If I should meet thee-part 12 Pg 118 - Page 94

Originally posted by: Anjani9

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Yesterday you called me supporter naa...why will I support you???? 😡😡😡 😛

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Hai raam... did I check mirror today morning when I woke up..

earlier Deepa(DJ) gave me a nice blow... now anjani...

Bhagwan ji... what shall I do?

Originally posted by: Anjani9

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That is why Elders say you have to use your words carefully...

'Nooru manchi dayite ooru manchi davutundi' 😆

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Shirley,

I have no words to describe this fantastic, mindblowing...immensely thoughtful update.

Thank you so much Mudra. Coming from you, it really means a lot, and a lot means a A LOT.

Though I said, I will come later, but could not contain myself.

Aww.. Mudra I don't even know what to say to that.. but much as I wanted to reply as soon as I saw it, I could find enough leisure till now.. I wanted to do it aaram se. this review is too good to be replied to in a hurry.

The clay models is very very well thught of! and pefect explanation. You have concentrated on the problem to a perfect clarity. Everyone is now clearly shocked with the repercussions. A small part of me is believing that Mrs Anita chapman's solution is a mere threat. But, it is very correct way to give a low blow!

I am glad no one, esp. you found my idea of clay models a silly one. It came to my mind when I was writing the review for ur update. So, in a way, you paved the way for the idea to germinate in my brain...

Then Deepali Gupta helped me refine my idea.. actually I was requesting her to take it up. Instead she persuaded me to write it.. I said I just have this one scene in mind... she said a chapter does not hv to be long. U write just that scene. At the end, she succeeded in persuading me! And together, we refined my idea.. for example the idea abt elephant's characteristics was given by her.. as was the idea of them making different animals simultaneously.. my original idea was different - I had thought of passing the same clay amongst the couple, with each molding being more difficult than the previous one due to the natural drying out of the clay.. but this looked more natural, more... realistic..

@Bold & underline - I am so glad I could present the problem well and the repercussions were understood well by my readers as by the 4 so called adults.

@Bold - It is upto the next writer how s/he wants to take it. But personally, I din't mean it as a mere threat.. aryan at least is better off at the state establishment.. I know, being indians we can't accept these things easily (nor can I personally, I assure you) but given the situation it was the only logical solution... how long would he kicked around like a football?

You have given the right treatment!! and how!!!!

Thanks, I take a bow!

When I thought of this angle, I first wrote a different name to the principal. But, Indian values are very very different from the western world! I have known a English person (ofcourse, name is different).. a staunch follower of Swami Vivekananda 's follower. He is fascinated to Indian culture and married a girl from India (who was researching along with him on the philosophy of Paramahamsa from Kolkata.).. hence the name reflected here as AnitaChapman. I felt no other will understand the complexity of the problem so well than a person like Mrs.AnitaChapman. You have justified it 100%.

Oh really? This is so interesting ad heartwarming to know about.. such things make you believe in the humanity against the hardcore reality we face in our day to day life.. I m so happy to know all this... and I am honored to know you think I have justified it.. a big big hug to u for this.

But, But.. while I know, Anita is a common Indian name, I think it's fairly common in the western world too, nahi? So, I dint make that connection of her being an Indian.

What would happen will be the next writer's vision... But that night should be the worst one for the internal turmoil of

Ashutosh -This should be the bone crushing situation for him..given his background... He gave his life for Wendy, because he understood the child's nightmares from his own POV.


Nidhi - the mother .. who is a rope in the hands of the real & practical life on one side and emotional upheavals, tender love & the anxiety for her son's future on the otherside playing tug of war

Rohan - a great eye opener which should shake him to the core
Anji - Be strong and should know the inner strngth of hers and extending help to Nidhi.

Absolutely Mudra, ye raat chaaron pe bhaari padne wali hai.. lets see how the next writer takes this.. I m very eager now to see what the next writer has in his or her kitty...

The rational part of me says, Aryan belongs to Nidhi and Ashutosh.

But I do agree, Rohan's intentions are not wrong... we should agree one point that he was never given a choice to learn his mistakes. When he chose Anji to Nidhi, Nidhi mere accepted his decision..never opposed.. so as Anji now. May be it is correct as well ... that marriage will be successful where the love is.. but he should learn a lesson while playing with a child's emotion

Well frankly, I think its like both sets of parents are right in their own way - n these 2 rights make a huge irreparable wrong. At least that's I feel.. although I agree rohan is the most selfish character here.. but in a way, aren't we all?

And yes you are ryt, till now Rohan's decisions have not been challenged ever...

It will be interesting to read how Ashutosh fight his internal demons.. briefly his demons might revisit him..thinking that he has failed yet again with Aryan.

yes that would be interesting...

Ultimately, this is AshNi story. So, in my POV, Ashutosh will emerge as winner...with the help of Nidhi.
Nidhi is an angel for him. She helped him in recovering Wendy. Now it is Ashutosh's turn to help Nidhi.

I m waiting eagerly to see how and when that happens.

I would like to read the last line.. as

Ashutosh opened his hands...Nidhi ran towards him.. into the inviting hands...

Oh my goodness! Mudra, I literally fell off my chair reading this last line..

Thank you Mudra for such a positive review... just this review from u makes me glad I wrote this one.,,,

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Nice update Shirley ⭐️👏 Very fine words to the guardians n the parents to know what the child is suffering n to what extent the things cud go wrong !

Thank you so very much Bhavit. I am glad you enjoyed my writing. and I could make the parents/guardians understand what they are doing to a small, sensitive child.

The examples of clay mouldings have emerged as a winner here.. but i wud like to see someone else as a winner here..as the situations, circumstances have taken this much of shapes. May be in the next one..

oh I m so glad, the clay models idea is such a hit.. really gives the writer a unique satisfaction.. yes, even I wanna see who emerges as the winner here. lets keep our fingers crossed.

You said you have read only last two updates.. I think you must go thru the previous ones from the very beginning as Aarti is doing.. cos the real image of every character will come from that only..

Arre, I dint mean that. I have actually read all updates including yours. And must say Bhavit, you were a surprise package.. u write well, for an inexperienced writer.. I m sorry I am unable to write reviews since I keep extremely busy these days.

Liked this one too...You are a brilliant writer.. and we newcomers have to learn a lots from you.. 😃

Oh thanks a lot... n you or anyone is else is always welcome to pm me if u guys need any help from me - I am always there.. just shoot a pm to me..

Who is the next one ?

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

I am in Mahesh babu mode Anjani... I will take revenge😡😡😆