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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Vidishaa
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writing...in process😆

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mudraswathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Part - 3

'Ashutosh'

'...'

'Ashutosh! are you there?'

'Armaan! Queen Elizabeth brought Kohinoor with her!'.. a dreamy Ashutosh's voice floated from far far away galaxies...

'Dont forget what history says... Kohinoor was never ours...always been somebody's property...!'

Ashutosh cursed Armaan with some choicest words for reminding him this hard fact and bringing him back to earth so quickly. He clicked the phone off.

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Here, I must introduce you Ashutosh properly. Ashutosh received mixture of inputs from his mother (Nandini), who is determined & a hard task master and a happy & uncluttered father(BB).

Ashutosh studied Telecommunications but, worked as a management trainee in the industry only to understand the uncommunicated meaning of top management's policies in the business. Verbal communications have become so strong so that words fall like Niagra along with his crystal clear coordinated thoughts. His thesis in masters (Bringing normalcy from chaos and turbulance) got special recognition in the business magazines.

So far so good... but at present, the turbulance named Nidhi, has kick started chaos within him has got no references to his studies / thesis at all... He found himself in a whirlpool of tingling nervousness, a rigid tongue (tied to the top of his mouth...)..and uncoordinated organs. Actually a serious disfunction of the jaw (already dropped down and touched the floor below) is almost negligible before the havoc created by the madly thumping heart.

Suddenly it has become the top most priority of all his life to don something on his legs but now doesnot know how to do...

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Slowly, his senses started returning as he heard BB calling his name from far away distances.

'Ashutosh! We need to organise a function tomorrow here. Ofcourse, we dont have to worry about dosas and vadas. We can ask Mallika to prepare that Ghee tadka wala khichdi... but the problem is with sweets. Nobody make sweets in this short notice. Hope you can use your bargaining skills to get this organised.'

BB started boasting his son's extraordinary communication skills to the guests.

Advocate Solanki piped in..'Yes.. yes..we must impress ladkewale in every way'.

DB: I have already brought Shagun for the boy and gifts for his entire family.

Hey Bhagwan!!! this is what called a real disaster...should he use his most potential skills to impress some faceless ladkewale to snatch away his diamond from him???? ... idly he realised that he was refering the diamond to be his... and now...

Come to think of God, he remembered he desperately wanted his wish to be fulfilled... 'Bhagwan! maine zindagi mein kabhi kuch nahi maanga! ab maang raha hoon... please be on the task of fulfilling my earlier wish.. Ladke wale should find this girl ugly... No..no.. not ugly.. but... please please..some other reason...I will offer 11 rupees... no.. 11 is too less... 21 rupees... Ok..Ok fine.. 21 dollars'

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ttrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Me first 😃

Edited by ttrocks - 11 years ago

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ttrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

CH-3 Review:

Loved Armaan's quip: 'Dont forget what history says... Kohinoor was never ours...always been somebody's property...!' Hats off to you for including such perfect dialogues Mudraji!! 👏👏👏

Ashu has fallen for Nidhi... love at first sight!! I had imagined Nadini to be strict mother and that's what she is. 😳

Ashutosh studied Telecommunications but, worked as a management trainee in the industry only to understand the uncommunicated meaning of top management's policies in the business. So Ashu is telecomm. engr but trained in management. He has excellent verbal communication skills. Hope he retains these skills while conversing with Nidhi coz it's often seen that men become tongue-tied while talking to their lady-love... 😃

So far so good... but at present, the turbulance named Nidhi, has kick started chaos within him has got no references to his studies / thesis at all... He found himself in a whirlpool of tingling nervousness, a rigid tongue (tied to the top of his mouth...)..and uncoordinated organs. Actually a serious disfunction of the jaw (already dropped down and touched the floor below) is almost negligible before the havoc created by the madly thumping heart.

Suddenly it has become the top most priority of all his life to don something on his legs but now doesnot know how to do...

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

BB wants his son to employ his extraordinary convincing skills to get sweets in shortnotice for
nidhi's prospective alliance and Ashutosh is lovestruck now 😆 How can he do that? So he is seeking ultimate refuge in God and bargaining with $21 "chadhava" 😆😆😆 Great to see he considers the diamond to be his and wants save her from slipping into someone else's hands... 😳😃

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ttrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Vidishaa
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What happened to ur FF "Damaad in Demand"? Abandoned? And u were to start a new FF too; what happened to that?

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Babita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Finally.. Ashu settled with a 21 dollars scheme 😉😆

Very nice description of Ashu's studies and his heart fully panicking. His misery comes in with a bomb blasted...

Hey Bhagwan!!! this is what called a real disaster...should he use his most potential skills to impress some faceless ladkewale to snatch away his diamond from him???? ... idly he realised that he was refering the diamond to be his...

Loved him saying Nidhi as his ⭐️⭐️ ❤️

Very nice continuation Mudra di 👏 will wait for the next part. I liked to read Ashu and now would like to read Nidhi's mind, heart towards Ashu 😃😳

so far so good.. 👏 👏

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mudraswathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: ttrocks
Me first 😃

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mudraswathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: ttrocks
Res

waiting😛

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mudraswathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: babita68

Finally.. Ashu settled with a 21 dollars scheme 😉😆

Thank you for this suggestion Babita🤗
Very nice description of Ashu's studies and his heart fully panicking. His misery comes in with a bomb blasted...
Hey Bhagwan!!! this is what called a real disaster...should he use his most potential skills to impress some faceless ladkewale to snatch away his diamond from him???? ... idly he realised that he was refering the diamond to be his...
Loved him saying Nidhi as his ⭐️⭐️ ❤️

😉... I know
Very nice continuation Mudra di 👏 will wait for the next part. I liked to read Ashu and now would like to read Nidhi's mind, heart towards Ashu 😃😳

Then may be a twist here😆
so far so good.. 👏 👏