FF- Destiny's Play Chap 4 Pg 127 June 16 - Page 24

Originally posted by: deepali.rock

?mere sawalon ka jawab do..

Originally posted by: aardhan

Sujatha, I finally hit the LIKE for the first chapter! 😃

Thank you 😃

Review:

Sujatha, I am very happy you are taking up this one. It's a beautiful story and concept. 👏Life does not accord second chances to all and when it does one needs to grab it with both hands! Only fools would let it slip away again. I can see you have kept a lot of the original intact her, except for their ages. 👍🏼

Yes. And I removed BB and his relation to Nidhi too. Wanted to keep it simple and not have too many tangles to undo. My aim is to give this story a proper closure. Not make it another KTLK on paper. Since Shari already took care of the two year separation and its reasons, now I have to bring them back together overcoming those reasons.

Meeting after two years! Wow, that sure cold have become an awkward moment considering the last time they met, they parted ways after an explosive meeting. So its clear for all the many complex reasons that only he can come up with, reasons that included his fear that people he loved abandoned him to Mallika to their age gap, Ashutosh pushed her away. And Nidhi walked away not willing to fight him, felt the futility of doing so and not wanting him to see her hurt.😔😭

True. She could fight with the world. But how long would she fight both the battles? World and the man she loves?

At the same time it's good to know that she picked herself up and went on to study more.👏

Yes..for me being a doctor in itself is sacrilegious.. Nothing and I mean nothing should stop them from being a good one no matter what their personal lives have undergone. And Nidhi was a bright student. When she could get 14th rank with zero interest in the subject, imagine what she could do with that disinterest turns into passion and love for that profession!!

How much he still loves her is clear when pride shone out of his eyes as he hears that Sister praise Nidhi and reveal her details. And for her he is still her idol, the doctor and person she wants to emulate, her reason for continuing in this profession. She understood him very well, yet was powerless to change his mind. Maybe she didn't fight enough back then but seeing him she instantly knows nothing has changed for him. For them! Little does she know that he looked for her!🤔

She doesn't.

Two years later, she is still sticking to her bargain and has vanished! And he is desperate for a glimpse of her! Neither have forgotten anything, every minute detail is still etched in their memories. Their pain came across so well... they are pining for each other but are too head strong to accept it. They would rather love a life of misery away from each other than confess that they cannot live without each other. If he was hardstone, I think his actions has turned her into one too! So what will they do, now that they have caught a glimpse of each other, will they be able to keep away?

What do you think?? 😳😉

A very interesting start Sujatha... its has gripped my attention already! 👏Special mention about Ranga... he wants to push the closer. He is a sly one with a good heart and a quick humor... looking forward to seeing his shenanigans!

Oh Ranga and Armaan are going to steal the show in this FF. I love them already. And Anji too. She is coming across as a strong woman herself.

And once again..unbeatable analysis. Thank you so much Aarti. 🤗 ❤️

Originally posted by: Anjani9

But Suvika says I am the only one who is scared and takes her name serious...😡

Originally posted by: suku_07

Lol I'm also scared

Originally posted by: suku_07

Though she is a sweetheart but panga kyu lo...🤣

Originally posted by: Tinku14

When is the next update😭

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Good afternoon Madamji,

Had your lunch?