FF: Intehaa Pyaar Ki: Chapter 4 Page 98, June 16. - Page 6

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Congrats on the new ff!

Thanks a ton.

the story has a legal background so we see Ashni in a new avataar!

Yes, I am just hope I can do justice to the concept and legal background I have chosen.

The introduction of the chap starts with a luminescent, deeply moving account of a father and his son The two characters are flawed, conflicted, and bound to each other with a devotion almost beyond words. But the incidents used to describe their relationship have quiet an eloquence that will steal your heart. The tinge of humour u hv added is like icing on cake with extra toppings! The bhookhadtal n the incident abt the fuss over the food Mr. Mathur shud eat was hilarious.

I am so glad it turned out well. the relationship here is gonna be different, as ashu is not adopted here.

@blur - I m delighted u think so.

The Ashu Armaan friendship has been affectionately drawn!

Yeah, especially girls who study you more than they study your subject." Armaan teased at which he glared and Armaan continued...

I am not listening to anything you say buddy, nor giving you a choice. You just tell me, in which restaurant do I book a table for your date"

These excerpts show the bond they share -amiable , sensitive , n trustworthy!

Oh! Deeps, thank you so much. This is exactly what I wanted to portray.

Nidhi has been intro as young brooding lawyer with an imprudent attitude . Her self thot

Her life would be set if he marries her. All her ambitions including her biggest dream, would be fulfilled. He would be the perfect means to fulfill them

shows her to have high aspirations!

Really? stay tuned is all I can say for the moment 😉😉

I did not realise she has been paired up with Rohan till she finally said Yes, I will, Rohan"

Manages to maintain a readers interest!

Well, I can't write anything without some suspense - m helpless u know. 😆😆

but I m glad I could maintain the suspense.

Ashu Mallu on a date n discussing cases😆. Seriously! But seems like its not only Armaan but Mallu too , who understands Ashu so well!

lawyers hain to cases hi discuss karenge na 😆😆. that is their mutual interest na? yes, they are three friends who share a good understanding.

The "size" episode again shows u hv a flair for humour! Brought out well!

Thank you. I was actually scared that the humor will fall flat.

Two parallel stories , Ashu Mallu n Rohan Nidhi , interesting! Waiting to see what u unfold in the upcoming chapters!

Yes, the upcoming chapters are gonna be challenging to write.