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Posted: 12 years ago
1. I think they would meet -Ashu's b'day party???
good guess - hehehe
yaar poonam aap bhi hadd karte ho. why would she even be invited to his party when they still haven't met - do u invite someone whose very existence is unknown to u to ur party?
2Ashu k mind me nidhi ki aankhe aa rahi hongi...😆😆

nahi yaar, ashu ko toh uski aankhen pahli baar tabhi dikhi jab he closed his eyes to sleep that night.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Shirley...

Have read the chap...

1st of all it is superb ji...

I've read so many ffs on Ashni till date... But have never seen such a Brat Nidhi ever... Initially I felt her to be like Geet of Jab We Met, but reading further, I was really shocked... I mean, just b'coz she doesn't wanna work hard, she wanna marry a regular flirt like Rohan... She wanna b a spendthrift, n impress hi family making Tea... I mean, seriously??? Main hardly 8th std mein thi, jab se I'm preparing tea... Thats really too much...

Anji is again the samajhdar one... N cautious... But, nids has no ears to her...

Again, wat was that at Swami ji's place??? Shirley, how u r able to surprise me everytime...? Swami ji said, AshMa are not made for each other...??? (outside se bura lag raha tha, but andar se, my dil was doing Dhinka-chika...)

loved Armaan's antics wearing a Dupatta n doing Aarti n all... Loved the family scene... Nice song selection... Cud really imagine the scene...

Chaliye ji... Awesome update... Next one?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

My looonnnggg review lost somewhere... I hate it...

oh no yaar! same thing happened to me when I typed my response to Deeps' review.
Pl. type it again buddy.
And yes, I read ur ch 4. it was fab. will give a detailed review soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Hey Shirley...

Hey Aazeen, Thank you so very much for typing it up again. I can understand how frustrating it can get. I myself had the same experience just today.

Have read the chap...
1st of all it is superb ji...
Thank you!
I've read so many ffs on Ashni till date... But have never seen such a Brat Nidhi ever... Initially I felt her to be like Geet of Jab We Met, but reading further, I was really shocked... I mean, just b'coz she doesn't wanna work hard, she wanna marry a regular flirt like Rohan... She wanna b a spendthrift, n impress hi family making Tea... I mean, seriously??? Main hardly 8th std mein thi, jab se I'm preparing tea... Thats really too much...
Yes this Nidhi is the complete opposite of all nidhis we have seen so far,
@Bold -that's exactly the point I wanted to make and the actual fact is that, she still does not know how to make tea, but has to learn soon because of her db.

Anji is again the samajhdar one... N cautious... But, nids has no ears to her...
Absolutely correct!

Again, wat was that at Swami ji's place??? Shirley, how u r able to surprise me everytime...? Swami ji said, AshMa are not made for each other...??? (outside se bura lag raha tha, but andar se, my dil was doing Dhinka-chika...)

Oh did I really surprise you Aazeen? I am very happy if I did. Aap bhi kamaal karte ho - achchha bhi lag raha tha aur bura bhi? 😕
loved Armaan's antics wearing a Dupatta n doing Aarti n all... Loved the family scene... Nice song selection... Cud really imagine the scene...
Thank you so much🤗

Chaliye ji... Awesome update...
Shukriya khoob khoob dhanyawad ji.
Next one?

Sabr Aazeen Sabr...😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sukh bhi ho raha tha aur khushi bhi... Becoz, I cud connect wid this AshMa story... N felt them to be a nice couple... So felt bad for them...

But, at the end of the Day, we love Ashni couple... N coz the deserved place is to be vaccated soon by mallu, makes me feel happy... Thats y...

But, I really wonder, ashni ka couple banega kaise...? They are polar opposites after all...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Sukh bhi ho raha tha aur khushi bhi... Becoz, I cud connect wid this AshMa story... N felt them to be a nice couple... So felt bad for them...

But, at the end of the Day, we love Ashni couple... N coz the deserved place is to be vaccated soon by mallu, makes me feel happy... Thats y...

Hmm ab samajh me aaya... I consider it an achievement that you all like this AshMal couple.

But, I really wonder, ashni ka couple banega kaise...? They are polar opposites after all...

Yes, now that I have taken so much pains to build up AshmAl bonding, its gonna be a big challenge to hve u all accept AshNi... lekin its gonna be a bumpy ride for sure both me and the readers
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sshirley

Yaar, m having too much fun here 😆😆😆[/DIV]



Koi nahi type your chapters as fast as you can they we will have fun too..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suku_07



Koi nahi type your chapters as fast as you can they we will have fun too..

Sure Ma'am
bas chap 4 ke end pe pahunchi hoon - just 1 page or a lil more to write.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sshirley


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Sure Ma'am


bas chap 4 ke end pe pahunchi hoon - just 1 page or a lil more to write.



Good girl..! Keep writing.. !
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suku_07



Good girl..! Keep writing.. !

I just hope my editor is awake, once she gives the okay for this chapter, then only I can plan the next one.

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