Os Pyaar ki intehaan [chap 30 page 137 - Page 19

Originally posted by: Veenaper

Alka this was a lovely update. Loved the way Armaan promises Mallika that he will bring her to the Rann Utsav every year. Ashu and Nidhi seeking each other and feeling those first emotional pangs.

You have described the ambience of the Gujarati hotel very beautifully and the staff there attuned to Major Ashutosh's tastes and instantly serving his favourite food. Ashu and Nidhi enjoying the meal together with the rest. Armaan as always true to his character and bringing some fun to the table. Nidhi giving complete support to her sister - yes this is what siblings are for - they understand each other perfectly and this must have given Mallika a lot of relief. Ashu and Nidhi both looking out of the window with the moon as their witness and lost in thoughts of each other - you have now left us in a state of apprehension as to what is next ?

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991

Thank you for the lovely update

Fantastic

But i felt it was short this time Alkaji..😉

Liked all the Ashni conversation 😊

Originally posted by: gargpoo

me third🥳

lovely update di..liked nidhi's pov..liked ashni convo very much

waiting for next!!😊

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Thank you for the update...

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Thanks for the update Alka di.. ! I will review more later 😊

Originally posted by: suku_07

Thanks Alka ji...will read it asap 🤗

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Wow Alka di, that was a nice update ! Pyaar ka izhaar ho hi gayaa ! ⭐️❤️

Nidhi here is more bold n sure but Ashu took time n her feelings, her words, her pouts made him realise what she means to him... ! Lovely narration Alka di.. 👏

It happens in the love.. we keep hesitating n love confirms our mind, heart n soul.. ! Nidhi n Ashu are in love n " aage jo hoga dekhi jayegi "

Loved to know Ashu's feelings abt his job n his fears ki kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hai.. But here also, Nidhi is more than confidant abt her love n acceptance. Its a good move in the story n the way you have progressed the convo .. with Ashu forcing Nidhi's hand.. achha lagaa 😛 Good that she is not fear of an Army life.. cos her Baba was a Col. as well. !

Nice to know their feelings abt how they will live without meeting.. n Nidhi's words are medicine for them..

Nidhi: [ with shy] ashutosh,hum dono ka profession aisa hai ki woh hume samay ki ehsaas karaata rahega.Lekin hum usme se bhi humare pyaar ke liye waqt nikaal lenge.Kuchh yaden hum bana lenge.

This is the real feeling when two ppl are in love.. very lovely lines ... 👏

Ashutosh: take her hand ih his hand and pur her hand on his own eyes and said," Yeh,dil yeh chehera,sur aakhopar."

Wow !!!

Aur usne apni aankhe band kar di

Thanks for this lovely update di.. now will be waiting to know what others will take their love as.. how Mallika n Armaan will take it.. n i am sure they will accept n encourage their love n feeelings !

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Cute update...😊

Originally posted by: suku_07

Very nice update Alka ji... Ashu and Nidhi accepting there feelings for each other as well as assuring Ashu about their relation... very nice. .. loved it !!

Originally posted by: aardhan

Hi Alka

Good morning

Just read chapter 5... Armaan is an extrovert but I liked his style of proposing. So when will Mallika tell Nidhi? And on this side the romance between Ashni is in full bloom, both are starting to get feelings for each other.

Also a little professional information about the two brothers... such ideal citizens! 👏 So nice set up, where do they go from here? 😃