E-Well it took U long enough.

KT-U think its easy for me to say all this. Kanya kept on pushing and U touching another woman like this. How could you? Do U hate me that much? What the...................

They turn round to see an embarrassed Kanya slap Ranbir across his face.

K-U R so inhumane. I despise U. How could U?

With that she runs off. Fuming. She had never felt so violated and infuriated by Ranbir's actions she knew he could sink low but this. She couldn't think but she couldn't be in the same room as Ranbir. She was feeling many things at the same time. Love. Hate. Confusion. But the one that overrides all these emotions was the feeling of being used to prove a point. She ran outside in the rain but with her heels she barely made it that far.

KT-Ranbir how could U?

R-What?

KT-She's not the type of girl U can mess with like that. Do U have any idea what U just did?

R-It was just a kiss! Chill bhabhie dear. She is a tease. She said i was cheap but look at her after your husband like a rash.

KT-She's an Indian woman not these women that give into your whim. U just took something she holds dear. A kiss is so personal one that is shared by 2 people that love each other not used to prove a point or score. U just violated her. I know very well what that feels like. U deserve another slap. I have to go after her. KT runs to try and find Kanya.

E-That was uncalled for Ranbir. She was just helping me with KT and U did this to her man. I'm ashamed of U. We weren't kissing or doing anything extreme that would hurt anyone but U. i could Kick U man. Kanya is just a simple girl just like KT. In fact she wasn't comfortable with all this. For my sake and to see her friends unite she did this. Man she has feelings for U but after this stunt i wouldn't blame her if she never even looks at U again. If i had time i'd knock some sense into U.

Both of them go in search of Kanya and KT in their cars in the rain. Ranbir throughout that moment had a chance to think about what he did with the pin finally dropping. He was now filled with regret. Why did he have to act on impulse. He was trying to show Kanya what a good catch he was but why did he care so much. If anything happened to Kanya he couldn't take it/ he didn't know the answer to why but all he knew was that he had to make sure she was safe.

R-Eklavya i really am sorry.

E-Its not me U should be saying this to. But why?

R-I didn't like her with U. holding her like that.

E-Do U love her?

R-I don't know i've never been in love before. All i know is that i can't bear to see her with another man. But when i'm with her i get taken over with all these emotions that i've never felt before and she drives me mad.

E-U better hope she does nothing stupid. She has been through hell and back. She never mentions this to anyone but her childhood wasn't all that. KT and she were drawn to each other by this common ground. U R my friend and so is she.

R-Look over there. There's some guys surrounded. Kanya!

E-KT!

Kanya and KT are surrounded by gundas trying to force themselves on the girls. They followed them from the club. One guy had Kanya firmly gripped. He'd slapped her about a fair bit after she gave a fight. KT tried to help her but got caught. Eklavya and Ranbir get out of their car and arrive to the scene for the rescue.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
Oh my god that was awesome!!!!!!!!
really truely it was brilliant cool good great awesome
loved every word of it
i can't think of any more words to compliment it
plzzzzzzzz update soooooooooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
Awwwww, did you have to end it there?!!!!😭 Thanks for the update!!😃 Can't wait for the next part.
Shreya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47

wow what an update so much double I say triple drama @ once yaar😃

👏😳 totally loved it....😊 what a cliff hanger you left off @ so wanted to know what happened next...
pls yaar update soon😃 all geared up for the dishum dishum....😆 wonder who will strick 1st hmmm ranvir or eklavya🤔 to save their lady love...
Edited by Jaslove - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jaslove

wow what an update so much double I say triple drama @ once yaar😃

👏😳 totally loved it....😊 what a cliff hanger you left off @ so wanted to know what happened next...
pls yaar update soon😃 all geared up for the dishum dishum....😆 wonder who will strick 1st hmmm ranvir or eklavya🤔 to save their lady love...

Today will be the last day i update for 16 days coz Ramadan is an important month and i need to focus all my enerygy on this month. Hope U don't mind guys
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49

Part 11

Recap-KT finally confesses to Loving Eklavya. Ranbir kisses Kanya on impulse with Kanya gifting Ranbir back with a slap. She runs off in the night. KT scolds Ranbir and runs after her. Ranbir feels bad and Ekalavya go in their car to find Kanya. Kanya and KT ar surrounded by hooligans.

Kanya looked at the gang of men that had surrounded them. She put up a fight but by now 2 of them pinned her down to the floor. KT was screaming as it brought back memories she'd tried to forget. Both felt so helpless. KT was held by another 2 as they made her watch. While the other stood by keeping watch. Poor Kanya they were in the middle of nowhere. There wasn't anyone there. Kanya struggled. One guy reached for her lips she bit him hard as he bled he gave her a punch. She winced in pain but she didn't care. All she knew was it was her fault KT was in trouble and reliving her own nightmare. Kanya tried to scream for help.

KT looked at the scene unfold actually she held on to her saree and tried to stop them from disrobing her. Stupid asian clothes U couldn't even move in them. As she looked on she saw Eklavya and Ranbir. Kanya didn't notice them at all she was too busy trying to get the guys off of her. All 5 were laughing.

Ranbir wasn't at all happy with the sight he saw before him. He was livid and had murder on his mind. He got into action and rushed to Kanya's side. He took both guys out with his boxing skills as he used to work out in the ring. He didn't think just kept on punching. H e looked at Kanya on the floor and knelt by her side. She struggled to move as he could see the bruising around her arm, her legs. She wasn't able to move and just collapsed in Ranbir's arms.

Eklavya had his very own street fight. Nobody got away touching his wife and certainly not his friend. He was blinded with rage. He did alot of damage to the 3 guys but he didn't see a forth guy coming past with a knife aiming to stab Eklavya. KT got in the way shielding Eklavya from harm and taking the weapon into her back. She screamed in pain. By then the 4 guys ran off but 2 lay on the floor where Ranbir knocked them down. Eklavya held KT in his arms and rushed her to the car as did Ranbir. They called for backup to make sure the 2 on the ground had what they deserved.

Ranbir drove the car as Eklavya was in no state to drive. Eklavya made sure he left the knife where it was as it could make the bleeding worse. He wasn't a doctor but from past experiences he knew what to do. He spoke to KT trying to let her know he was there for her. KT did manage to look at Eklavya and tell him she loved him alot. Immediately the paramedics where ready for their casualties and took KT and Kanya to seek medical help.

The police came by after 30 minutes to take their statements in GOA hospital and let them know that Ajit and Arjun were identified and were in the Goa jail where they will be spending the night. They were working on finding the other 4.

Ranbir And Eklavya

Both waited impatiently for news on Kanya and KT. Ranbir never knew what it was like to lose someone he loved. He was too young when his Dad passed away and never even met his Grandfather. His mother had always shielded him away from danger being her only son. Ranbir for the first time knew what it was like to lose someone U love. He loved Kanya. He didn't know how it happened. When it happened but that Chipkali was all he could think about. What he feared the most was losing her and if not that her rejecting him. He'd never been rejected. He just prayed she was safe. He looked at Eklavya and knew exactly what was going on in his friends mind. He knew how much he loved KT.

Eklavya on the other hand knew very well how it felt. He never knew his father and when he did he didn't know what to believe. He lost his mother when he was a child and adopted by his Gautam uncle who he deemed as his real father. They gave him so much love and attention that he never felt left out. He missed out on love but he couldn't lose KT. Not now that he found her again. Both friends sought comfort with each other being their rock.

E-U know tonight was supposed to be the night to remember. Well fate has a funny sense of playing with us. If i lose KT i don't know what i will do. She's my life.

R-All i can say is pray. Pray like U used to before all these problems got in the way. I can only imagine this feeling bro. I've only just realized how much Chip. I mean Kanya means to me. She took a lot of beating man. She fought like the fighter she is. KT is stronger than any woman i've seen. She'll pull through. For U she'll have no choice.

E-Who would have thought us two loser's would be sitting here out of our mind with worry that too for women we thought couldn't stand us.

R-Kanya still can't stand me bro. U hang in there. KT will be fine. I don't know if i should call anyone let them know.

E-Don't bother. This waiting is killing me. U know Ranbir i wouldn't mind praying U pray with me maybe they will be answered.

R-Pray i've never prayed before.

E-Then maybe its about time U did for Kanya.

R-For Kanya anything.

So both friends pray hard in the hospital temple for keeping both Kanya and KT safe. Ranbir for the first time actually prayed that if a life was to go then it be his not Kanya's as she's so innocent and it should be sinners that pay for their crimes. Eklavya for the first time in ages held his own ritual he used to do before he turned bad. For KT he was willing to change and not let his bad deeds affect her. Karma had a way at biting U when U leat expected it and usually it affected those U love than the sinner being punished.

They headed back to the ward and had news on KT and Kanya after 3 hours of waiting. Neither friend got a wink of sleep. The nurse had informed Ranbir who claimed he was Kanya's fianc just so he'd get info on her progress that She would be fine. She needed a lot of bed rest and suffered from major bruising, which will be very sore and they dealt with minor bleeding. Other than that she was fine but she may need to see someone about what happened.

Eklavya found out that had he been any later bringing KT in she might have died but she was safe. Her wound would heal. She needed to stay at least a day or two in hospital to recuperate. He could see her but wasn't going to be able to stay long with her until her drugs wore off and just for hygiene purposes due to overcrowd of patients/visitors.

Both saw Kanya and KT and could breath a sigh of relief. Eklavya wasn't going to let KT out of his sight and Ranbir had promised himself to be there for Kanya and tell her his real feelings that he was denying for a long time.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
really really good part👏

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