Os:shiksha/punishment last part page 2

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Ps: this is just an os.Totally my thought. part 1 and 2 on page 1 and last part on page 2 USA Ashutosh and armaan are sitting in Ashutosh's cabin in AIMS hospital.Dr Ashutosh is a famous Neurosurgeon and Dean of that hospital and Dr.Armaan is Psychatrist and ashu's childhood friend. Ashu: Armaan.Lucknow se Advocate Sharma ji ka Fax aaya hai.Kuchh baba ke makaan ka issue hai.Woh baba ki natin hai na woh ab bechana chahti hai.And advocate sharma called me immediately to Lucknow if i am interested in that house.Maine bhi keh diya ki woh makaan toh muze kisi bhikeemat par chahiye.Aur shayad main isi hafte me chala bhi jaoo.yeh mauka main nahi kho sakta. Armaan:Ashu,meri jaan.Chal main bhi chalta hu tere saath.Usi bahane main bhi ma se mil loonga aur agar ho sake toh unhe bhi lekar aatta hoo yahaa mere pas.Pata nahi lekin apna desh chhutta hi nahi usse. Ashutosh was in deep thought,"how much times i tried to contact her.But that girl erogent girl.I tried to conveyence her but she refused everytime and sudenly she became ready to sell that house.But why i am thinking all this?i wanted that house at any cost and i am going to purchase that. And suddenly somebody knocked his cabin.Ashu,"come in". Sister Maria was there.Maria,"sir,that bed no 17 needs immediate surgery.Please come and check." Ashutosh came out from his thoughts and became ready as Dr Ashutosh. ------------------------------------------------------------------ Delhi airport. Ashutosh aur Armaan ne Delhi airport par kadam rakha. Ashutosh: Armaan,tu anty se milne Mumbai ja.I will jjoin you after i finished my court work and jab main us BKM ki formalities complete kar doo fir main bhi Mumbai aa jaoonga. Armaan: nahi Ashutosh,muze pata hai ki tu us ladki pe gussa hai.Aur tu emotional ful bhi hai.Bat bat par rona chalu kar deta hai.Main tumhe akela nahi chhod sakta.Main saye ki tarah tumhare peechhe rahoonga. Lucknow me woh enter hue toh ashu ko sab yaad aane laga.BKM aur baba ka use violin sikhana.Baba ka use gardening sikhana.And he started crying.Armaan,"dekha,lucknow me ghusa nahi ki tera rona shuru.Ab tu woh bacha ashutohs nahi hai. AIMS hospital ka dean hai,paagal. Tabhi driver ne short break mari.Ashutohs aur Armaan zataka khane lage.Ashutosh," yeh kya?tumhe gadi chalani nahi aati kya?ya pee rakhi hai." Driver,"nahi sahab,woh ek ladki gadi se takara gai aur shayad behosh ho gai hai.Use bachane ke liye toh maine break lagai." Ashutosh aur Armaan gadi se neeche utar gaye.Unhone us ladki ko dekha.Ashutosh was shocked to see that girl,"Armaan,yeh toh woh,yeh toh woh Nidhi hai.Col.Yograj verma ki beti.Iski aisee halat kisne ki?aur is had tak? Armaan hume ise bachana hoga aur dekhana hoga ki ise hua kya hai? Aur Armaan aur Ashutosh use KGH me leke gaye.Yeh wohi hospital tha jahaa Ashuoths ne apne doctory ki shuruat ki thi. Ashutosh and Armaan admitted nidhi in the hospital.Dr Mallika was dean of that hospital.she identified dr Ashutosh as famous Neurosurgeon and she came to Ashutosh," hello,Dr Ashutosh,sorry sir.I am dr mallika.Neurosurgeon and dean of KGH.nice to meet you sir." Ashutohs: hi mallika.She is my relative.please kya main aapke saath ICU me aa sakta hoo? Dr Mallika:it should be my pleasure sir.Aap chaliye mere saath.Aapki dekhrekh me hi unka pura ilaaj hoga.Aap hi uska ilaaj kijiye.Aapko staff main provide kar deti hoo.Aapko kisibhi cheej ki jaroorat ho aap muzse keh sakte hai. Ashutohs: thank you dr Mallika. Pure 5 ghante ke examination ke baad Ashutohs bahar aaya.woh puri tarah tut chuka tha. Armaan: Ashutosh,tu us ladki ko janata hai kya?aur uski yeh halat dekhkar tu hairaan kaise ho gaya?kya tum usko itne achhe se janate ho? Ashutosh: jab main Lucknow me docotory ki padhai kar raha tha tab main apne kuchh dosto ke saath paying guest ke taur par reheta tha.Nidhi mere ghar ke samne wale ghar me reheti thi.Bahoot hi zindadil,apne papa ki laadli aur bahoot shararati.Pura ghar uske aawaaz se gunjata.Uske papa hum ladko kaa khub khayal rakhte.Kabhi kabhi humare saath aakar baithte.Nidhi tab shayad 11 ya 12 th me thi.Use bhi doctor banana tha.bade sapne the uske.Col verma ki biwi is duniya me nahi thi.Lekin Nidhi ko unhone maa aur baap dono ka pyaar dekar pala.Toh isiliye ab muze pata hi nahi chal raha ki Nidhi ke saath kya hua hai aisa?aur col verma kahaa hai?Itni zindadil ladki,jisse har koi prerana le sakta hai,uski itni buri halat kisne ki? Dr Mallika: Sir,aapke patient ko hosh aa gaya hai.Ab woh baat kar sakti hai. Dr Ashutosh ke kadam ICU ki taraf mudne laga.Aur usse jyada teji se badhne laga uska dil comments please
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was so cruel of u to stop there... Btw, u wrote very well... i likes it... Plz continue asap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Alka, I liked this OS..
I am curious,Nidhi ki haalat aisee matlab kaisee ?
And how this Ashu knows Nidhi ?
Waiting for part 2 ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting...bt, why did u stop?? I m loving it😆..Jaldi jaldi nxt part do
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Part 2. Jaise hi ashu ne ICU me kadam rakha aur woh uske pas jane laga woh jor se chillai,"muze mat maro.Mera ghar chahiye na tumhe?le lo.Main sign kar doongi lekin muze mat maro.Muze dard hota hai." Ashutosh ne gaur se nidhi ko dekha.Pura chehera murzaya hua tha.Badan par har jagah chot ke nishan.Unhone sare reposrts mangawaye.Aur jaise hi ashu nidhi ke pas baitha usne apne dono paav simat liye.Aur boli,"tum mere baba ko wapis laoge.Mere baba muze chhod ke kyon chale gaye?main buri hoo isiliye na?unhe dhundo na?"aur usne ashu ki coller pakad li aur bole,"mera ghar chahiye na uncle ko main de dungi.Par muze mere baba chahiye.baba baba."aur woh behosh ho gai. Dr Mallika ke cabin me ashu aur armaan aa gaye.Aur thodi der me dr Mallika bhi aa gai sare reports lekar.Dr Mallika ne sare reports ashu ko dikhaye.Aur boli,"Sir,is ladki ko buri tarah se peeta gaya hai.aur yeh ek baar nahi baar baar hua hai.Uske hatho me jalne ke nishan hai.Ha lekin physical abusments ke chances kam hai.Lekin is ladki ko kisi baat ke liye torture kiya jata tha aur koi aisa incident hua hai jisse ise bahoot hi jyada gehera sadma laga hai. Dr Ashutosh ne dr Mallika aur dr Armaan se kahaa ,"ab iska naam Nidhi Verma ke naam se Register kijiye.Main iske treatment ki jimmedari leta hoo.Aur haa dr Mallika,Nidhi ki Psychatric treatment dr Armaan karenge.Please.Aapko koi aitraaj toh nahi hai na? Dr Mallika: no sir,muze koi aitraaj nahi hai.Aur sir agar aapko meri kisi bhi tarah se help chahiye toh muzse kahiye.Main bhi Nidhi ki recovery me aapka saath dena chahti hoo.Ek aurat hone ke naate muze iska dard kam karna hai.Aur muze janana hai ki is ladki ke sath aisa kya hua hai? Ashutosh aur Armaan ne hotel me check inn kiya aur ashu ne Armaan se kahaa,"Armaan,subah main Nidhi ke ghar jaoonga.Aur thodi chhan bin karoonga ," Subah hui aur Advocate sharma ka call aaya."Dr Ashutosh,agar aap aa jaye toh hum us makaan ki formalities puri kar sakte hai.Main party ko bula leta hoo aur aap apne paise taiyaar rakhiye.Us party ko bahoot jyada jaldi hai ghar bechne ki." Ashutosh,"theek hai,main dopahar me aapke office me aaoonga." Ashutosh subah hui aur wahaa gaye jahaa woh payi8ng guest ke taur pe rehete the.Kapil solanki ne turant ashu ko pehchan liya aur bole,"kitne salo baad?beta tu toh ab bada dr ban gaya hai na?tab toh tum padhai karte the,jab tum yahaa pG the. Ashutosh: Solanki uncle,please muze aapka favour chahiye.Muze Yogiraj uncle ke bareme aur Nidhi ke bareme janana hai.Yogiraj uncle kahaa hai? KS: kya batau Ashutosh?kitni sundar family thi.Lekin us ghar par toh jaise grahan lag gaya.Yogiraj ko business me nuksaan hua aur unka ghar baar bechne ki bari aayi.Shares me paise lagaye the sare dub gaye.Aur ek din ghar nilaam karne ki bari aayi toh uska bhai,bhabhi aur unka beta na jane kahaa se aa gaye.Jab us ghar ki neelami hone lagi tabhi yogiraaj ko heart attack.Ab unke jate hi nidhi ke chacha aur chachi nidhi ke makaan ke peechhe pad gaye.Woh nidhi pe dabaaw badhane lage ki woh apne nana ne tohfe me diya makaan bech de aur woh sare rupaye unhe de de.Nidhi ne mana kiya toh woh nidhi ko marne peetne lage.Yogiraaj toh hospital me tha.Lekin nidhi ka toh inhone jeena haraam kar diya tha.Aur achanak ek din khabar aayi ki yogiraaj ne hospital me hi dum tod diya.Jab uski body ghar pe leke aaye,tab nidhi ko gehera sadma laga aur tabhi jorse chikhi aur apne dil par se kaboo kho chuki.Ab toh pure din bhar ya toh ghar me reheti hai ya fir baba,baba chillati hai.Ab toh uske chacha aur chachi koi dekhne nahi aata.Haa lekin,Nidhi ke paas ka makaan toh unhe abhi bhi chahiye.Tabhi toh unhone Adv Sharma ko hire kiya hai. Adv Sharma ka naam sunkar hi ashu ko shock laga.Usne puchha,"yeh adv sharma Mr sudhir sharma toh nahi?"KS<"ho wohi,aap kaise janate hai?"Ashtuosh"woh sab chhodiye,lekin nidhi ke nana ka naam bataiye please? KS: Dr Anand Mathur Ashutosh ko ab sab kuchh samaz me aa gaya ki Nidhi wohi hai jisko ashu ke baba ne ghar diya tha.uske sapno ka ghar.Lekin ab haalat alag the.Usne kuchh soch liya tha ki use kya karna hai?
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Good work di... Nidhi is in such a bad state... Ye chacha-chachi ki toh!!!!

Plz continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey nice angle you have picked Alka. 👍🏼

A different story behind the BKM issue. Nidhi being tortured for the house, how sad. 😭 But now Ashman is here, hope he will fix everything and help Nidhi also. Waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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continue... continue...continue...continue...first!!!
nice story alka di. ..👏
welcome back. .kahan thi AP???
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chap 3 Ashutosh turant apne advocate mr Sharma ke pas pahucha aur unko apne plan ke bareme samzaya. Nidhi ke chacha matlab Aditya verma aur unki chachi Suhasini aur beta Jagan sare Ad Mr Sharma ke pas aaye.Advocate sharma ne papers dekhne ka naatak kiya aur bole,"baki sab toh theek hai,lekin Nidhi beti ko sign karne aana padega.Uski rajamandi wala NOC [Non objection certificate]bhi jaroori hai.Mere pas us makaan ki achhi keemnat denewale hai.puri char guna keemat dene ko taiyaar hai ek client to.Toh ab aap fatafat jakar Nidhi beti ko le aayiye. Ab Aditya,sui aur Jagan tention me aa gaye.Ab nidhi ka toh unhe kuchh pata hi nahi tha.Aur unhone koshish bhi nahi ki thi.Ab unhone dhundana shuru kiya aur Ashu/Armaan/Mallika ne apni treatment me jyada dhyan dena shuru kiya. Ashutosh ne AIMS hospital me apnee leave badha di aur unhe Fax bhi kar diya.Ashutosh ne Nidhi ke passport ke liye apply kar diya.Ab woh nidhi ko kisi bhi haal me India me nahi rehene dena chahta tha.Kyonki baba ne use nayi zindagi di thi.Baba ne apni natin ke hisse ka pyaar ashu par lutaya tha.Ab Ashutosh ko pachhatava ho raha tha ki baba ne toh apne natin ke hisse ki property bhi use de di thi.Lekin ab ashu ne soch liya tha ki main Nidhi ko puri tarah se theek kar dunga. Mallika Nidhi ka pura khayal rakhti.khana khilati dawai bhi pila deti thi.Abhi bhi Nidhi dari hui thi.Tabhi woh ashu ke pas aate hi dar jati thi.Ek din ashu uske pas aaya aur baitha.Fir bola,"Nidhi,tumhe ab koi kuchh nahi karega.Tumhara ghar tumse koi nahi chheenega.Main hoo na!" Nidhi said innocently,"Muze woh ghar nahi chahiye.Main sign kar doongi."aur fir woh ashu se lipatkar rone lagi.Uske andar ka dard dheere dheere bahar nikalne laga.Ab usne thoda thoda share karna shuru kiya.Lekin ek baat thi woh sirf ashu ke samne hi baat karti. Armaan bhi ab Nidhi ke ilaaj me uski madad karta.Aur keheta,Nidhi,main tumhara bhai hoo na.Dekho main tumse rakhi bandhwaoonga,fir tumhe gift doonga.Toh ab muze batao tumhe kya takleef hai.?Nidhi: aapka naam kya hai? Armaan: armaan. Nidhi: armaan matlab dil ki ichha na. Armaan : ha In sare logo ki koshisho ki wajah se Nidhi theek ho rahi thi.Physically bhi aur mentally bhi.Ab dheere dheere woh sab ki baate sunati aur samazti.Ashutosh ke prati uska lagaav badhta gaya. Ek din ashu aur nidhi baithe the.Tabhi nidhi ne ashu se kahaa,"dr Ashutosh,aapko pata hai mere baba kaise the?jab main school me thi na tab mera chai,nashta khana wohi banate the.Meri choti banate aur kehete.Meri rani bitiya.Bahoot padhegi.mera naam roshan karegi.Muze mere baba chhod ke kyon chale gaye? Ashutosh ne kahaa,Nidhi,tumhare baba toh kahi nahi gaye.Tumhare dil me baba ki yaden hai na?aur woh toh sitara ban gaye dekho.aasmaan se tumhe dekh rahe hai na.chalo ab muskurao. Aur ab Nidhi muskurai.Lekin uski muskurahat me bhi dard tha. Ab Nidhi puri tarah se theek ho chuki thi.Ashutosh ne use ab puri baat vistaar se batai. Advocate sharma ka cabin. Suhasini :dekhiye vakil babu.Humari Nidhi bithiya ki tabiya theek nahi hai bahoot dino se.Ab aap kyon uske sign ke peechhe pade hai.chaliye ek kaam kar dete hai.main uski sign kar doongi.aur aapko aapka commission bhi mil jayega.Ab samaz lijiye nidhi hai hi nahi is duniya me. Ashutosh: hai kaise nahi chachiji?bilkul hai nidhi.aur woh bhi yeh rahi hai.Maine aap sab ke liye ekdum mast makaan dhundha hai.Jahaa aapko do waqt ka khana aur kamra bhi milega. Suhasini: aisee kaun si jagah hai? Ashutosh: Jail aur kaun see?aapke khilaaf sare saboot hume mil gaye hai.Yeh rahi Nidhi. Police aayi aur Suhasini/adi aur jagan ko le gai. Ashutosh ne adv sharma se kahaa,"muze woh ghar ab nahi chahiye.Nidhi ke naam par tha woh ghar aur ab usika rahega. Nidhi started crying.Ashutosh uske pas aaya aur bola,"ab kyon ro rahi ho?ghar to tumhe mil gaya na?maine sara intejaam kar diya hai. Nidhi: lekin,ab toh aap chale jayenge na? Ashutosh:[with cunning smile] toh tum kya chahti ho?ruk jaoo?apna sara kaam chhodkar. Nidhi: maine aisa toh nahi kahaa tha?lekin agar aap muze Ashutosh: yeh kya gote kha rahi ho tum.aap muze agar magar Nidhi: agar aap muze apne saath le jaye to. Ashutosh:main tumhe apne saath kyon le jaoo?kis hesiyat se? Nidhi: aap kuchh nahi samazte dr ashutosh. Ashutosh: toh aap samaza dijiye na Mrs Ashutosh. Nidhi:kya?aap samaz gaye. Ashutosh: nidhi,pyaar kisi shabdo ka ya labjo ka mohtaaj nahi hota.Pyaar toh aankhose baya hota hai.Uske liye ILU bolne ki jaroorat nahi hoti.Main toh waise bhi tumhe yahaa akele rehene nahi dena chahta tha.Tabhi toh tumhara passport aur visa taiyaar karwaya hai.Ab apne baba ki aakhri amanat ko bahoot hi pyaar se sambhaloonga.Ab chale honewali mrs Nidhi Ashutosh Mathur. Aur nidhi ko toh jannat mil gai.Uske zindagi bhar ke sapne aur future bahoot hi sundar banane wala hai. And their love journey began...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waah Alka ji jya likha hai apne.. jab part pada to laga apne kyu end kae diya but now I am happy part 2 bhi same day pe mil gaya.. jackpot part 3 bhi mil gaya..

Awesome writing Alka ji.. Lived Mrs Ashutosh wala part means ending !!
Edited by suku_07 - 12 years ago

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