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deepali.rock

@deepali.rock

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Very touching os indeed alkaji..enjoyed this journey of ashu and nidhi..plz come up with many more..always look forward to your writings

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menaka

@ariyadasa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

👏superb story ALKA 👏

😛love this concept , the scenes and the characters 😛

The way you brought the love of ashni towards the viewers were tremendous

bigger salute for ur creativity

Don' t scold me as some time i feel u are better in os than fun post😉

but please update the next soon 😳

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indu6789

@indu6789

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

This is bliss..lovely..the way ashu says..in the end..alka thank u for these moments..wah

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Alkaji, Last part is very cute when Ashu understands her need to be with him for life time..Thank you for the OS...

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

had planned to read ur OSs and certain pending FFs of other writers.. bt really caught up in work.. sorry.. will come back!

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

so nxt is urs Alka ji.. dont think tht i m picking out sequentially on basis of my liking of OSs and FFs. and writers... tut tut. tht is such a mean thing to do!!😆..

i m answering accordingly as and wen tht praticular OS or FF caught my eye and i promised to answer.. u know i realized.. I-F also teaches u important fundas in time management!😆

for now my duties as a wife had me calling and i cudnt reply ur OSs.. bt i will come back!😳