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Anjani9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#601

Sai, Diksha, Are you there???

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saibanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#602

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991
Incase if you leave my that time than..
Gud Nite Dearie. Tc . Sd. 🤗

Dont take too much of tension. Everything will be alright..

Sorry dearie , some urgent work came up so could not come back ...still in office , will be working till 4 i guess

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saibanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Sai, Diksha, Are you there???

I Am here dear 😃

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Aardhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#604

Hi Sai,

Congratulations on completing this FF. 👏👏👏

Though I have not commented on your chapters because of lack of time in the last couple of months I have read them. Its a beautiful story of Second chance at love. The sensitive portrayal of everyone's emotions, be it love, be it angst, or guilt or joy, fun, has been wonderful and touching, 😃 Really liked them and I feel you have improved a lot with this FF, not just with the aspect of closing the FF but also in your language. I feel your editing skills have improved a lot.

Story wise its a lovely story of human imperfections and failings and how one wrong turn can change the course of our life. But in this case the protagonists got their much needed second chance and this time they grabbed it and did not make any mistakes, though it cam with its fair share of complications. Even the so called bad guy, Rohan got a small opportunity to redeem himself... overall well thought out characterizations. And finally loved the id, Arush! 😳

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saibanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: aardhan
Hi Sai,
Congratulations on completing this FF. 👏👏👏

Though I have not commented on your chapters because of lack of time in the last couple of months I have read them. Its a beautiful story of Second chance at love. The sensitive portrayal of everyone's emotions, be it love, be it angst, or guilt or joy, fun, has been wonderful and touching, 😃 Really liked them and I feel you have improved a lot with this FF, not just with the aspect of closing the FF but also in your language. I feel your editing skills have improved a lot.

Story wise its a lovely story of human imperfections and failings and how one wrong turn can change the course of our life. But in this case the protagonists got their much needed second chance and this time they grabbed it and did not make any mistakes, though it cam with its fair share of complications. Even the so called bad guy, Rohan got a small opportunity to redeem himself... overall well thought out characterizations. And finally loved the id, Arush! 😳

Hi Arati Ji

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and dont mind about giving chapter wise review , you read and liked the story that is more than enough for me!
Thanks for telling that you liked the emotional portrayal of every character in every scene , I am Piscean so we are born emotional fools 😆😆, somay be that is the reason my story mostly revolve around on inner world of a person and the emotional conflict one go through...I am glad to read that it came out well😃

Also Thanks for telling that my story telling is improved a lot, here is a secret about me , there was a time where i used to struggle to even compose an email...because the speed of my thoughts are faster than my typing speed , its like i want to tell so many things in one scene but when i sit to write something everything get jumbled up and puff ...I will be will left with nothing but clueless as in what i was trying to write in there! , i call it short circuit in my brain 😆😆 i thought its natural and happen to everyone but recently realized it is part of my illness so you can say , writing a story is not just putting forth my idea , it not just story telling to me , it is turning as therapy through which i am able to synchronise my thoughts and guide them in a better way...!

Coming to story , yes ...When the idea stuck, it was unclear but after hours of discussion with my friend -Aashish and my papa , i sketched the skeleton of this storyline and really glad i ended up meeting up to expectation of my reader and not dissapointed anyone 😃

Once again THANK YOU for reading and liking this story , means a lot 🤗

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saibanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Sai, Back home???

Sunday whole night worked , left home morning at 6 ...so slept whole day yesterday 😆😆

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Anjani9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#607

Originally posted by: saibanu

Sunday whole night worked , left home morning at 6 ...so slept whole day yesterday 😆😆
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