Os Missing my mine[Mallika's presence] - Page 2

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Kitna acha likha Alka...👏 main waapas ek aur baar padhungi...

bilkul scene mein chali gayi hoon...😳

Originally posted by: aardhan

Once again very nicely expressed Alka. The show and KPji were very unfair with Nidhi's character during adn after this track... they never showed Nidhi's feelings properly, her doubts, fears, lack of confidence, nothing. She could have died and no one bothered about it. How being humiliated again and again and made to feel as if she was useless at doing anything simply because she was young has affected her...

Ashu never said even a single sorry and Nidhi simply forgave him. It would have been really good for the show if they had dealt with the after effects of MAllika as a separate track. Then the viewers would have understood why Nidhi wanted time to have a baby, why she needed time to be able to trust Ashu to the extent to start a family with him... I am so happy you are expressing all what the show failed to do...

KPji was so obsessed with Mallika that he failed to think logically about the other characters. And then he showed Ashu's yearning for a baby so everyone understood and feltt bad but he did not show the other side of the coin, that is Nidhi.

Love this OS series Alka...Nidhi ki Diary seies...😊👏

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Once again an awesome chapter Alkaben... too good!! Have no words to express how heartwrenching it was to read what nidhi felt during mallu bhootni track... Each and every line that u have written, I wanted to see in ktlk show as well but all that we got was Ashu cribbing about his own biological child and then pregnant mallika and alsosome ppl came up with stories of satisfying Ashu's fatherhood desires in vicarious ways if Nidhi wasnt ready to give him his biological child etc.etc.😡😡😡 The story lost its original beauty at that point and then it never returned back... only SK-KK's charm pulled the show till its end.

How I wish, they should have explored Nidhi's psyche over mallika's gestures and Ashu's support to her... the same Ashu always trusted mallu but never trusted her despite he knew that Nidhi is the girl who selflessly gave him everything that she had in life and he lacked in his life... 😭 Agreed that Mallika instigated him but he too had lost his senses when he drove Nidhi out of his house in the middle of the night and when he combed mallika's hair... U have depicted Nidhi's emotions very very perfectly here... 👏

Ashu gave so much emotional pain to Nidhi but never officially apologized to her and still she never resented him. But when it was the time to start a family, she firstly decided to become independent in her career and asked for 2 years. The ppl who bashed Nidhi at that time, never bothered to think how she must have felt when Ashu believed mallika & didnt stop Nidhi from leaving the house in the middle of the night. How I wished to see the mallu bhootni track from Nidhi's angle also... what she wanted, what she got and how she felt then... How could have she trusted her husband for her child when she herself was not feeling secure in her marriage... And then KPji flung preggy mallu to us and then all those stupid tracks... AshNi separation, amar-aahna-bajrangi etc. etc. Nidhi's character was the most beautiful and had a lot of potential to evolve further but sigh... the writer never did justice to her character... after preggy mallu came khushi and that was it... the last straw on camel's back...

Hope with season2, they explore these things + Baba's ka makaan track. Please write about BKM issue - what nidhi felt as a motherless girl when she saw her father struggling for his life then... Ashu ko jab saati baatein pata chal hi rahi hai toh phir ghar bechte waqt Nidhi ke dil per kya beeti thi woh bhi toh pata chale... Please continue next part asap... am in love with ur OS... Cannot wait for next part.😃

Originally posted by: suku_07

It was superb Alkaben.. Really you potrayed Nidhi's thought so well.. Each and every line showed Nidhi's pain now want to see Ashu's reaction on this too..

Originally posted by: achiever

Nidhi's state of mind during Mallika's incidents very well put..

thnk god Ashu read this and hopefully undrstood ke chahe hum aage badh jaaye.. shayad.. ghav pe sorry bhi bol de.. lekin kuch ghav itne gehre hote hai ki.. shayad un kamzor palon mein vo ubhar kar aa jaate hai.. dil ko rula jaate hai.. a grave mistake is grave mistake.. if it has hurt deeply, it cannot b undone.. vo kehte hai na crack reh jaati hai..

Ashu-Nidhi have moved on from Mallika's incident bt still Nidhi's insecurities and fears and distrust is based on solid facts tht Ashu failed to reassure her from.. till he does tht.. Nidhi's cringing on Mallu's name will remain..

**sigh.**.KPji ki sakhi!

Originally posted by: andy.a

very nice os

beautifully written

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

thanks suku,i will write it till the evening