Kashmakash S2 Th 4 Chap 10 Pg 101 July 01 - Page 30

Originally posted by: arpitajaan

OMG OMG OMG suja I luvd each & every thing in this chap...Will read it again and get back...tears were trickling down...really I had a myriad of emotions...you r incredible I tell u...was thinking willn't pester 4 updates...yeh tho tumhara hi kassor hai...ethna acha likhthi hai tho kaise update nahin mangoon...yeh dil mange more...

Originally posted by: bc123456

Thank you for a heart touching update , I read it the morning but was not able to reply , loved nidhis acceptance , no cribs or fights just pure happiness of knowing that he loved her , amazing writing , Ashu too was terrific , hope they can convince CV, loved this chapter

Originally posted by: shreyalvashni

Di kya chapter tha majja agya yar

Originally posted by: saibanu

Hi Sujatha di 😊

Once again you are back with amazing chapter, beautifully written '👏👏

I am liking this Ashu , he is bit different from kashmakash 1 'there he was bit hesitant even after his confession but this time he took neat time to think over the consequences and confessed his love ..so I think even if CV disagree this Ashu is not going to back off '.😳

wow..you finally got it!! Yes, sai..this Ashu is indeed a little different from KSMK 1 Ashu.

I thought, once Ashu comes back he will take some time to come infront of nidhi to justify his action and I was expecting bit of displeasure from nidhi's side but there again Sujatha di 'you caught me off guard ! Even though I see guilt in him for hurting Nidhi but then again , he is all set to make her happy '.he look determined with his choice and about Nidhi'.Wow I am liking it 😃

its more like he gave her a choice to back off..she didn't take it..now he won't let her go.

It's cute how Ashu became so impatient to see her and when he get glimpse of her he could not even move '.Nidhi really thought that it's just her imagination (Reminded me of twilight saga where bella felt the same when Edward left her)😉 but liked convo between DR Kothari and Ashu. It gave him more clues about Nidhi state when he left her '.😳

Ashu walks towards his car and notices Nidhi walking towards his car from the other direction with backpack slung over her shoulder. He quickens his steps: No class?

Nidhi: I skipped. I couldn't..I didn't..

Ashu opens the door for her in acceptance of her garbled reply which made perfect sense to him as he couldn't and he didn't either.

This scene is good, I liked it.they both are ardent to be with each other and Nidhi's questioner made me think that she was waiting for single chance to grab him and ask this..it shows somewhere she was guilty that she might have pushed her emotions too much on him and because of that he had to leave everything and go away '.but glad that Ashu cleared her doubts .

And the confession by Ashu was very honest and emotionally charged'I liked it👏👏

More than anything, I liked next morning scene when Ashu see bunch of red roses in his cabin '.OMG! That sight must have been worth seeing 'Ashu with his huge grin .☺️

😃 i know..

So now Ashu is all set to take nidhi in his life but awaiting another hurdle Cv and Db . Wonder what ashu will do now to convince them '..But I am sure this time Ashu is not going to back off!😳

😳 really??Hmmm..lets see aage hota hain kya..😉

PS: - Read your note, not to worry, I trust you... And I also know that story just now started'.😉

🤗

Waiting for next till then take care

Cya 😃

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Good morning guys..slept at 2 and got up at 5!! I am still half asleep..

So, how was the chapter?

Romance..missing, huh!! I kind of expected this response. 😆 I did not rush. Keep Kashmakash One aside for a minute and read this as an independent story and you will realize what I am telling. He left her assuming that she would move on. It literally killed him to leave but he did..because he believed its for her own good. But contrary to all his hopes and fears..yes, FEARS, she didn't move on. She was just out there..waiting. Can he resist her any more? Yet he did. He took time to explain things to her and told her to take however long required before giving her final decision. He knew what she would be giving up if she chose to have a life with him. But for her, as she said, the decision had been made a very long time back. No matter what, she wanted to be with him. He backed off once friends..and now, the temptation is just too much once she comes right out and tells him that she still wants him. He would want to snatch her and cling on to her with everything in him. His patience..his self control..his self sacrificing attitude..everything ended at that point. Its like "I gave you a chance but you didn't take it. Now you are mine and thats it." He would not want to "waste" more time in wooing and romancing.

But who says, romance has to end because they decided that they want to get married immediately? For all you know, it could be the beginning of something more beautiful. So, please be patient and await for the rest of the story to unfold.

Kashmakash One is a love story of Ashutosh and Nidhi. Kashmakash Two is the story of Ashutosh, traumatized child who grows up to be a man with pain and fear ruling him until love slips through into his heart and leaves him no choice. Its about his inner struggle when faced with something that totally consumes him. And its the story of Nidhi, who ends up having to make a choice at every stage of her life and stand firm and strong to face the consequences of the choices that she has made.

Now, I will reply to all your comments one by one.

Love you all for your patience and trust. Its my most treasured possession. Truly.

Suvika.

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Sujathaji, You must be sleeping now...it needs special skills to be night owl..

don't tell me..i was a proverbial night owl before my kids...now forcing myself to do this early to bed early to rise thing..and yes, i was sleeping this afternoon..no need to rub it in 😡😆

Thank you for the midnight surprise...👏

But you made my assumption wrong again...I HATE YOU...😡

😲 what did i do??

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

Something snaps in him at that and he catches her shoulders and shakes her: Pyaar nahi karta? MEIN tumse pyaar nahi karta? Tumhaari ek jhalak dekhne keliye tarasta hoon. Tumhaari muskaan se mere din ki shuruvaad hoti hain..tumhaari hasi ki awaaz mujhe chain ki neend sulaati hain. Yeh 8 maheene kaise guzaare hain yeh sirf mein jaanta hoon. I couldn't breathe without thinking about you..I couldn't walk without thinking about the way you skip and bound in that paediatric ward..I couldn't talk without thinking about your musical voice..I couldn't eat..Nidhi ne khaana khaaya hoga na..She would have had her lunch, right? Its 2. She would get hungry and cranky otherwise. I couldn't drink that stupid tea..Nidhi ko elaichi wala chai pasand hain. Gaana sunne ki koshish karta hoon toh tumhaari awaaz goonjti hain kaanon mein..choogayi jism mera..kiske daaman ki hawaa..yahi gaaya tha na tumne uss din? Do you know how I felt after that? What I went through? How much I just wanted to come to you and..

these just so eloquently explain Ashu's pent up feelings...love was so palpable...the dam broke with Nidhi's cry...you described the intensity very nicely...loved it .

the whole chapter was too good and end was as predicted...NA by CV.

I m interested in how Nidhi and Ashu are going to change CV's mind !

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Thanks for lovely chapter Suvika. I loved this very much
Her eyes just continue to devour him: I..(she swallows) I..thought..I was..seeing..imagining..hallucinating..(Her hand gestures to the corridor vaguely trying to explain her earlier reaction of smiling at him and walking away without any acknowledgement.)

and their song SMS are too melodious.😊
Ab kya hoga? AshNi bhag jayenge😛

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Dont mind but your NOTE is more emotional and beautiful than update itself. I am already loving K2 and ready to be patient. Trust you completely.🤗

Originally posted by: Suvika.