SS- Hasratein final chapter page 55 24th sept - Page 50

Originally posted by: -deepali17-

Wrote it twice but if gave spam message and it did not post now will check the Shubh muhurat and post

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Same story...AshNi together and Nirali comes to know that Ashu is her father...😳

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

Radhika would die of jealousy..Nidhi gave Ashu a girl that he always wanted...and she has two boys... maybe she will try for a third time with Chandraban...remember he has 4 daughters and one son..the odds of begetting a daughter from Chandrabhan is greater...she doesn't want to be saddled with a son again😆

"Life is not a spectator sport. Win, lose or draw, the game is in progress, whether we want it to be, or not. So, go ahead, argue with the refs, change the rules... cheat a little, take a break... and tend to your wounds. But play. Play. Play hard. Play fast. Play loose and free. Play as if there's no tomorrow.

Okay, so it's not whether you win or lose... it's how you play the game. Right?"

These are lines from Grey's Anatomy. As they say literature is the story of life, in Grey's words I find it played well.👏

Your characters are grey but have contributed to your story and played well. Superb and adept use of narrative. ⭐️ 👏 I don't like such stories but that doesn't mean I can't read a well-written piece. Your narration was enough to grab my attention and keep me hooked till end.

I don't like dissecting characters, a character gets created according to the demands of a story and if a character even an emblematic one doesn't fail to guide a reader through the story, it is created and crafted well. Your characters stand well as a representative of the class and the social order you have wanted them to represent and portray. A big round of applause for that. 👏👏👏👏👏

Do keep writing dear.

Originally posted by: pansy123

"Life is not a spectator sport. Win, lose or draw, the game is in progress, whether we want it to be, or not. So, go ahead, argue with the refs, change the rules... cheat a little, take a break... and tend to your wounds. But play. Play. Play hard. Play fast. Play loose and free. Play as if there's no tomorrow.

Okay, so it's not whether you win or lose... it's how you play the game. Right?"

These are lines from Grey's Anatomy. As they say literature is the story of life, in Grey's words I find it played well.👏

Your characters are grey but have contributed to your story and played well. Superb and adept use of narrative. ⭐️ 👏 I don't like such stories but that doesn't mean I can't read a well-written piece. Your narration was enough to grab my attention and keep me hooked till end.

I don't like dissecting characters, a character gets created according to the demands of a story and if a character even an emblematic one doesn't fail to guide a reader through the story, it is created and crafted well. Your characters stand well as a representative of the class and the social order you have wanted them to represent and portray. A big round of applause for that. 👏

Do keep writing dear.

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

@Mudra- Kasratein...

KAun kasrat karega? Ashu ya Chandrabhan...Mardon ko kasrat karna hi chahiye?

Ashu kiske saath kasrat karega? Radhika ke saath ya Nidhi ke saath?

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Bhagwan reminds me I must write an epilogue😉😆

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

I finished reading it😃