FF: Tu Hi Tu..Th 3 Chapter 9 Pg 102 Apr 30 - Page 78

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Posted: 12 years ago

😲😡😆 yes...definitely nice but
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Originally posted by: meena_kannan

Chapter 9 : Overall fantastic update !

Anji : ticking time bomb; apt description,😆 knowing how that one incident changed the lives of Nidhi, Ashutosh , their families etc, knowing fully well why this marriage took place etc she could not tolerate the gossip mongers conversation and she promptly put them in their place!

Music and song selection: It is commendable that you put your 100 % in everybit of the chapter , the lyrics well describe the feelings of various characters like Rohan , Anji etc👏👏

Then the dhamaka in the party, who called Ashu and made him move away from Nidhi???????

Loved the no nonsense , smart cop Rohan !

me too..am already half in love with this guy i tell you..so far in all my FFs, i showed open partiality towards Armaan..but this Rohan is making me

Nidhi is naturally upset about the party coming to an abrupt halt and the stress is causing her migraine attack , but this time she has her husbands moral support and seeing his genuine concern ,for the first time she asks to be held in his arms and comforted , loved that part !😊

yes. slowly she has started asking for what she wants instead of just accepting whatever he gives..that was what i wanted to show in that scene..

Ashu Rohan conversation: Interesting and unexpected turn of events! Someone is actually trying to harm Nidhi and the chandelier incident was not an accident but a deliberate attempt on Nidhis life ' Who and why?????????

Did not expect that Rohan would be the one to spill the beans to Ashu about Nidhis profound love ! Ashu has met Rohan only a couple of times but could immediately sense his love/ adoration etc for Nidhi but could not sense his wifes profound love / deep feelings towards him and so Rohan could not resist that part of his conversation !

Ashus self thoughts after Rohan left, well written👏 - shock , guilt etc , he is now all the more guilty about the way he has treated Nidhi, his taunts etc making him feel ashamed , he is shocked that he did not realise about Nidhis feelings etc.

his first instinct is to shake her awake and look into her eyes so that he could get the confirmation. He shakes his head a little as he rejects the thought of waking her up but as if unable to resist, slides in beside her and carefully pulls her into his arms so that her head once again rests on his shoulder.---Loved that part and the protective hubby ! Waiting to see how this relationship progresses further and if Ashu will confront Nidhi and get her confirmation!

all in good time Meena..all in good time...😳

The bus accident / chandelier incident / Aditi murder all could be interconnected- OMG ,unexpected , gripping part , lot of suspense ' No clues whatsoever ! So finally Aditi case reopened , cant wait for next update, pls update sooon!!!!!!!!!!

Friday morning. hopefully.

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😆 make sure your inbox have enough space 😉
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Originally posted by: ssktlk

excellent chap Suja👏👏👏. How interesting it is getting. So Aditi's killer is an Ashu deewani, like us forumwaasis😉,


🤣 what a way to put it Sanya..but one of the main forum Ashu deewani is missing in this thread...Vidisha..any chance that she is involved?? 😉😆

and now trying to harm Nidhi. Loved Rohan's dialogue with Ashu where he makes him aware of Nidhi's feelings, and then Ashu's flashback about his dialogues with Nidhi, beautiful way to bring it forth. You have kept up to everyone's expectations and challenged yourself, and am sure going to do so in the rest of the ff. Its not easy to write a thriller, you are doing it beautifully, keeping the romance intact. The chandelier scene was quite filmy I felt, but then this is true bollywood material. Keep up the good work and thanks for bringing this ff to us. Can't wait for the next.

I was named "Filmy Turags" by Fatima quite some time back...so no surprises there. 😛😆
Sanya..

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Posted: 12 years ago


I have my own reasons Mona! May b the whole planning started with Aditi's pregnancy nd when the truth was out nd Ashu threatened to kill her , he went ahead nd tried to frame Ashu. There r many more but I don't want Sujata to defend her characters so we can discuss it behind closed doors , what say?😆
Agreed

😆 make sure your inbox have enough space 😉

Will make sure. We don't have option to have extra space unlike your threads. If there is spamming open a new one😆

Sujatha, That reminds me of my last PM, it was too long. Hope you didn't mind length as well as content.
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Originally posted by: creativebird




😆 make sure your inbox have enough space 😉


Will make sure. We don't have option to have extra space unlike your threads. If there is spamming open a new one😆

Sujatha, That reminds me of my last PM, it was too long. Hope you didn't mind length as well as content.

😕 what PM Mona?? i did not get any...when did you send it?? 😕


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Posted: 12 years ago


I have no words to express how impressive chapter 9 is! . You tried your hand at murder mystery with bang and so far proved yourself to be a great story writer at that too.👏👏
Should we start talking to potential publishers?

i don't know..lets see how the rest of this FF shapes up and then decide..what say?😳
I object... We are talking after four and half FF here. It may help you decide how good of you at handling mystery but doesn't chage your ability of a versatile writer. So can seriously peruse.

Reception party has been described very flawlessly, full of emotions and excellent song selection. Extra praises for it. It emotes everyone's emotions so well and very appropriate to the situation.

thats what i felt when i first heard the song and went through the lyrics in google..

I love the lyrics of this song but I always felt it has been not lived up to its meaning the way it has been picturized. Though it fits very well with your scene.



Isn't it strange that Ashu could not read Nidhi's love which Rohan could, Nidhi could not read Rohan's love that Ashu could! But love blindfolds you to everyone else's feelings other than the one. One person becomes center of life. Perhaps Ashu also missed Nidhi's feeling because he was in love with Aditi and that realization is very painful at this time for Him.

correct...and very well said...this is a strange triangle indeed...

That's the flavor of your story.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvika.


Will make sure. We don't have option to have extra space unlike your threads. If there is spamming open a new one😆

Sujatha, That reminds me of my last PM, it was too long. Hope you didn't mind length as well as content.


😕 what PM Mona?? i did not get any...when did you send it?? 😕


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: creativebird


😕 i didn't receive any. 😕

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Sujaha
Sorry I didn't log in yesterday, was a busy day and this is a real surprise. I did not expect the next chapter so soon.

But what an interesting turn of event, and as usual I will give this some thought. and then come back with my detailed review. 😉 You know! 😃
Edited by aardhan - 12 years ago

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