OS: Shadows from the Past (Chap 12, Pg. 117, Note, Pg. 130, VM Pg 131)

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

The best reviewer of our forum has stepped into the writing world...

Welcome Aarti di, this is my utmost pleasure reading u...

This OS is very beautiful... Please continue this... You've taken up something, that has been brushed under the carpet... Thanks for bringing it out...

Will love to read ur take on it... Continue soon...

Love ya..
Aazeen..

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suku_07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Beautiful OS Aarti ji... I am so glad that you finally took up writing... I am so so excited now...😳

I just loved all your views... eagerly waiting for next part ...😃

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Anjani9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Aarti, Waiting for the second part...

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Veenaper

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Arti, welcome back. Just read your os - brilliant piece of writing. Your way of expressing things always had the hallmark of a gifted writer. Also, the subject you have chosen is noteworthy coz it was left unfinished in the serial - Nidhi was not given her due several times and there was no remorse on Ashu's part.

Waiting for the next update.

Edited by Veenaper - 12 years ago

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sonyjknum

@sonyjknum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Wow,Aarti,thanks for this gift,loved reading it,I know,you had mentioned in some post that you so wanted Ashu to apologize to Nidhi,am glad you have picked this issue,look forward to more from you

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pansy123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Hi!

We have never interacted. I'm pansy read your OS. Liked it and want to congratulate on your first OS.

Keep it up.

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deepaligupta197

@deepaligupta197

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Congratulations on the beautiful OS Aarti! Amazing n excellent writing skills!

There is no better than adversity. Every defeat , every heartbreak , every loss , contains its own seed, it's own lesson on how to improve your performance the next time. Something we wanted to c in the original track but Ashu's character never seemed to have learned. Wud love to c how u take the story forward!

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Bhavit Kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Aarti, very happy to see you, and that with an OS,, Wow ! Its so wonderfully written n taken the lost part from the show.. ⭐️ Its so natural for Ashu to come forward, even after a long time,, but sumtimes things happens as such n one recalls the phase with an apology in the mind .. well its in his mind n i wanna see how he comes with it ... Will be waiting for your next update..

Fine words n natural emotions depicted.. very well written Aarti.. 👏

Plzz continue... its a treat to read ! 😊

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Aardhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Friends, thank you all for reading and liking this first part. 😳

Sorry I have been late in responding. My entire family, especially the kids have been suffering from stomach infection all last week which has kept me both busy and very tired. 😭

And I have also been struck with 'Packingvitis'. 😔

So, i will get back to each of your comments soon. And also get the next part out. Please bear with me and my crazy schedule at this moment!

Thank you all. 😳 ❤️ 🤗

Edited by aardhan - 12 years ago