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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Part-2

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wow.. what a great review😡

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Wow Mudra di... very nice story... ⭐️👏

You have a well accomplished grip upon your readers.. i must say ! 👍🏼

Very catchy story... liked it ... more liked is the way Ashu has shown his feelings... They are too flowing with the theme.. Theme of how two poles apart will meet finally... Right ? 😳 This is superb... very well written... n the very simple n a lovely story made me glued to it.. ! 👏👏

Thanks ! 😃

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Aardhan

@aardhan

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Part 2:

Last line takes the cake... Queen Elizabeth bought kohinoor with her! 😆

Ashu's home is a mess... teeming with relatives and friends of relatives, including a cook!!! Girls clothes all over his room... he being scolded for wearing the modern chaddi (oops, shorts!) 😆

Loved the humor throughout... Mallika with her khichdi.. and what khichdi is she becoming part of? 😉😆 So Nandini is not too impressed with Mallika right now... and Mallika gives an impression of being a little clingy 😳 Has eyes only for Ashu? ?Of course!! But bad girl, she ignores BB... hmmm, she will do well to pay heed to this old man. 😉 😆

But Mudra, I made one error... when I suggested Ashu to run a radio studio, I forgot he lived in the US So, wonder if that's possible... but maybe his friend Armaan can own a recording studio?? 😳😉

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Aardhan

@aardhan

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Part 3:

Ashu in turmoil.. decided to bribe the sources above! 😆 And even bargains with the final number 🤣 Poor guy! In a fix, or in a soup?? Does not know one hand from the other anymore... for a change a guy wishes he were dressed a bit more 😉 😳

What's next? Is he really going to use those 'Communication Skills' to convince the ladkewale or drive them away? 😆

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Vidisha

@Veni-Vidi-Vici

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

cool Mudra... loved Armaan's views about Kohinoor

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bc123456

@bc123456

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Wow Mudra loved all the chapters sorry , have been busy , will reply in detail 🤗

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

@Mudraji reading second part.

Oh god again Mallika so much thirsty that drinking through Ashutosh's bare legs?Ashutosh,Tumhari ijjat khatareme hai bhai? just joke part.

Why Ashutosh is behaving like this?i think he had not any restrinctions in his house that he is apple of Nandini's eyes.

Nidhi arrived like Kohinoor.Waah ji waah.She appeared and Ashutosh forget to take a breathe.Lovely part.

Ashutohs and Armaan's convo was enjoyable.So Anji is also with them.Seems interesting.

Going to read the next part.

Sorry for late

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Reading third Part.

Ohj god Ashutosh too Kanjoos yaar.Only 11rs then 21 rs and then 21 dollars.Good going bro.

Loved the way Armaan answered him that Kohinoor is always other's property.Good Armaan.

So for Ashutosh love at first sight?And in that love he want to break Nidhi's rishta.

Ashutosh willl make zol in sweet dish i am sure.

@Mudraji,you always admire Mallika's cooking skill na?here too Khichadi with Ghee?

Beautifully written chap Mudraji.

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-rhythm-

@-rhythm-

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

hello mudraji... i read the second part few days ago.. thought to come back later n comment..but could not.

loved the update..

finally Mallika arrived.. 😆 and Nidhi arrived as kohinoor diamond...😆 ..

will read the third part as soon i get chance.. thx..

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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: bawaswift
Wow Mudra di... very nice story... ⭐️👏
You have a well accomplished grip upon your readers.. i must say ! 👍🏼
Very catchy story... liked it ... more liked is the way Ashu has shown his feelings... They are too flowing with the theme.. Theme of how two poles apart will meet finally... Right ? 😳 This is superb... very well written... n the very simple n a lovely story made me glued to it.. ! 👏👏
Thanks ! 😃

Hello bawa. Thank you for reading and reviewing despite your busy schedule. Its so touching that you have taken time for this story.👏

I have pmed you the link, so that you will read later. I dont mind if you donot give the review rightaway. review can wait.😳

Hope both of you are studying well. Study hard , do well and hamari forum ka naam roshan karna hai.👍🏼

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