SS- Hasratein final chapter page 55 24th sept

sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

full...till now

ohkthen, gimme some time

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Vidisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Part-3
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why are you laughing monkey?

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Anjani9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

There is Nidhi in this story???? 😲

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Anjani9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Will Nidhi give Ashu the courage to say No??? 😕

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Vidisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Will Nidhi give Ashu the courage to say No??? 😕

Nidhi will make an entry towards the end...Asu is a coward...let us see if Nidhi gives him courage...btw Nidh is slightly grey too

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Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Vidisha aunty I think I can relate to your frustration. Imagine what I felt when people refused to even read my stories.

Your story is a very unconventional one, and people here can't tolerate a very Ashu. They want a fairy tale.

But don't worry, I log in daily just to read your update. Despite my hectic college schedule.

When is the next update? I am waiting.

Sorry for the typos sending this from my tab

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Vidisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: s_danger
Vidisha aunty I think I can relate to your frustration. Imagine what I felt when people refused to even read my stories.

Your story is a very unconventional one, and people here can't tolerate a very Ashu. They want a fairy tale.

But don't worry, I log in daily just to read your update. Despite my hectic college schedule.

When is the next update? I am waiting.

Sorry for the typos sending this from my tab

Thanks a lot Sagi...just 4-5 more updates to go...next updt is tomo evening...

I have always wondered how Ashu can be seedha saadha in heavily politicised Lucknow...the only time he brushed with politics was during the CM track..but in the end of that too, the only bad guy- Abhishek turned good...par aisa hota hi kya...all were too goody-goody. Hospitals are crowded with lumpen elements..and Ashu is the dean..has to deal with them...I have lived in Ghaziabad ( for a short time though)...I have seen total gunda raj there

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mudraswathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: sshirley

ok ji.. u want me to go chapter wise or in full until now?

Nice to see you back Shirley. I know about your style and please write whatever you feel...😃

thank you for responding

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sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Nice to see you back Shirley. I know about your style and please write whatever you feel...😃

thank you for responding

sure mudra... I will post reviews in the coming week

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Anjani9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#150