Originally posted by: deepaligupta197
OK as promised , here is the review! Read n decide whether i hv managed to compel u to update ASAP or not😊
Sorry Deeps, really really sorry, I could not reply earlier, but I typed it up earlier in the day but lost it - isiliye mood kharab ho gaya and did not want to type again in that mood.
But really thank you for this beautiful and long review. Yes m motivated now to type quickly.
This was soo worth the wait and to get it earlier then it was planned is so awesome in itself . The flow and pace is perfect, you are literally hanging on every word.
Well, I am really thankful to have such loyal and loving readers who get happy if I post earlier - I feel overwhelmed by all you love.
I am glad u like the pace and flow,
@bold - thank you for saying this. its taking a lot of hard work to see that every word I type has a reason/meaning.
Basically a chap of magic(saints), love with some interesting twisted plots.
Thanks - I hope I could do justice to the verses u provided me with, did I meet ur expectation?
Deep breath, and I cudn't wipe that big goofy grin off my face. I cudn't guess you were mocking with this Rohan Nidhi proposal issue.
Strange thing is even though Rohan's proposal was cheesy, no one suspected it was fake - I thought someone would definitely catch me 😛😛😆😆
These teenagers party hard and live rich. Nidhi's wish to transform from high class girl to high society princess shows she's smart, beautiful, and strong headed.
Exactly... but u think she is smart? in wat sense?
"Love? What is love Anji? Wohi jo filmo me dekhte hain? Come on Anji, grow up" she chided.
She knows exactly what she wants n how to get it! Obstinate n endeavoring Nidhi!
Hehe! Yes, she is hell bent on marrying Rohan, lets see if she can resist Ashu's charms.
Anji , another adorable character of ur story who is concerned about her friend nd her stand abt life.
She didn't understand life at all. For her, life was all about enjoyment and indulgence. Indeed I don't even know how I managed to keep my friendship intact with such a self-centered person like Nidhi. But the fact is that I genuinely love her and am worried for her future.
The extract clearly shows Anji has all elements of frndship in her : accountabiliy , reliability , honesty n truly cares n loves the selfcentered Nidhi!
PERFECT description of Anji and her friendship/love for Nidhi👏👏👏👏
Apt use of lyrics , clearly signifies Mallikas state of mind who immensely loves Ashu n expects to b loved by him.
Thank you, I actually had to sit for hours to find this song. although m crazy ant old songs, this song was never on my list so had to listen to it thrice to convince myself of its suitability.
When Ashu tagged along with Mallika to the saints house the last thing he expected was to meet a girl.. But this wasn't just any girl.. Even more surprising Ashu seemed truly mesmerized by her. I love it when characters need to make choices. It is all about making those mistakes and figuring out what directions you want to go in in life. The protagonist is torn between two suitors who personify battling concepts that that the protagonist is wrestling with.
@Bold - Awesome. At the cost of giving hints about the future story, I have to say you summed it up perfectly..👏👏👏
And that girl? My goodness! What was she? An enigma? Bilkul aandhi ki tarah aayi aur toofan ki tarah, mujhe bechain karke chali gayi! Was she actually for real? Or did I hallucinate?
Clearly shows his inner turmoil, a form of what love conquers can all mean!
Do you think its love already? 😛😛
So how wud Ashu n Nidhi pair up , what abt Mallika .Okay, the anticipation is driving me mad n I have no theories to put forward , so post the next chap.