Is this a story? -Epilogue page 57 - Page 8

Originally posted by: -deepali17-

Moi numbro uno..

😆.. Always You are...❤️

Originally posted by: -deepali17-

It was stupendous ... Could visualize SK .. Ashu

Bring on the next .. Cannot wait for raja ko rani se pyar hogaya..

But we need some dosas re..

Abhi se pyar hogaya?😉😆

Thank you Dee.

Dosas?😆😆.. but one thing is sure, he is not interested in ghee tadka wali khichdi😆

Wow gr8 writing again Mudraji.

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Originally posted by: lee_Ashni

Wow gr8 writing again Mudraji.

Loved Ashu Armaan conversation specially Queen Elizabeth has brought Kohinoor with her.😉

Mudraji add some romance filled encounters between Kohinoor and the jeweller / crown.

😆..Thank you doc!

Sure.. I will put few romantic moments...😃😃

Originally posted by: ariyadasa

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Wow Mudra superb , 👏

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But a Grand mother entered inside and looked at Ashutosh disapprovingly. 'Nandini! children always appear as kids to parents' eyes... but that doesnot mean, you can hide your son's age by asking him to wear only a chaddi... girls are here... tell him to wear something decent and cover himself fully'😆

Bride groom is coming here?'
'Where else? yeh apna hi ghar hai'.. DB gestured Ashutosh to pull a chair for her and settled comfortably on it...'Nandini! mere liye chai leke aao... aur haan.. Nidhi likes only black tea no milk for her'.😆

Just then, Nidhi came out of the room... DAZZLE...She is still in the travel clothes... but a lock of hair on the front of her face!!!!!!!!... Oh my God! Ashutosh forgot that he needed to breathe for living.. Temporarily all faculties of his brain became non-responsive...

'Ashutosh'
'...'
'Ashutosh! are you there?'
'Armaan! Queen Elizabeth brought Kohinoor with her!'😆

Interesting and super fun 👏😆

Thank you Ariya.😊

Thanks for quoting all portions you likes😃😃

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Nice second part 👏 What a khichdi made in 12 hours 😆 Mallika will have once again a 12 ka TRP 😆 She is going to loose by 12 seconds oats 😛😳 Very nice combination though. Mudra di your imagination flows very well. 👏

Originally posted by: babita68

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What a brilliant setting to make your readers so glued to the story. Yes, of course this IS A STORY.. with a very nice touch to the feelings of young and loving hearts. I loved the part one, though it gives a fantastic piece of laughter and the intro.

I have a feeling of watching the house waiting for the guests, and the son is not quite happy. He is on a mission to .. " Let all of them go to hell... and prayed God that whichever groom they are trying for the alliance should find this girl ugly... Secretly, thought he would offer 11 rupees of mannat in the local temple's hundi. ... "

I bet like everyone that he is going to be the first to get his heart stopping on their departure. 😉😛

Liked the first episode 👏, going for the second. 😃

Thank you Thank you so much Babita...😃😃😃

Glad you found this story very much connecting... 😊

I hope I live upto your expectations in the next parts too.
Please give me inputs on what you want to see with Ashu /Nidhi / or any character.😃😃

and I think already you have sensed that, Ashu will be the first one to get is heart stopping when Nidhi leaves..Lets see what happens😉😃😃😃

Originally posted by: babita68

Nice second part 👏 What a khichdi made in 12 hours 😆 Mallika will have once again a 12 ka TRP 😆 She is going to loose by 12 seconds oats 😛😳 Very nice combination though. Mudra di your imagination flows very well. 👏

Instant oats is Aarti's suggestion😆😆.. No way Mallika is going to get her wish 😆

What attracts me more is Nidhi' presence everywhere at home. Her first sight for Ashu ---- Wow !!! What a lovely word for her.. Kohinoor ⭐️ ⭐️ Forgot to breathe, Ashu is gone in the diamond to get a glimpse of the brightness.❤️ Lovely and very interesting. Prince Charming is after the kohinoor now. 😉

Thank you Babita😳

Eagerly waiting for the next. Thank you so much Mudra di for your fabulous story taking a loving turn. Enjoying it. 🤗

Thank you Babita for reading. Planning for what to write in the next part.😊