If I should meet thee-part 12 Pg 118 - Page 66

Very nice update Bawa...So Ashu and Nidhi both ready to compromise their happiness for each other...This is so like Ashni...

Excellent update bawa..the pain of both nidhi n ashu brought out v well...n yet ready to sacrifice for each other..that is the crux of this relation..loved it...also wendy is v endearing..love her n ashu's relation..beyond dna...and the best part is the open ended conclusion..great ..

Originally posted by: suku_07

Very nice update Bawa...So Ashu and Nidhi both ready to compromise their happiness for each other...This is so like Ashni...

Very nice...!!

Originally posted by: indu6789

Excellent update bawa..the pain of both nidhi n ashu brought out v well...n yet ready to sacrifice for each other..that is the crux of this relation..loved it...also wendy is v endearing..love her n ashu's relation..beyond dna...and the best part is the open ended conclusion..great ..

I do not know y, I feel really pained and hurted reading this story Bawa Bhaiya...
Admist the win and loss of love and hatred, selflessness and Selfishness, bachhon ko, unke bachpane ko, usnki maasoomiyat ka tamaasha bana ke rakh diya hai...
Don't think, m blaming ur writing Bhaiya, I blame the inane human thinking, dat is ready to spoil dozens of lives all together, just because, they want them n their loved ones happy, crushing loads n loads of emotions...
Rohan had nothing deprived of... They can very well adopt any other child other than Ashni's... But no... They don't running behind the cats tail, unnecessarily spoiling lives...

Bhaiya d anger that the story invoked in me itself proves how gud u have written... Unnecesarily putting more words wud not change d gist... It was awesome... Truely awesome... Congratulations...

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

I do not know y, I feel really pained and hurted reading this story Bawa Bhaiya...
Admist the win and loss of love and hatred, selflessness and Selfishness, bachhon ko, unke bachpane ko, usnki maasoomiyat ka tamaasha bana ke rakh diya hai...
Don't think, m blaming ur writing Bhaiya, I blame the inane human thinking, dat is ready to spoil dozens of lives all together, just because, they want them n their loved ones happy, crushing loads n loads of emotions...
Rohan had nothing deprived of... They can very well adopt any other child other than Ashni's... But no... They don't running behind the cats tail, unnecessarily spoiling lives...

Bhaiya d anger that the story invoked in me itself proves how gud u have written... Unnecesarily putting more words wud not change d gist... It was awesome... Truely awesome... Congratulations...

@ Aazu... if we can give a turn and twist to this limit.. then i hope the new light of hope can show the raise of hope with Ashni living together with Wendy and Aryan.

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Well Aazu, sorry but your own update has turned this story to this move. You have shown Rohan asking for Aryan's custody, ready with the custody papers.

I have only tried to make things better again. Cos if the next writer thinks the right way.. the kids can have their own happiness altogether back again.. forever !

No-no... I dunn mean that way bhaiya... It was just that, I felt sorry for the kids, more than the couples themselves... They are pretty innocent that have been played on my selfish acts of the adults... That is all I meant... aur koi baat nahi... M sorry if my words were hurting...

Originally posted by: bawaswift

@ Aazu... if we can give a turn and twist to this limit.. then i hope the new light of hope can show the raise of hope with Ashni living together with Wendy and Aryan.

Well .. i am so new in this field,, i dont know how to make things better in an OS,, but yes, if there is no pain shown.. then how must we get to know abt the joy, relief and the better relations in the story. I have always said that Ashni have yet to see the light of love.. And according to me.. this is the best testing time when they will come closer and wont let each other sacrifice to the extent. Real love has to have a trust... lets see how 😳

The beginning itself was not a happy go merry Ashni.. so i think to make things go smooth.. some steps need to be taken..

Wud love to see, what happens further...😃

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

No-no... I dunn mean that way bhaiya... It was just that, I felt sorry for the kids, more than the couples themselves... They are pretty innocent that have been played on my selfish acts of the adults... That is all I meant... aur koi baat nahi... M sorry if my words were hurting...