OS: Shadows from the Past (Chap 12, Pg. 117, Note, Pg. 130, VM Pg 131) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Amu_05

loved this os.very thoughtful and emotional too..!!
Mistakes... when it came to Nidhi they were many.. so true!
I loved ur writing ..pls continue.

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Loved this OS.The writing style is straight forward as well as beautiful.

Thank you Jayashree, I do realize that the entire OS is a narration of thoughts in prose form and mostly in the past tense. Glad you liked it. 😃

The subject taken is commendable. Though I loved Ashutosh in this serial I always felt that he has taken his wife for granted. He was n't as compassionate and loving as Nidhi is towards him. His attitude started to change and he has fully accepted Nidhi as a Very good doctor after CM's surgery.

You are correct and this is one thing I have commented on in various instances. I do feel this aspect of their relationship was not handled as well, there was no dwelling on the past and no projection of feelings either. Hence this attempt. And you are also right about Ashu's attitude towards Nidhi and the subsequent change.

Loved this part and waiting for the next.

Thanks, very soon I will post the next chapter.

Originally posted by: Pardeshi.Mithu

Excellent👍🏼 will wait for the next part...Can u plz PM me when u update the next part plz plz plz!!!😳

Originally posted by: swati62

Wow. Always thought u had a great potential to write OS or FF . Amazing start waiting for the next chapter.

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Aarti..you wrote an OS??

YES! Finally!! got to read a scene / version from that analytical mind of yours!

Kya karen... lagta hai India he hawa paani ka asar hai! 😉 I finally got bitten by the same bug that bt you more than a year ago. 😆

Enjoyed it thoroughly ..waiting for the continuation.. when is it going to come?? Please don't tell me the next part is after you reach your home!! thats so not acceptable..

Originally posted by: suku_07

Awesome Aarti ji... reading it now...

Originally posted by: saibanu

Thank you for this OS ...I will read it and come back with review soon 😃

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

Arti...your hidden talent is now out in open...it was a treat to read this os...pl carry it forward soon.

Originally posted by: gargpoo

fantastic OS aarti ji👏...pls continue soon

Originally posted by: ariyadasa

Superb Aarati 👏

want to give a long comment ,

i'll back soon