small os :My family...from ashutosh!!! - Page 2

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Ennu... Jaan... This is super-duper awesome... Mujhe bada achha laga... Thankfully Nidhi ko kuch nahi hua...
Yaar last os mat bolo yaar... It sinks something bad into me... Inshallah, season 2 mein milenge, kisi aur forum par mil lenge, ye forum b toh next 3 months tak hai, aise kaise last hai yaar... Aisa mat boliyo...
Aur dekh liyo, hum like bhuling nahi...
And maine aapke comment ka reply kr diya h, apne b'day thrd mein. Dekh lena... Ok!

thank U aazeen!!! Yaar...alvida nehin...main buss ye keh rahin thi 2 epi rehgayi...shayad ye last os howaise apka birthday kaisi chal rahin hain??? ...

Originally posted by: lee_Ashni

Perfectly emotional Os Ena. Though small it's beautifully written as usual.😃

thank U doc. Lee!!!😃

Originally posted by: ariyadasa

😭Ena first of all i should say please edit this part as you Told this is ur last os No dear we may continue till season 2 what about making new concepts based stories for season 2

Feels season 2 will be there very soon 😭

😛love ur short and sweet OS so much so emotional os with a happy ending 😛

👍🏼so Ena as usual you are great dear👏

please continue dont give up this lovely IF 😭

NO need to miss all of your creations , ff and os 😭

oh...ariya...so sweet of you...ok I'll edit that part...and after my exam I'll continue my incomplete ss's!!and of course we will meet again in season 2!!!will wait for that day...hope season 2 will rock...and I can write more on ashni!!!😃

Ena dear... Beautiful OS... 👏👏

Totally flawless & smoothly flowing story... 👍🏼 Loved it absolutely!! Very subtle depiction of Ashu-Nidhi's routine lives... Nidhi's enthuastic chattering & Ashu's compliance to her ways of leading life... 😃 , Ashu wanted a babygirl & Nidhi wanted a babyboy... 😳 , the anxiety & nrevousness filled night of AshNi's arrival... Everything has been portrayed so beautifully... ❤️

But yeh kya... Ek pal ke liye toh aapne meri jaan hi le li... 😭 Nidhi had lost the battle of her life after fulfilling her & Ashu's only dream... 😭 Could visualize Ashu's turmoil & realise painful thoughts as a loving hubby who has lost his wifey & doting father who has just held her tiny babygirl in his arms... 😭 He took care of his daughter first & cried his heart out holding her daughter... And his true love brought his love back... 😃 Wow... Rula diya aapne toh.. Khushi ke aasoo, phir gam ke aur ant mein phir se khushi ke aasoo... 👏

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Ena dear... Beautiful OS... 👏👏

Thank u...tupu ji!!!

Totally flawless & smoothly flowing story... 👍🏼 Loved it absolutely!! Very subtle depiction of Ashu-Nidhi's routine lives... Nidhi's enthuastic chattering & Ashu's compliance to her ways of leading life... 😃 , Ashu wanted a babygirl & Nidhi wanted a babyboy... 😳 , the anxiety & nrevousness filled night of AshNi's arrival... Everything has been portrayed so beautifully... ❤️

wow...apke review se mujhe apni hi os aur acche lagne lagi hain...

But yeh kya... Ek pal ke liye toh aapne meri jaan hi le li... 😭 Nidhi had lost the battle of her life after fulfilling her & Ashu's only dream... 😭 Could visualize Ashu's turmoil & realise painful thoughts as a loving hubby who has lost his wifey & doting father who has just held her tiny babygirl in his arms... 😭 He took care of his daughter first & cried his heart out holding her daughter...

even i was so tensed while writing this part... I have seen such couple u know who wait for a tiny life...and when it comes and something unexpected happens ...suddenly that tiny life is to blamed for that sin which it never known!!

And his true love brought his love back... 😃 Wow... Rula diya aapne toh.. Khushi ke aasoo, phir gam ke aur ant mein phir se khushi ke aasoo... 👏

thank U dear for this wonderful review...love U...take care!!!😃

superb, splendid,amazing, awesome...i'm short of words

Originally posted by: pansy123

superb, splendid,amazing, awesome...i'm short of words

awww...thank U very much pansy...😳😳

why forum is so thanda...thanda??/😕😕

Originally posted by: Ena292

thank U aazeen!!! Yaar...alvida nehin...main buss ye keh rahin thi 2 epi rehgayi...shayad ye last os ho<div></div>waise apka birthday kaisi chal rahin hain???...

Guzar raha hai din, kisi aam din ki tarah... Papa se daant pad gayi... Spoiled my budday...😭