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Posted: 11 years ago
do din ka gm waiting pada hai deepali.GM to you too for all mornings🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sonyjknum

Alkaji,mere toh char parts pending hain,padh kar reply karoongi,sorry for not being regular

will wait for your comment sony
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bawaswift

What a lovely chapter Alka di ! ⭐️👏 So much is told in this beautiful narration by you. The feelings of Ashu , Nidhi so immense and lovely !⭐️

First of all the relationship of Mallika and Nidhi.. they both are so understanding that are ready to do anything for each other. Liked it ! 😊 so they are more than sisters.They are like shadow for each other but still nidhi want to give her wanted space too to enjoy her life
Loved Anji n Nidhi on phone.. saari yaaden taza ho gayi.. the way they both used to talk in the show.. ! Unki batose hi unki friendship ki gehrai zalkati hai
As of now.,. Ashu wants n waiting for the time to Nidhi calling him Ashu ..! His waits are so natural in love.. 😛 Their enjoyment is with each other and talking to each other.. ! Lovely words when he says that Kapde status symbol nahi hota.Muze pata hai aap ka dil kitna khubsurat hai. How True ! 👏Kabhi kabhi log kapado ko status symbol samaz lete hai Bawa.Lekin for ashu nidhi is more important he was thinking that Nidhi will wear saree but he knew that how it is unconfortable for camel ride
Nidhi wants Others to be told abt them after Armaan and Mallika's marriage. Bec she knew ki mallika apne muh se kuchh kahegi nahi so she and Anji planned to take that resposibiltiy.Her tears made him melting and... Nidhi,kehete hai aaasoo kamjori ki nishani hai,lekin mere aasoo sirf tumharee judai ke naam se hi bahete hai.
And his lovely promise from Nidhi..Aaj tak ashu is ehsaas se anjaan tha now all his desired wake up.and he knew what is nidhi mean to him
Tum muze yaad karke rogi nahi.Turant phone karogi aur baat karogi.Kabhi bhi.Yeh nahi ki abhi ashu busy hoga ya fir sankoch se na karo ki ashu ko kaisa lagega?
Ashu's words are like a heal for Nidhi.. loved every moment of it.. ! ⭐️He wanted to give her every right to show her that she is very precious to her and a hidden promise that i am always yours and want to give her
And after that the gift.. Payal for Nidhi.. ❤️ For him Ring is a symbol of engegment if he gave her that right now jab eng me baat aayegi toh woh uske liye purana experience ho jayega.And one more hidden thing ki payal ki chhanchhan use ashu ki yaad dilati rahegi[basically i love to wear payal very much]😛
We have missed this kind of events in the show.. this is so lovely Alka di.. thanks for this beautiful moment ! 👏You are welcome bawa
On saying abt herslef how girls do think abt a man in her life..
Ashu very thoughfully said..

Nidhi,pyaar toh khuda ki den hai.Woh toh ho jata hai.Bus tumhe aisee bate karte dekhta hu toh khush ho jata hoo.Ab is pyaar bhari hasti tasveer apne dil me rakhna chahta hoo.Nidhi,zindagi bahoot chhoti hoti hai.Woh kabhi apni muthhi me nahi reheti.Lekin tab tak jee leni chahiye zindagi.Main tumhare saath wohi life jeena chahta hu.

Har baar pyaar ko kosna nahi chahiye.Love is immense.Pyaar ko samay ke saath jee lena chahiye

Lovely shayari to end the chapter.. ! 👏
How true.. rooh ka sukoon hai pyaar.., aur jisse ho jaye sachha pyaar wo har rasm se ooncha hai... ⭐️👏
Thanks di.. i will be waiting for the nxt now.. ! 😊

Thank you Bawa i will update next chap soon



Thank you again Bawa
Edited by parmarA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good morning to you too dear🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

For me, beautiful writing can be summed up in one word: heartfelt. Ur writing reflects a natural, deep, organic connection to the feeling the protagonist, it's incredible.

For me love is simple but sobber.your thoughts and love for your partner shows your true love.

Friendship is a bond that exists between two people who understand each other well. Often they have same interests and trust each other to a great extent. A true friend will help his friend when it becomes necessary at any cost. That is the kind of bond Anji n Nidhi share!!! A bond of understanding!! ya Nidhi and Anji shared a beautiful friendship indeed

Nidhi: main western dress me aayi toh aapko achha lagega?

Ashutosh: Nidhi,kabhi bhi kapado ke upar insaan ki rai nahi banani chahiye.Kapde status symbol nahi hota.Muze pata hai aap ka dil kitna khubsurat hai.Aur aap matured hai kapado ke mamleme.So no issue at all.Bye chalo so jao ab.subah 8 baje milte hai.Good night

Well written👏 !! A beautiful xpression of what Ashu feels for Nidhi!!! When two people are connected at the heart, and it doesn't matter what you do, or who you are ; there are no boundaries or barriers if two people are destined to be together. Also Ashu is very serene n mature!!

Now ashu started feeling of Nidhi's confortableness too.He knew how she is from heart?and she will be confortable in western dress.He didn't wanted to feel nervous and unconfortable while camelride

Ashutosh ne paheli baar Nidhi ki aankhome aassoo dekhe sirf miss karne ke liye

Ashu ne Nidhi ke aasoo apni hanky se pochhe aur uska haath apne hathome liye

Ashu: Nidhi,tumhe rote nahi dekhna chahta hu main.Main apne pyaar me kamjor pad jaoonga.Hume toh abhi badi dur tak yeh sab sehena hai.Aur pyaar kabhi insaan ki kamjori nahi taqat banani chahiye.

tears come from an open heart. When you are in the presence of someone who is very close to ur heart , you generally feel moved . If your own heart is open, you will likely feel their pain within you as you empathize with their feelings, and tears might come to your eyes. After all tears are words the mouth can't say nor can the heart bare

I think tears is not symbol of weakness.It is what a true expression.Aankhe apne aap bahene lagti hai jab aap sache pyaar me ho toh.

Nidhi: hum dono bahoot alag hai major.Lekin pyaar shabd hume pura karta hai.Pyaar har duriya mita sakta hai.Bus dil me sacha pyaar aur jajbaat hone chahiye.

Ashu: Nidhi,pyaar toh khuda ki den hai.Woh toh ho jata hai.Bus tumhe aisee bate karte dekhta hu toh khush ho jata hoo.Ab is pyaar bhari hasti tasveer apne dil me rakhna chahta hoo.Nidhi,zindagi bahoot chhoti hoti hai.Woh kabhi apni muthhi me nahi reheti.Lekin tab tak jee leni chahiye zindagi.Main tumhare saath wohi life jeena chahta hu.


Ashu gifts Nidhi A payal n not a ring n his reason behind it...very endearing . however they both accept that the most important gift you can ever give to another - and to yourself - is the gift of love.Without strings. Without conditions. Without judgments.Just pure love and acceptance. Again u have etched out their feelings so beautifully❤️In this os ashu and nidhi are beautiful pair.Their thougth exchange understanding and love is really treat to watch which i missed in real ktlk

Aapki shayari stands so true⭐️. Waiting for the next part!! Thank you Deepali,i willl update soon

Thank you deepali for your beautiful feedback
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991

Good Morning Alkaji,

How are you?

Will read ur chapter in evening & will post my review asap. 😊

sure Diksha take your time dear.Will wait for your review
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: parmarA

Thank you again Bawa

Thanks for this lovely reply Alka di ! 😃
Your story is moving ahead to a lovely emotional n romantic theme ! The wait is over i hope... for what we wanted in the show... Keep going Di ! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice and cute update Alka ji...wow Ashu giving her payal...so swet 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely Chapter Alkaji 👏 👏 👏 👏

Described the feelings of AshNI very beautifully 👍🏼

Liked it waiting for next chapter eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chap 10

Thank you all for your patience



Pyaar har rang se rangeela hai
Pyaar har gum khushi ka nichod hai
Jise hum kahe hum khuda ki rehmat
Woh dil me basa pyaar hi toh hai?


Ashutosh and Nidhi are in white diamond desert.

Nidhi watched rann and she said,"wow!major yeh toh kitna khubsurat hai?Aur jab iss tapate registan pe suraj ki dhup girati hai toh aise lagta hai jaise sitare bikhare hai jahaa me.Thank you for bringing me here major.

Ashutosh: Nidhi,dekhnewalo ka najariya hai.Logo ko rann ki khubsurati dikhati hai lekin kuchh logo ko yeh registan bada boaring lagta hai.Chalo ab camel ki sawari kare.

Pahele toh dono camel cart me baithe aur pure registan ka chakkar lagaya.

Fir dono camel ride ke liye aaye.
Ashutosh ne camel pe chadhne ke liye Nidhi ko apna haath diya.Aur Nidhi ashu ke saath baith gai.

Jaise hi camel utha Nidhi ko dar lagne laga aur usne ashu ko dekhkar kahaa,"major please,muze neeche utar do.Muze dar lag raha hai."

Ashutosh: Nidhi,main hoo na?

Aur usne back hug le liye dono haath aage kiye aur fir Nidhi se puchha,"may i hug you?"

Nidhi sharma gai aur kuchh nahi boli sirf najare zuka li usne.

Ashu ne use peechese hug kiya yeh sparsh aaj kuchh aur hi tha.Nidhi had mixed feeling.Use khushi ho rahi thi,use sharam bhi aa rahi thi aur use darr bhi lag raha tha.

Ashutosh toh bilkul; speechless ho gaya tha.Usne halke se apne haat khol diye aur fir chupchap ho gaya.

Nidhi ne ashu ko dekha aur fir usko shararat karne ki suzi.

Usne ashu se puchha,"aap filme dekhte hai?

Ashu: Nahi?

Nidhi: gane toh sunate hi hoge?

Ashutosh:jyada nahi.Aapko shauk hai na?

Nidhi:ha

Ashutosh:toh aapka fav gana suna dijiye.

Nidhi ne ashu ke dono hatho ko dekhkar gana sunaya,"tumhe haq hai.Muzko bahome uthao tumhe haq hai.muze zindagi bhar ko chaho muze bhi haq hai."and she started staring at ashu.

Ashutohs was surprised to see nidhi's attitude and love in her eyes.

He just stopped Nidhi and said,"bus Nidhi,tumhari aankho se ab aasoo aa jayenge.Tumhari aankhe bolti hai Nidhi.In aankhome itna pyaar?Nidhi tum bhi muze bahoot chahne lagi na?

Nidhi: major,muze pata hi nahi chala ki main aapko kabse aur kaise chahne lagi?muze pata nahi tha ki mere jaisee ladki ke liye pyaar kya maine rakhta hai?muze Anji ne kahaa tha ki nidhi jis din tumhe pyaar ho jayega fir tum bahoot toot ke pyaar karogi.

Ashutosh was lost in her eyes for some time and Nidhi too.

Nidhi: major aap muze phone karenge na?yaad karenge na muze?ya bhul jayenge?

Ashutosh after hearing pull her in his arm and said," Nidhi,ab tum muze dara rahi ho.tumhi ne kahaa tha na ki pyaar me dar nahi.So,ab kya hua?muzpar bharosa nahi hai tumhe?

Nidhi: bharosa hai aappe.lekin

Ashutosh: dekha Nidhi pyaar ne hume kamjor karna shuru kar diya.Abhi toh humari manzil bahoot dur hai.

Nidhi: kamjor nahi hai.Main aapko abhi se miss kar rahi hoo major.Bus aapke muh se kuchh sunana hai apne barme.

Ashutosh: achaa toh aap chahti hai ki main aapki tareef karoo?

Nidhi:woh toh aap nahi kar sakte

Ashutosh: chalenge?woh bhi majo ko?

Nidhi: nahi chalenge nahi sirf dekhna chahti hoo ki aap mere barme kitna jante hai?

Ashutosh: Nidhi,aapko janane ke liye mera dil aur aankhe hi bahoot hai.Aap mere liye duniya ki sabse pyaari ladki hai.Ha thodi zagadalu hai.thodi pagal hai.lekin dil bahoot khubsurat aur i am crazy at you.I love you more than anything in the world.

Nidhi: zagadalu,pagal.ab toh main aapko nahi chhodungi.

Ashutosh: yahaa kuchh nahi kar sakti nidhi.hum log camel pe hai.Neeche utarenge fir jo chahe kar lena.Bus.

And they both started laughing together.


Mallika and Armaan on the way to temple

Armaan: Mallika,tum ghar pe baat karogi humare bareme ya fir main karoo?

Mallika: Armaan tumhe pata hai na main yeh nahi kar sakti.

Armaan: sweetheart,kisine kahaa hai pyaar kiya toh darna kya?

Mallika: tum fir filmi shuru ho gaye?

Armaan: it's ajoke part.Pyaar koi khel nahi.

Mallika: oh Armaan,not again.

Armaan ne car rok di aur Mallika ko ishare se pas bulaya.

Armaan ne mallika ko tight hug kiya aur uske forehead pe kiss karke kahaa,"Mallika,pata hai main bhagwan pe main wishwas nahi karta lekin tumhe dobara milne ke baad ab thoda bharosa hone laga hai god par.Toh main mandir unhe shukriya karne aur zindagi bhar ke liye tumhe maangna chahta hoo.Bus tum ab meri banake raho yahi meri dili tammanna hai.

Mallika:Armaan,Ab toh meri bhi yahi khwaish hai.Lekin main Nidhi ke liye bhi kuchh mangoongi.

Armaan: ha ashu ke liye mangana chahta hu main ki use koi aisee ladki mile jise dekhte hi woh khadoos,muchhad,akadu thoda pyaar karna sikh jaye.

Mallika: are kyon use itni galiya dete ho?woh toh kitna pyaara hai aur sobber hai.Thoda strict hai aur oosoolowala hai bus.Lekin time aane do use bhi pyaar ho jayega.Aur jab woh pyaar karega toh badi shiddat se nibhayega main itna toh samaz payi hu Ashutosh ko.

Armaan: ahah,badi maska polish ho rahi hai dewar ki.

Mallika : tumhe jalan hone lagi?

Armaan: cutie pie,woh meri jaan hai.Uski tareef kare toh muzse jyada khush koi nahi hoga

Mallika: chalo ab mandir chale?

Armaan: ne fir se mallika ko forehead kiss kiya aur bola,"chalo"




Ashutosh ne dheere se nidhi ko neeche utara.Aur dono hotel ki taraf badhe lunch karne ke liye.

Ashutosh: Nidhi,ab tumhara aage ka kya plan hai?

Nidhi: bus aapko yaad karna,aapka naam liya,aapko message karna aur miss karna.

Ashutosh: Nidhi,ab kya karoo tumhara?

Nidhi: pyaar kijiye aur kya?

Ashutosh: wohtoh jab waqt aayega toh itna karoonga ki tum khud tang aa jaogi.

Nidhi: main us din ka intejaar karoongi besabri se.

Ashutosh: main Bhai aur mallika ji ki baat kar raha hoo.Aapki di baat karegi na aapke ghar par?

Nidhi: di,aur baat!no way.Lekin maine aur Anji ne socha hai ki DB aur baba se hum baat karenge.

Ashutosh: chalo,meri problem solve.

Nidhi: matlab?

Ashutosh: Bhai ghodi pe aur aapki di doli me baithegi tabhi toh humara rasta khulega.

Nidhi ne ashu ki taraf pyaar se dekha,"suchmuch."

Aur badle me ashu ne sirf Nidhi ka haath apne hatho me liya aur bola,"main intejaar karoonga aapka meri zindagi me aane ka."


Hope you all like this chap
Edited by parmarA - 11 years ago

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