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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part second..

Mallu is back after 10 long years .. n what a move in the story !
Wow !!! What a tennis Match di ! Loved it.. Kaash aisa kuch Ktlk mein dekhne ko mil jaataa 😉 😃
Haah.. Mallika told such a sad story abt Rohan.. Oh.. bechara.. Mallu hogi toh yahi hoga kisika bhi haal.. 😛 And, the marriage was not registered.. How mismanaged Mallu cud be.. ?
Loved the way Ashu told her abt Nidhi n thankd her that he is blessed to have Nidhi in his life.. ⭐️⭐️ And Nidhi's lovely answer must be given pat on her back.. ! " Unki aankhen udaas ho uss se pehle mera dil roye.. aisa mera pyaar hai.. "
Ashu conviniently said.. achha hua jo tumne mujhe na kahaa..now even i believe in destiny when Nidhi forced him to believe.. wow !
Thanx for saying me NO.. 👏⭐️
What a lovely n short story with such a Big truth lying in it.. that believe in you Destiny n it will give you your dues at the right time.. ! If we go after money n say NO to the love .. the true love.. then even Destiny falls upon n gives a jerk of life.. Mallika ran after money n got nothing.. Ashu walked with time n got EVERYTHING !!!
Loved this OS.. Wud love to have more stories from you Alka Di !
Thanx !!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
WOW Alkaji
Tussi toh Chaa Gaye Yaar.
This was wonderful.
I thoroughly enjoyed it beginning to end.



main chhoti hoo lekin Balika nahi hoo
I absolutely loved this line


How about another OS. Will be waiting.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

This is just an os.No offence to anybody.Just read and enjoy.

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London Medical College:

Ashutosh: Lekin Mallika,abhi kyon?padhai toh puri kar lo.

Mallika: Ashutosh,muze pata hai ki tum muzse pyaar karte ho aur shadi karna chahte ho.Lekin tumse shadi karke muze kya milega?Ek toh tum ho hi boar.Muze meri zindagi me woh sab Luxury chahiye jo muze sirf rohan hi de sakta hai.


Ashutosh:mallika aisa kuchh nahi hai.Lekin tum pahele apni padhai toh khatam kar lo.

Mallika: Dekho ashu,tumhe Neurosurgeon banana hai na toh tum bano na?Rohan ke papa bahoot bade politician hai aur unka hospital hai bahoot bada.Woh trustee hai waha ke.toh Rohan ko aur muze kuchh karne ki jaroorat nahi hai.Toh humne shadi karne ka soch liya hai.

Ashutosh: Lekin Mallika,tum adhuri padhai...

Woh baat sun ne ke liye Mallika waha nahi thi.

Ashutosh thoda mayoos ho gaya.Mun me woh bola,"Mallika,itna achha career chhodne ki bhool mat karo please.Gujara hua pal lautkar nahi aata.Muzse shadi nahi karni mat karo lekin padhai toh puri karo.
Why KP sir didn't get this idea 😆

Do din ke mallika aur Rohan Ashutosh se milne aaye.

Rohan: Mr Ashutosh,hum kal shadi kar rahe hai.

Ashutosh: Congrates Rohan and congrates Mallika.

Mallika: aise nahi ashu.Tumhe shadi me aana hai.Ekdum grand wedding hoga.Rohan ke papa ne pura sea hall book kiya hai.pure 15,00 guest aayenge.Sab VIP hai.Aur mera shadi ka joda hi pure sawa lac ka hai aur Jwellary pure 2.50crore ki hai.tum jaroor aana ashu.

Ashutosh: Mllika,main tumhe khush dekhna chahta hoo.

Mallika: Aur ha ashu,hum Honeymoon ke liye Europe ja rahe hai aur woh bhi pure 3 mahine ke liye.I am so excited.

And she turned towards Rohan,"chalo Rohan,hume bahoot sari shopping karni hai chalo."
Correct features of Mallika Alka Superb 😡

Aur woh dono wahaa se chale gaye.

Ashu bas sochata raha,"yeh daulat ke peechhe pagal ho gai hai mallika.kash koi use samaza sakta ki paisa aur power se upar hai padhai.Lekin abhi uske aankho par patti hai.Lekin fir bhi chahta hoo ki tu khush rahe.
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After complete ten years.

Mallika landed on Lucknow airport.

Mallika mun me: kaash maine Ashutosh ki baat maan li hoti toh yeh din nahi dekhna padta.Pahle ashu se milti hoo fir sochungi ki aage kya karna hai?

And she entered in KGH gate.And she was shocked to see Ashutosh there.

Mallika: Yeh Ashutosh hai?i can't believe this.Suchmuch yeh ashu hai ya meri aankhe dhokha de rahi hai.
Writing next part too.Hope you will like this os.Hit like button and comments please.

Will post next part in half an hour

I like this chap Alka as i love this as always you write what we want to see



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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

Part 2



Ashutosh and one beautiful girl were playing Long tennis in the Tennis court.
Ashutosh looks like model.Fit and fine.
Ha kuchh baal safed ho gaye the.Lekin chashme ki wajah se woh aur bhi handsome lag raha tha.
In the tennis court
Ashutosh: Nidhi,tum fir se cheating karne lagi?dekho ab baar baar aisa nahi chalega.
Nidhi was poting ashu." Kya dr Ashutosh,har baar toh muze khud hi jeeta dete hai aur ab fariyad karte hai.
Ashutosh: ha kya karoo?pyaar joh karta hoo tumse.
Nidhi: Oh ho,muze pata hai ki aap muze harte hue nahi dekh sakte aur na main aapko.
Ashutosh came to hug Nidhi.
Nidhi: yeh kya?koi dekh lega.
Ashutosh: toh dekhne do,main kya darta hoo kya kisise?
lOVELY AND CUTE SCENE THE WAY ASHU talks not giving me a chance to think that he's already 43 years old if this happens really in KTLK then we all Dil garden garden Ho gaya 😆😆😆

Ashutosh is in his cabin

And mallika knocked the door of his cabin.

mallika: main i come in?
Ashu: without seeing her: come in
Mallika: hi ashutosh.
Ashuosh now shocked
😡 oh I hate mallika when she was weeping Alka will see ?
And she start weeping.
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😡as usual
Mallika: Lekin ashutosh!woh toh tumse kitni chhoti hai na?

Nidhi knocked the door and entered in ashu's cabin.

Nidhi: Dr Mallika,main chhoti hoo lekin Balika nahi hoo.Sir muze jabardasti karke nahi laye hai.main sir se pyaar karti hoo aur use nibhane ki taqat bhi rakhti hoo.Aur sir par muze muzse jyada bharosa hai.Pyaar woh nahi jo woh kahe aur main samazoo.Mera pyaar toh woh hai jo unke bina kahe unke dil ka haal main samazti hoo.Unki aankhe udaas ho usse pahele mera dil roye aisa mera pyaar hai.Zindagi me na unhe kisine haraya hai na mere hote hue unhe koi hara payega.nahi sir?
Ashtuosh:Nidhi ke pas jakar:Muskurate hue: Nidhi,ho gaya aapka?meri zansi ki rani.Chalo ab class me jao.Main aata hoo.
Nidhi: ji main jati hoo.
Nidhi was about to go and ashu called her.
Ashutosh: Nidhi?
Nidhi: mudakar : Jee?
Ashutosh: I love you Nidhi.
Nidhi: I love you too sir.
Ashutosh turned to mallika: Mallika,achha hua ki tumne muze na kahaa.Warna muze meri Nidhi is bheed me kaise milti?Pyar ka asli matlab toh muze nidhi ne sikhaya hai.mallika,main destiny me believe nahi karta tha lekin Nidhi ne majboor kiya muze destiny me manane ke liye

what an End but i thought you may o further
But love it sorry for the late reply
I am ready get any punishment




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