FF: Tu Hi Tu..Th 3 Chapter 9 Pg 102 Apr 30

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#751

Originally posted by: Anjani9

<font color="#006600">You were supposed to exit 2 pages back naaa??????😛</font>

😡 🤣 I knew you would ask this question to me 😆

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SSA777

@SSA777

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#752

Wow!!! What a chapter!!! Love it... I was sitting on the edge of my chair while reading...wanting it to never end.👏👏

Well...so many questions...who did it???? Who killed Aditi? Who is trying to harm Nidhi? Just like Rohan, I feel it is another woman who is in love with Ashu...someone he may know.

Sujatha, please post the next chapter soon.

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deepaligupta197

@deepaligupta197

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#753

Talent hits a target no one else can hit; Genius hits a target no one else can see.

Perfect use of lyrics of the song to describe the feelings of the characters. The first two lines apt to describe the delicate nd loveable Chulbuli , followed by Rohan's feelings nd Anji lines " Jane kahan gum ho gaye..." . U truly deserve a round of applause for this one👏.

Coming to the next part of the story , quite an interesting twist! I went back to read all the chap once again. Like a Gud writer u hvn't played all ur cards yet!😆 But I worked out a few reasons to believe the culprit we are all looking for cud b Armaan . I don't mean to offend u , nd it's not random either. Looking back made me believe that the possibility of Armaan being the accused is high. Anyways wud sit back to see how U unfold the mystery!

The first line is truly meant for u , ur style of writing nd all the hardwork u put in.

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#754

Main aagayi...aap puche na puche mera review main dungi...

Pehle toh kya chapter tha boss!!! Mazza aagaya...the starting was just fab, perfect song i tell u aur Anji ke lines 'Woh,Jaane Kahan,Gum Ho Gayi,Phir Na Mili..
Jo Phoolon Si Thi,
Rus Hi Gayi, Phir Na Khili' ekdum perfect yaar...and uske baad Ashu and Nidhi joining them in their own way was cho chweet... par yeh kya ek pal main itma dhadam dhoodoom ho gaya...Nidhi ko koun maarna chaahega yaar? Aur Ashu ka koi lover? Aur yeh sab itne suddenly? Kya hain ye?

But u know i just loved the way Ashu ne Nidhi ko hug kiya aur pucha vo theek hain ya nahi,he is so shona i tell u...and that when they reach home those sweet things Awww it shows how much Ashu is concerned for Nidhi...and that line ki yeh tumhara haq hain Nidhi yaar main toh fida ho gayi hoon...it was like...like...Ashu sirf Nidhi ka hain Awww...Awww...Awww...

Then dhantana tana tana Ashu aur Rohan ka conversation dil khush kar ditta yaara aapne...everything was just bang on and jab Rohan starts leaving and then turns back and Ashu ko kehta hain ki Aapko meri aankhon main kya hain dikh gaya par Nidhi ki aankhon main pyaar nahi dikha it was like main iss scene main theatre main seete maarti thi...sachi...aur yeh sab sunne ke baad jab Ashu ko sab Nidhi se kahi hui baatein yaad aati hain,bichare ko kitna bura lagta hain na...paapam!!! :'(

And now pata chala ki kaise Aditi ka case phir khulne wala hain...intezaar nahi hota yaar aage kya hoga...chalo jaldi jaldi next chapter do abhi and don't tell ki aaj May 1st hain toh u r on leave...lol

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Swati Mehta

@swati62

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#755

This is becoming a real thriller.

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creativebird

@creativebird

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#756

First of all sorry for just one liner review for chapter 8. Overall chapter 7 and 8 are your areas of expertise in writing to me. I always loved the way you portray each character's emotion and developing relationships in words. Great work!

I have no words to express how impressive chapter 9 is! . You tried your hand at murder mystery with bang and so far proved yourself to be a great story writer at that too.👏👏

Should we start talking to potential publishers?

Reception party has been described very flawlessly, full of emotions and excellent song selection. Extra praises for it. It emotes everyone's emotions so well and very appropriate to the situation.

Anji starts walking towards the dias and Nidhi. Images keep flashing before her. An image of a 12-13 yr old mischievous Nidhi making faces and running away before she could catch her, Nidhi jumping the wall of her house to go and play cricket in the street, Nidhi pleadingly looking at Anji and extending her camera to her, Nidhi all scared and hurt with the crude comments from the boys, hiding behind Rohan, Nidhi completely hidden behind a blank doll face. She goes and hugs Nidhi tightly and places a soft kiss on her cheek:

Lines are very touchy and actually shows the depth of relation between Nidhi-Anji and Nidhi-Rohan and explains how strong of support system they have been to Nidhi during the last 10 years.

Rohan revealed' the secret' of his Chulbuli that Ashu failed to recognize or notice and she succeeded in hiding it for so long.

why didn't you say something Nidhi? why didn't you..huh..i hardly ever gave you a reason to trust me na. you probably think I won't believe you or worse, laugh at you and your emotions.

Echo of Nidhi's feeling in Ashu's thought process.

(he almost collapses back into the sofa and covers his face) "Hey Chulbuli, aaj mein nahi aasakta re. I am going out on a date with Aditi. I am going to propose to her during the dinner. You are the only one to know it first so keep quiet. No spilling beans. Ok?" "Hey Chulbuli, yeh mein kya sunn raha hoon? tu aunty aur mom ke saath shopping nahi jaarahi hain? go na. mom wants to buy you something special to wear on the day of my engagement." "why? You still not over your crush on me?" " you seem to have turned into quite a good lapdog in the last decade. So trot back out there and tell your darling daddy that VM will be saved." "do you pretend that I am Armaan? Do you think about him when we are like this? Is that why you like darkness so much?" How did you feel then..when I said those things to you? and after we got married..

Best part of the whole realization scene is Ashu's self thought after digesting the fact and regretting the words that he had uttered without knowing Nidhi's feeling for these long years.

Isn't it strange that Ashu could not read Nidhi's love which Rohan could, Nidhi could not read Rohan's love that Ashu could! But love blindfolds you to everyone else's feelings other than the one. One person becomes center of life. Perhaps Ashu also missed Nidhi's feeling because he was in love with Aditi and that realization is very painful at this time for Him.

What a twist and turn of the event! Beautiful transition. I was looking forward to read how you connect this love story to unfold murder mystery. Rohan's character is very essential character here to connect the story. very wisely and thoughtfully described. Attack on Nidhi? I totally misinterpreted the reason of last scene of chapter 7. Frankly expecting Armaan-Ashu confrontation before Aditi's case but you again mannage to give a 😲!

So far I was very much in sink with the story and suspecting Aditi's dad for the murder and motive being money and power in MVM with Ashu-Aditi wedding and Aditi aware of her dad's intention supported him and would have agreed to marry. She probably never loved him. Her pregnancy might have turn out to be an huddle to fulfil his plans gave the all reason for him to miffed and during that rage in heated arguments he must have ended up killing Aditi unintentionally and to save himself he had mislead the case to suspect Ashu. But now with this new turn and someone trying to kill Nidhi, I have hard time progressing my case against the suspect... What is the motive for him to attack Nidhi? So again back to square one... Unless Nidhi knows something more about the murder and he wants to get rid of her as he is afraid that now Ashu is back and Nidhi will open up.

(she bites her lower lip to stop herself from saying all the things that she wants to tell him) kuch chahiye? (she shakes her head) then why have you stiffened up?

Am I reading too much between the lines?

Again, who ever it is doesn't want Ashu to stay closer to MVM or Nidhi.

Hope we won't find there was ex of Aditi who plotted it against Ashu with motive of money and power in MVM! 😉

Exceeded the length of all my previous reviews. Bottom line fantastic update with keeping all the excitement alive of this murder mistery without compromising the emotional touch of the entangled love story. Another great quality of novel writer. 👏

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jyotinayana

@jyotinayana

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#757

May day bonanza as it is workers day a tribute to all hard workers here is an extra update !!! Nice idea no sujata!!!!!!

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#758

Originally posted by: jyotinayana
May day bonanza as it is workers day a tribute to all hard workers here is an extra update !!! Nice idea no sujata!!!!!!

😉 😆

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creativebird

@creativebird

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#759

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197
Talent hits a target no one else can hit; Genius hits a target no one else can see.

Perfect use of lyrics of the song to describe the feelings of the characters. The first two lines apt to describe the delicate nd loveable Chulbuli , followed by Rohan's feelings nd Anji lines " Jane kahan gum ho gaye..." . U truly deserve a round of applause for this one👏.

Coming to the next part of the story , quite an interesting twist! I went back to read all the chap once again. Like a Gud writer u hvn't played all ur cards yet!😆 But I worked out a few reasons to believe the culprit we are all looking for cud b Armaan . I don't mean to offend u , nd it's not random either. Looking back made me believe that the possibility of Armaan being the accused is high. Anyways wud sit back to see how U unfold the mystery!
The first line is truly meant for u , ur style of writing nd all the hardwork u put in.

Thought for a moment that it might be Armaan but what's the motive behind it? If its Aditi's pregnancy then why would he reveal that truth to Ashu?

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meena_kannan

@meena_kannan

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#760

Chapter 9 : Overall fantastic update !

Anji : ticking time bomb; apt description,😆 knowing how that one incident changed the lives of Nidhi, Ashutosh , their families etc, knowing fully well why this marriage took place etc she could not tolerate the gossip mongers conversation and she promptly put them in their place!

Music and song selection: It is commendable that you put your 100 % in everybit of the chapter , the lyrics well describe the feelings of various characters like Rohan , Anji etc👏👏

Then the dhamaka in the party, who called Ashu and made him move away from Nidhi???????

Loved the no nonsense , smart cop Rohan !

Nidhi is naturally upset about the party coming to an abrupt halt and the stress is causing her migraine attack , but this time she has her husbands moral support and seeing his genuine concern ,for the first time she asks to be held in his arms and comforted , loved that part !😊

Ashu Rohan conversation: Interesting and unexpected turn of events! Someone is actually trying to harm Nidhi and the chandelier incident was not an accident but a deliberate attempt on Nidhis life – Who and why?????????

Did not expect that Rohan would be the one to spill the beans to Ashu about Nidhis profound love ! Ashu has met Rohan only a couple of times but could immediately sense his love/ adoration etc for Nidhi but could not sense his wifes profound love / deep feelings towards him and so Rohan could not resist that part of his conversation !

Ashus self thoughts after Rohan left, well written👏 - shock , guilt etc , he is now all the more guilty about the way he has treated Nidhi, his taunts etc making him feel ashamed , he is shocked that he did not realise about Nidhis feelings etc.

his first instinct is to shake her awake and look into her eyes so that he could get the confirmation. He shakes his head a little as he rejects the thought of waking her up but as if unable to resist, slides in beside her and carefully pulls her into his arms so that her head once again rests on his shoulder.---Loved that part and the protective hubby ! Waiting to see how this relationship progresses further and if Ashu will confront Nidhi and get her confirmation!

The bus accident / chandelier incident / Aditi murder all could be interconnected- OMG ,unexpected , gripping part , lot of suspense – No clues whatsoever ! So finally Aditi case reopened , cant wait for next update, pls update sooon!!!!!!!!!!

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