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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: bawaswift
Hatke story Alka di ! 👏⭐️
Nice to see the characters taking turns !
i will comment more later !
Loving it.. both the parts till now are very interesting ! 😊

Mera os yahaa khatam ho jata hai bawa.I will wait for your comment

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ttrocks
Part-2 is awesome!! Nidhi ne Mallika ko jo jawab diya woh toh standing ovation ke kaabil hai!! 👏👏👏

Ashu knowingly gets defeated in game coz he wishes his Nidhi to win always... But at the same time, he doesnt leave the opportunity to tease her by telling her not to cheat in game 😃 How sweet is that!!

And AshNi lovestory is amazing in this OS also but wedding will take place only after Nidhi completes her studies!! Superb!!

Loved this OS very much Alkaben!! ❤️❤️❤️ Thank you so much for this cute & sweet lovestory of AshNi 🤗

Yes Tupu,i wanted ashu to pamper Nidhi in real ktlk too that she is too young than him.I still want that.I just love too watch that scene in KTLK.😭 But in my each and every os i just tried hard to put that scene where ashu is pampering Nidhi .Thank you tupu🤗

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Sagi97

@Sagi97

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Alka Aunty achhha story hai. Agar Mallika ne ha kahan hota to humko Sujatha aunty ka FF padhne ko mila na (Pati-patni aur wo wala)?

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: s_danger
Alka Aunty achhha story hai. Agar Mallika ne ha kahan hota to humko Sujatha aunty ka FF padhne ko mila na (Pati-patni aur wo wala)?

sagi,welcome to my thread.Agar mallika ne ha kahi hoti toh ashu India kya karne aata?aue muze EMA pasand nahi hai.I just love my ashni.

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suku_07

@suku_07

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awesome story Alka ji... I really believe you should write a full fledged FF... it was so beautiful !!

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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Alkaji,

Today I am Second.

aap bhi iss race mein aagayi?😲😆

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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Alkaji..main aap se katti... meri mallika ko aapne kya din dekhne ko diya😆😆

Very nice story ji...

Main abhi puchne wali thi... Alkaji kaha hai.. phir ye post dekha.

Main ek aur baar padhungi..poora review dene keliye..

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

aap bhi iss race mein aagayi?😲😆

Kyakare. Bacchonke sath rahte rahte bacchi bangayi.

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

very nice story alka di..i read both parts in a go...

rohan & mallu😆 bechara rohan..

loved these lines..main sir se pyaar karti hoo aur use nibhane ki taqat bhi rakhti hoo.Aur sir par muze muzse jyada bharosa hai.Pyaar woh nahi jo woh kahe aur main samazoo.Mera pyaar toh woh hai jo unke bina kahe unke dil ka haal main samazti hoo.Unki aankhe udaas ho usse pahele mera dil roye aisa mera pyaar hai.Zindagi me na unhe kisine haraya hai na mere hote hue unhe koi hara payega.

loved this line so so much Mallika,thank you for saying me No😆

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Mallu n Rohan.. ! First Part..

Now thats a fine pair you have combined with Alka Di ! Actually its nice to see them together.. 😛

Ashu is so worried abt her studies that he has forced her to study more.. but Mallu is mallu after all.. how strange that she is after money, luxury, n all the aisho aaraam.. sahi hai.. jab sab h toh kuch karna hi kyun pade.. 😉 But what an attitude she has shown to Ashu.. the high grand shaadi n guests n HM , n pata nahi kya kya ..? Ashu loved this Mallu ? Oh.. He rightly said that " paise aur power se uper hai padhai "

Love Ashu when he said that Fir bhi chahta hoon ki tu khush rahe.. 👏 ⭐️

Now mallu is back... lets see what she wanna say this time...