SS- Hasratein final chapter page 55 24th sept

Anjani9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#501

Story alternative 1

Story alternative 2 please...😳

Kaisa alternative story?😕

Same story...AshNi together and Nirali comes to know that Ashu is her father...😳

Radhika would die of jealousy..Nidhi gave Ashu a girl that he always wanted...and she has two boys... maybe she will try for a third time with Chandraban...remember he has 4 daughters and one son..the odds of begetting a daughter from Chandrabhan is greater...she doesn't want to be saddled with a son again😆

Vidishaa...Please write alternative 2 climax...AshNi together...would like to see how Ashu interacts with his grown up daughter...please...

If you don't want to write here...as an OS...

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Vidisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Story alternative 1

Story alternative 2 please...😳

Kaisa alternative story?😕

Same story...AshNi together and Nirali comes to know that Ashu is her father...😳

Radhika would die of jealousy..Nidhi gave Ashu a girl that he always wanted...and she has two boys... maybe she will try for a third time with Chandraban...remember he has 4 daughters and one son..the odds of begetting a daughter from Chandrabhan is greater...she doesn't want to be saddled with a son again😆

Vidishaa...Please write alternative 2 climax...AshNi together...would like to see how Ashu interacts with his grown up daughter...please...

If you don't want to write here...as an OS...

I am planning something...but quite busy...shall start writing only after my in-laws leave..that will take another week...It may be an OS..or the same story with some changes...or a new story altogether

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menaka

@ariyadasa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#503

Wow Vidisha

Sorry i didn't comment on each CHAP

but read in Express dear 😛

love the last chap 😭

heart breaking ending 😭 but ur words are so toughing u had gathered so many incidents together in the last chap 😛

u are story is totally new to me , as i was not reading a story like this before 😛 feels it' s content with Romance and emotions . well balanced Vidisha 😛

Hats off to ur creativity 👏

Keep it up 👏

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Vidisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ariyadasa
Wow Vidisha
Sorry i didn't comment on each CHAP

but read in Express dear 😛

love the last chap 😭

heart breaking ending 😭 but ur words are so toughing u had gathered so many incidents together in the last chap 😛

u are story is totally new to me , as i was not reading a story like this before 😛 feels it' s content with Romance and emotions . well balanced Vidisha 😛
Hats off to ur creativity 👏
Keep it up 👏

Thanks for reading Ariya

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Anjani9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

Kaisa alternative story?😕

Same story...AshNi together and Nirali comes to know that Ashu is her father...😳

Radhika would die of jealousy..Nidhi gave Ashu a girl that he always wanted...and she has two boys... maybe she will try for a third time with Chandraban...remember he has 4 daughters and one son..the odds of begetting a daughter from Chandrabhan is greater...she doesn't want to be saddled with a son again😆

Vidishaa...Please write alternative 2 climax...AshNi together...would like to see how Ashu interacts with his grown up daughter...please...

If you don't want to write here...as an OS...

I am planning something...but quite busy...shall start writing only after my in-laws leave..that will take another week...It may be an OS..or the same story with some changes...or a new story altogether

Thank you...🤗

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Vidisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: mudraswathi
Season2 maangta hai

Mudraji, I will be free only after a week...and after that I might start writing if I get ideas...I will take my time to write the whole story firat and then post it on the forum...else there is a risk of abandoning it midway

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shobha21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#507

Good morning Vidishaji...Chennagidiraa?

Vidishaji do you know Sonali's name in Ajeeb Dastaan ...my name 'Shobha'.😃Am sooo happy.

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Vidisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: shobha21
Good morning Vidishaji...Chennagidiraa?
Vidishaji do you know Sonali's name in Ajeeb Dastaan ...my name 'Shobha'.😃Am sooo happy.

Chennagiddini..neevu?

What is harsh's name in it??? I will chant it all the time...no more Ashu..Ashu

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shobha21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#509