SS:TUJHSE NARAAZ NAHI ZINDAGI CHAPTER:6 Last part UPDTD PG:67 22/09/16 - Page 27

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Hey Aazeen appi... lovely chapter... so beautifully written... thanks for this treat...
Will review later...
Till then ciao
loves
Amreen

Originally posted by: babita..

Overwhelming update Aazu, loved it 👏👏

-- Thank you Babita!😃

I liked the way Ashu expressed himself while saying -- bas zindagi kaati ..

It's only and only Nidhi's love that made him moving on, but the question Nidhi asked, made him laugh like mad. I liked when he cleared it with Nidhi !

Either you are life, or there is no life without you 👏👏⭐️

-- It takes really strong love, and a wholly committed heart to keep yourself going on for 15 years, without getting distracted out of the way... And Ashu has been doing it fairly well... Nobody, but Nidhi has that place in his heart to give all the love he has...😃

Loved to see Ashu so down to earth. He is the same simple man as he was 15 years back. He is same for his Nidhi, becos he is changed for the world as a new being and a writer, but for her he is still in ! Beautiful gesture of Ashu, awesome attitude to life !

Looking different in looks, so that they can go out together, this is a lovely idea !

-- It's the make-up for the audience, the real self remains the same back stage...

And it would really be overwhelming for Nidhi to cope with the new Ashutosh, if he had remained the celebrity kind of a person in front of her... It would be a totally different man for her otherwise...😊

So, Ashu can make the house dirt free 😉 Nice to see him pointing blue color clothes of Nidhi's wardrobe. The color magnifies how Nidhi is still so close to his choice that she carries.

-- Hhehehe... Yes Ashutosh can do some bits...😆

The blue colour thing... He knows it's him and only, for nidhi... The blues are the testimony!😃

Loved to know that they had dinner together and had a nice time. Being alone is hard again for Nidhi, and getting his message is a gift again for her. Liked to see them happy in each other's company and enjoying every minute.

-- They are precisely catching up the patch of 15 years! Once done, things will move on a lovlier pace... 😃

A thought has plunged in her mind if to take up this relationship again. Would like to know how she finally decide to and what Ashu's thoughts over all this nice day he spent with his Nidhi !

-- Hmmm... Nice thought... Let Ashu's part come too... Let's see, how she decides...

Very nice continuation Aazu, with many things told specially a positivity through Ashu's words that he is still in.

-- I too think Ashu is a positive link here... He will make her his no matter what! When, that's to be thought! But soon!😉

Thanks dearie, loves ❤️

-- My pleasure!😃

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

aazeen pls can u give me a link to your blog

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

I love you, for all that you are! For all that you have been! And all you are yet to be!

-- Beautiful lines! ❤️

AshNi loved each other as a couple, never to separate in heart and soul, never to feel they are out of mind. Emotional flow took over progressing a lovely story of sweetness that has no place for looking back! 👏 Aazu, you have been so awesome with every update of your stories, that every time i feel your pen writes what your heart tells it to. 👏🤗

-- Offo! I am overwhelmed with your words bhabhi...

The story moves in the same day, but how the same day changes in the end of it, lovely! The two love birds who had no idea what they will get during the day except a professional outcome, got the lost beings to themselves. They got to talk to them, spending time with them, heart out to each other, and looking forward to a life that can heal up all the wounds that they have suffered so far. Be it the dinner or the dusting of the house - the main idea is so to spend time with and within each other, that you have simplified so gracefully! ⭐️

-- You brought the gist absolutely correct... Thank u bhabhi...😃

Ashu has given the sign that he is already in ( her life be it a mess ) and that he has never thought of anyone else than her. His feelings are of Nidhi or no one. He is determined that one day he will be equal to her and jab tak jeyenge tumhe mohabbat kerenge! What else do Nidhi wants? In all her life she has longed him and today he is there in person, who is hinting a lovelife that even his dreams are not yet over with. Then, why and what Nidhi is apprehending of? The world, the society? The ones who have never look back to them, after they obliged to their wishes?

-- It's tough to come out of the world one has lived for so many years, no matter how he/she hated it... The traces linger in one's mind, how much ever the person despised it... But what a love it is, that can't, persuade, coerce, force, compel, or whatever it needs one lover to bring his loved one out of that misery... I told it na, Ashutosh has become a rock in these years, and he is gonna support Nidhi wherever she is about to fall... He will bring her to the agreement... I am sure about that...

Had Nidhi been rigid, she wud be living a married life with him. Had Ashu objected, she wud never be a baby sitter at her home.

Today, life has once again given them a chance, and i feel they will come closer after this evening and their hearts will speak up! Blue color is going to play cupid again, so let's meet AshNi in blue next time 😉😳

-- No matter what the circumstances were back then, they are no more the same... Blue will play cupid, lovers will come back together... Forever this time...😃

Luv ya Aazu, for this sensitive SS, i am floored ❤️🤗

-- Love you too Bhabhi... And I am floored by your review... Such heart warming... Dunno what shall I do if you guys aren't my support system all through!🤗

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Am watching this kinda pic through this update -

And eagerly wants to watch this AshNi!!! 😳

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Wo din jo tere saath guzaare the, talash unhein nazar baar baar karti hai...

Judai ka ek saal bada bhari guzra, lamha her ek keh gaya wo tere saath guzra...

Tujhse naraaz nahi zindagi hairaan hoon, fir se muskurna chahta hoon agar tu naraaz na ho toh...

( hope you will like my written lines.. 😳 )

-- Oye hoye Veerji!!! Tussi kamaal kar ditta!!!

Loved the update that manifests the inner self of Ashni.. who are same as before.. just that there are some events that have to be shared.. otherwise wohi zindagi hai.. wohi main hoon wohi tum.. !

-- Thank you hai Veerji... Very well defined the update in a few words...👏

Distance is the test of love.. many will fail.. but for those who can withstand it have the answer.. true love !⭐️👏

This is what we have seen thru the eyes of Ashu... He is standing at the same path where Nidhi left him but cud never got separated..

-- very true!

Nidhi has seen the world n its bad events shattering her but left her to let her reach for the place she always wanted to live.. She has work and a life now where she has Ashu back with her.. but she is hesitating.. right .. ??/ I feel she is still battling the society n cant come out of its clauses.. ! Once she makes up her mind to go back to Ashu.. the same society will come back to tell her the dos n donts again... But i dont think this time Ashu will let her listen.. Or she will herself do that.. ??

-- I think both... She needs to have a lot of introspection, and Ashutosh too wouldn't let her go and think otherwise... She has no choice but to choose to have him forever...😃

I saw a firm and a lover Ashu who can do things even after becoming a popular man to the society.. ! He is the same for Nidhi n to the world... but he has to take the permission of Nidhi to be hers.. cos even after becoming a writer,, he is yet to ask the life what it has in its pocket secretly saved for him..

-- I dont think he would need a permission from Nidhi... She is already his, its just that he has to make her accept the truth... That's it... Itna hua, toh everything will fall into place...

" You want to cook for us nor not.. Yes i want to.. ! "The need is there... the acceptance is there... but the fear of an unknown is there.. Liked to read the way you have presented the thoughts of them... they are closer,, even more.. yet they are waiting.. for each other n for themselves..

-- I think Nidhi needs assurance... And Ashu needs to plunge into the space between them, to cross whatever remains in between...😃

I wish to see Ashu coming straight to her.,.. not cos she is free from her home task.. not cos he has become something today... but for the love he n she possess for each other... the love thats still alive.. n was never dead.. Today Ashu has the confidence to stop Nidhi from going away from him.. the only thing is the initiative... Will he.. ?// Or, Will baba this tiime.. //

-- Absolutely! INITIATIVE!!! He is gonna barge into her life, hold her hand, and take her to his... As simple or as tough that is... Baba, is gonna be the family that they always needed... Better things are waiting for them... All it needs is an unrestricted initiative...😃

I shall wait sensibly to know the minds of the distanced lovers... for whom love never died but their hesitations shall die now..

-- I think, maine sensible wali limit bhi cross kar di hai wait karaane ki...😆 Par jaldi intezaar khatam kar dungi...😳

Awesome toh meri behen pahel se hi hai.. today dealing with this emotional theme,, she has topped the next level as well.. Celebrations.. !!! 👏⭐️👏

-- Pata nahi bhai... Bas likh rahi thi kaise bhi...

Thanks dear.. ! how were exams.. ??/ 😊

-- Bohot hi gande exams gaye...🤢... I still hate it...

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Wonderful update aazeen. Really liked it a lot the scene by the river side was soo beautifully written really liked that scene a lot. Liked how nidhi was curious to know if Ashu is married or not and her relief when she got to know he isn't. Liked the song ashutosh and nidhi sung in the past.

Again the scene in the car where ashu turned from a well known writer to a common man and told his nidhi that he is the same ashu she knew 15 years ago .The scene in Nidhi's house was awesome where she cooked and he cleaned her house up.thank u so much for this wonderful update . Waiting to see what will they do to carry on their relationship