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Part 7

Recap-Vaidehi begins her plotting to make Eklavya, Laksh and KT's life a misery. Anyone that hurt her aunt Tripti had to pay. Besides she loved toying with people's mind made it so much fun. Ranbir started getting feelings for Kanya. To nip it before he was in too deep he made Kanya feel cheap by his nasty remarks. Kanya in return retaliated.

1 month Later

Shantiniketan

During the whole month Laksh and KT try to stay away from each other but Vaidehi pushes them together in every turn. Making any bond between Eklavya and KT difficult. KT has since forsaken her love for Laksh for her future with Eklavya despite Eklavya's tough love approach. He was hurt more than anything and had adopted Ranbir style attitude towards both KT and others around him. Eklavya only showed his real self to Kanya and Ranbir who were lost to each other from the corner of the world.

Laksh felt bad that he had to rely on KT for advice on his family life and wife. He never did things right in the eyes of Vaidehi. She always complained. He sure wasn't giving her the rights of a wife as he wasn't comfortable with her nor got over his feelings for KT. He didn't think it would be fair on her. Vaidehi didn't care she was just riled up that Ranbir went back on his words and wouldn't accept her. Apparently he didn't like used goods or have any relations with married women. He betrayed her and nobody got away double crossing her like that. Ranbir had another thing coming and would pay. She just needed to find his weakness which were his family. She'd strike when the time was right.

L-KT i know i keep coming to U but i don't know who else to turn to.

KT-Laksh Vaidehi needs to know her man isn't going to betray her and still keep going to his ex. This is hurting both our marriages. Eklavya thinks we R together and U being here all the time coming to me doesn't help. Try to understand we are married to different people. Ones that R nothing like us. It will take time to get to know them well. Just give them a chance.

L-I try to but its hard.

KT-Nobody said it was going to be easy. U have to forget me. As for friendship it can't happen.

L-KT not our friendship.

KT-Its a sacrifice i'm willing to make for my marriage. [Laksh holds KT's hand]

L-KT please.

KT-Its not that i want to break our friendship Laksh but U R too dependent on me thats not done. Even Kanya agrees she's the one that told me that to gain something sometimes U have to lose something. I decided to lose us forever.

L-I can't lose U as a friend KT. [Eklavya enters the scene watching Laksh pull KT towards him in an embrace which was a goodbye hug]

E-U 2 again. Can't U at least wait while i was out. Everytime U R together behind my back. How obvious do U want to make it?

KT-Eklavya its not what U think.

L-Both of us...................

E-No need to discuss your dirty deeds. I guess i should really leave this sham of a marriage. Make it easier for the 2 of U. no i won't do that KT U need to do something really extreme to get the man U want.

KT-Eklavya please listen to me. [She runs after him]

By then its too late Eklavya storms out of the house and KT is left in a flood of tears. Kanya comes by to see Eklavya who is outside kicking the air in his rage.

K-Someone's angry! U won't hit me will U?

E-Don't be silly Kan U know i'd never do that despite what my family think.

K-KT and U have another row?

E-That clear huh?

K-I can tell when U hurt Eklavya we have been friends over a year. I came to thank U for that business post U put up for me i can't thank U enough.

E-Well U R capable and i gave references to Malika aunty and she is in agreement. Your biggest problem will be Ranbir think U can handle him.

K-It will be my pleasure. Besides you'll be there every step of the way. Eklavya i have a favour to ask.

E-Anything for my dear friend.

K-Please keep KT happy. I can't see her upset. I know there is a love of baggage and its understandable that KT and Laksh will see each other U do live under the same roof. Go away on a break on a honeymoon.

E-I have business to run.

K-Excuses when will U learn U can't hide away forever. Get away from here, from Laksh, start working on your marriage. U love KT right?

E-Yes.

K-Then prove it and don't be so harsh on her. Or lose your temper. Be cool calm and collected. Go on a business outing and mix it with pleasure. I can help with KT and get U both started on getting your love life on track. Just follow my lead and please don't think i'm after U if i get a little too close ok.

E-Kanya U naughty girl. I guess U have been paying attention to whats wrong. Fine U R coming with us in this outing and learn the trade of how business is done. So planning to do what? Ranbir told me to play hard to get.

K-U get jealous whenever Laksh touches KT or even talks to her. Well we need to get her to do the same thing only with me. Ranbir is an idiot. Grade A duffer. He can't keep a woman and U R taking advice from him.

E-U have a point.

K-Just make sure Laksh isn't anywhere with us please. We can take Bhumi and Joydeep with us and that way U can mend some bridges with them.

E-U R a good friend.

K-I know. U R so lucky.

E-Ranbir will be there in Goa. U guys can't stand each other.

K-Then the fun has only just begun. I have a score to settle with him. Please don't tell him i'm going with U i want to see his face. It will be a Kodak moment.

E-I better go and get the whole thing organized. I'll go get Joydeep and take Laksh with me. He needs Vaidehi to keep him busy. Don't worry about Ranbir i'll keep it a secret. I'm not getting caught in your fued with him. Its nasty and quite frankly U guys scare me.

K-U R so evil. U R the same as him with your temper and say i'm scary have U seen yourself in slow motion. I'll go and have a chat with KT.

Kanya goes upstairs and see's KT crying holding a picture of Eklavya. She was talking to herself not knowing what to do.

K-KT stop this crying. Its all U ever do. I can tell U and Eklavya had another argument but U need to see it from his view. Laksh is your ex and any husband would find it threatening if what was between U is unfinished. KT look at me. U still haven't allowed Eklavya in your heart. Without that your words mean nothing. Its action as much as words. U say so much but your eyes and heart don't say anything.

KT-Kanya what am i supposed to do. Laksh is everywhere. Eklavya can't get passed me and Laksh as history he thinks we R having an affair. Do U know how much that hurts. His words cut through me.

K-He can be hurtful sometimes KT. He is like this coz he loves U 2 much. He probably feels like a caged animal keeping his feelings bottled up. KT its crunch time and u need to figure out what U want. DO U WANT UR MARRIAGE TO WORK? OR DO U WANT LAKSH?

KT-Laksh is my past i can't change that. Eklavya is my future. He's my husband.

K-Then see him as your life, love and soul accept him as your husband. He might not be your first love but he can be your last. Allow him here[points to her heart]. Give him a place there before it is too late. He will wait for U but for how long KT? He is a human too. Everyone has their limits. He loves U more than his own life. Willing to go through any lengths that U will never know. Love him back. Let him see how much U love him. I have to go KT but its been a month and U guys R worse off than when U married. Remember love can't be held by anyone and by restricting yourself U will only hurt yourself and those around U. just feel don't think. Bye KT.

KT thinks long and hard about what Kanya said to her. She decides that Kanya is right. She didn't give herself fully to Eklavya but she will try and just only think about Eklavya and not feel sorry for herself. She just prayed it wasn't too late. How could she be so blind. KT was greatful she had a friend like Kanya that was there for her.

Ranbir-NANDA HOUSE

It was a month and Ranbir was still missing Kanya. He tried to fill that void like he usually did with women and booze nothing worked. He thought about her a lot especially the stormy night which was the last day he saw her. He saw the hurt in her eyes and it be replaced by rage at him. Nobody challenged him like she did or even speak her mind. The beginning of the months was the hardest but he only knew the girl a few days and she'd left such a big impression on him that he was still thinking about her. He hoped wherever she was she was happy making someone else feel bad.

Ranbir didn't dare bring up Kanya in front of Eklavya as he feared his friend would tease him mercilessly. He couldn't let on how he was feeling not to anyone. He was in his mothers bad books as he was her only son she banned him from late nights but with Eklavya going on this business trip she was ok with it. Aditya bhaiya[His cousin who was like his own brother was also his managers at his empire. He was happy to get away from his evil vamp wife Astha] was coming with him to chaperone. He felt like a kid needing a minder. His mother was on his case about marriage the whole month. He was just glad to get away from his mad family.

R-Bro please let me do my own thing when i'm in GOA.

A-Malika Chachi will kill me. Gundi jaisi hain. She sounds murderous when she was lecturing U over your countless women. I love my life too much my brother to face her wrath. I will follow U like a shadow. But don't worry U will have space to do your own thing.

R-Ok fine. Bhabie won't be on your case and U can go sight seeing. While i mix business with pleasure.

A-Don't have too much fun Chachi took rein of the business away from U for a month to teach U a lesson don't go blow it in her face otherwise U will be banned for life.

R-Don't worry bro i have no plans to do such things. Eklavya will be there. He's bringing his family there well his wife and brother-in-law should be fun.

A-U ready to go?

R-All packed up. Goa will see the party people coming.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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This FF is also posted in the Kyunki saas bhi khabie bahu this forum but i posted it here as it was also about Rankan
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwwww this is soooooooooooo awesome
Brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love every word of it!!!!!
Please continue sooooooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I can't wait to read what happens next!!!😃 Please continue soon. This FF is very well put together. Ranbir and Kanya will see each other in Goa.😆
Shreya
Edited by spate22 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i think i dont have too say
how the part was
i just want to say updtae
soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 8

Recap-KT and Kanya have a heart to heart about Eklavya and Kanya advices KT to let Eklavya in and to stop fighting with her emotions. Forget Laksh and concentrate on being with Eklavya. While Kanya and Eklavya hatch a plan to unite KT and him together. Laksh has difficulty dealing with Vaidehi. Ranbir takes Aditya bhaiya with him as his Mom is having difficulty trusting Ranbir.

GOA-NEXT DAY

Joydeep, Eklavya, Ranbir and Aditya sort out their business duties. Their management course was going great guns. They managed to address any problems they may have in their workforce and how to further their companies. It was best for them to go on such courses to better them as businessmen and allowed them to meet other businessmen like them. It was like a male bonding session with their goals that made them come together. They finished early so had time to spend with their wives/girlfriends. In Aditya's case it was spending time away from his wife which was heaven compared to spending any time with Astha the lady was a save driver.

J-Eklavya this was a great gift for Bhumi. We needed to get away.

E-I know. Joydeep U need some time for romance too.

R-Romance this coming from U.

E-Marriage changes U.

R-So things any better with U and KT?

E-No thanks to U. Ur flop ideas R not working.

R-My flop ideas all came from Adi bhaiya. It works for me all the time.

E-Yeah well U don't exactly keep all your women U dump them after U had enough of them.

J-Ranbir keep toying with girls like that one day a girl will toy with U and then U will really feel it.

R-Look guys never going to happen. I know U guys R married and happy with the one woman me variety is what i crave. There's no woman born that can tame me and make me want settle down or break me.

E-Never say never Ranbir. I know one person that wants to break U in half and thats not all.

R-Who?

E-U will see.

R-Whatever. Many have claimed this none succeeded. If i don't break her then my name isn't Ranbir Nanda.

A-Thats his usual last words. U need to think of something original.

R-Like your dialogues and ideas bhaiya! [Laughs at his brother]

A-Joke all U like Ranbir but don't come running to me for ideas. [Pretends to look hurt]

J-U guys R so funny. If Bhumi heard U Ranbir she'd make your life unlivable. She can't stand guys like that anymore. Please don't say things like that in front of her it will kill the mood.

R-Don't worry i won't Eklavya will kill me if i did anything to upset the girls.

E-No jokes Ranbir. Bhumi's temper is like nothing U have ever seen.

R-So tell me who U have roped in to help U with KT.

E-U will see. Actually i'm thinking of having an affair with a dear friend of mine and KT'S.

R-I see U have learnt from the master. Who is the lucky lady thats turned my friend to the dark side?

E-All will be revealed in good time. KT and i aren't gelling well so i thought i'd spice up my marriage.

R-Cool

E-Wait until U see who it is it will shock U for life.

At the Hotel

The girls had a bonding session of their own. Kanya, KT, Bhumi went to a spa and got facials, manicures, pedicures the works including massages. They spent most of their time gossiping about their husbands likes and dislikes while Kanya only spoke about Eklavya just to get KT to notice that now was the moment to only think about Eklavya and herself. She threw in Ranbir to the frame as she couldn't wait to make his time here a nightmare.

B-I can't believe Eklavya bhaiya actually ever thought of bringing us girls here. Joydeep and I needed the break. He's always busy but what a gift.

K-KT is so lucky. I can feel all my tension gone from my forehead.

B-KT U R very quiet is everything ok?

KT-U guys talk i'm just thinking. [about Eklavya and how to approach him romantically. Its not like she could just go up to him and be a lover. She found all this uncomfortable. She'd managed to push Laksh out of her heart but opening herself to Eklavya wasn't going to be easy]

K-Eklavya is on her mind. Don't worry i will keep Eklavya to myself. So no need to worry. [Looks at KT with a smile knowing full well that her gentle mention of Eklavya was getting on KT's nerves. Good now to put all this to good use]

B-I thought KT and Bhaiya were here to work on their marriage.

K-KT doesn't have those feelings for Eklavya but for Laksh. She's having difficulty accepting him fully. I keep telling her to allow him in. Otherwise someone will steal him as he's not been claimed by anyone.

B-We R all women KT and trust me Eklavya bhai is a bruised soul hurt too often by women mostly those he loves dearly and respects. How much more can he take? Laksh is your past. Look at me i'm living proof of all this. Remember Abhir and Joydeep. Now i love Joydeep more than my own life.

KT thinks this is so true. Kanya has a point and knowing full well what Eklavya went through. She just didn't know how to how to make Eklavya hers. With Laksh it just happened she never thought about how just went along with the flow. She never once expected she'd have to do something for Eklavya. Kanya was talking too much about Eklavya and giving small digs. It was so unlike her. What was going on in that head of Kanya's?

K-U R looking radiant Bhumi married life does suit U.

B-I never thought i'd ever be this happy with Joydeep but i am. I can vouch for marriage to anyone in love and out of love.

K-Marriage hmmmmmmmmmm. I hope U guys stay like this forever. U guys were meant to be together.

B-Thanks and I hope U and KT get to be as happy as i am.

K-I hope so. KT stop worrying and chill.

KT-Chill how my own husband doesn't trust me.

K-Then show him something that will make him think twice. Looks like i will have to do something drastic to show U what will happen if U don't.

Night out

Everyone gets together. Kanya specially makes sure that she dresses a little provocatively and make a late entrance in style after all she didn't do things by halves. Shame she wasn't used to dressing like this. For Eklavya and KT she'd do anything and if this brought the couple to their destination and become one so be it. She knew Ranbir would be at this party with his women. He didn't bother her one bit. She just wanted him to get a taste of his own medicine but that would have to wait until her mission KT Love was completed.

KT was already there with Eklavya sat there like a lemon out of her depth. Bhumi and Joydeep were already in each other's arms not being able to keep their hands off each other. Ranbir was the party animal and dancing away with the ladies while Aditya bhaiya was at the bar drinking cocktails. Kanya made her grand entrance. She moved towards Eklavya and made him dance with her on the floor with music blaring. KT looked at the 2 feeling anger bubbling. KT liked the look of that her plan was working.

Ranbir noticed Kanya with Eklavya and was also burning up. He couldn't focus on the women he was with but stared at Kanya who was looking really hot and Eklavya was enjoying her company a little too much. They change partners as Ranbir has Kanya in his arms.

R-U here! R U following me?

K-I have better things to do with my time. Bigger fish to fry.

R-Please there is no big fish but me.

K-Dream on. Eklavya brought me here!

R-He took mercy on U.

K-Well whatever i don't care. Because i love him.

R-Love him. He loves KT.

K-Not for long. I won't stop until i get him. Now if U excuse me i have a partner waiting for me.

R-I will not let U take advantage of Eklavya.

K-Do what U must but he will be mine. Now get out of my face. Your fanclub R waiting for U Casanova. Great i have to wash my hands. Touching U i've just made my hands dirty. I wonder if theis stench will wash off.

R-Stench! U insulting me? How dare U? my name is Ranbir Nanda. I will make U pay for this U cheap piece of dump. U. u. u.....

K-Cat got your tongue. [tuts], U can do better than that a person like U can only come back with filth as that is whats on your brain and your mind poor Ranbir comeback with a winner for now my point. Happy hunting!

With that Kanya leaves with the biggest grin on her face. Thought he could take her out well not in this lifetime. Plan was working KT was looking green and Ranbir was unable to comeback with a winning insult. She hated seeing him with all them women round him but she brushed those feelings aside and concentrated on the job ahead.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I just read 3 chapters in one go. I'm loving the Rankan part more. Love your diction and style. Looking forward to Goa rendezvous. Thanks.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow!!! The story is heating up. Kanya is so adorable. Loved her dialogues with Ranbir. Casanova! Yeah she got the right word. Can't wait for Kanya making Ranbir a "play thing". This Eklavya too needs to be taught a lesson. I don't like the way he got KT.

Edited by GGG3 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: GGG3

Wow!!! The story is heating up. Kanya is so adorable. Loved her dialogues with Ranbir. Casanova! Yeah she got the right word. Can't wait for Kanya making Ranbir a "play thing". This Eklavya too needs to be taught a lesson. I don't like the way he got KT.

I am also Loving Kanya and Ranbir more as they R so fun to write about. Eklavya is adorable and love makes us do crazy things😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome update!!!!😃 Please continue soon.

Shreya

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