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rajanigandha26

@rajanigandha26

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Wonderful os sujata. I wish ktlk writers had positive healthy and beautiful mind like you. Show would have reached the heights of success.

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rayafan17

@rayafan17

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

⭐️Out of the world Sujathaji - another classic example of how the story should have unfolded in our show.

Loved the mallu redemption. Loved how it was Nidhi who took care of mallu - without the obsessive lover portrayal. How she reacted to mallu's becoming a mom beautiful

Also liked the anji and Ashu confrontation.

All n all wonderful work from the pen of our very own Sujathaji 👏

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KamnaSharma

@KamnaSharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Thank u sujatha for portraying effectively the other side of Mallu.. I could feel so much warmth in the way mallika was reflecting on her past...Loved it and kudos to ur creatiivity and positivity...I agree 100% with vidisha, KP has murdered Mallu...if the story has moved in this direction...they wouldn't had to show KHUSHI also...anyways thank 4 awesome OS

Edited by arpitajaan - 12 years ago

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sonyjknum

@sonyjknum

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Sujata ,thankyou for this os,this was the worst handled track because we started hating Ashu,the soul of KTLK and it hurt me,so thank you for this new way of looking at Mallu-Nidhi relation and restoring Ashu's dignity.I also loved your comment regarding the two scenes in tanuji's post ,one the song sequence after Ashu returns from hospital and the second the violin scene and I agree just a longing look from Ashu to Nidhi in both scenes would have completely changed their essence.

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Lady, u deserve a round of applause..!
**Clapping...**

truely, purely, absolutely awesome...!

Presenting any better mallika as u did wudn't have had been possible... Avsolutely, with no Shak, this is wud 'they' should have shown... A perfect rewitten track...! Not a single character has been butchered... Right frm Mallu, to Ashu, Nidhi and even Anji, were absolutely right at their part...

Totally a worth reading piece of wrk... Fantastic...!

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Mithalee
hey sorry to but in but that scene was cho cute i tell u! especially my shona my bacha looks so awesome in that scene when Mallu clings to Ashu and the way he gives the expressions like he is frnd but feels so awkward at the sametime i was toh totally fida haaye 😳

Agree...😆 no debates if you are in love... we all agree with you...

Can any one tell me when Ashu and Nidhi fall in love for the first time???

Edited by Anjani9 - 12 years ago

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harsha6

@harsha6

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

wowww it was so sweet..specially the last few lines...Mallika nd her son' convo...sweet like honey..seriously.. u hav written an awesum OS..i startd visualizng AshNi wid dere two kiddos..
seriously i had quit watchng KTLK aftr MB' exit..i dun evn knw d ABC of KTLK..but i follow yor FFs nd OSs..bcuz u r impeccable in writng..

thnks for d PMs u send me..

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Sujata,

Good morning .I had a really good night's sleep after a long time after reading your Asthitva.

You have elevated Mallika's character and created a new and the correct angle for the story. She is, as a PTSD patient should be. Her understanding Nidhi's feelings once she started recovering , trying to move away from their lives at the same time keeping the friendship intact is commendable.

You always provide a dignity to each and every character you deal with and make us, the readers relate to them. Thanks a lot once again for acquainting us with this Mallika.

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Aardhan

@aardhan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Nice OS Sujatha, tough topic but ultimately a good redemption for Mallika. 👍🏼 I am glad her identity, her dignity was ultimately restored. I am glad she re-established her life once more and independent of the past. But more detailed comments only after I am done with the other OS! 😳 😃

Afterall I have 140+ pages in this one! 😆

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: sukirti
Awesome post Sujatha ji.. The way you portrayed Mallika's character awesome specially her bonding with Nidhi after the incident, repeatedly her clinging on to Nidhi nite Ashu, saving Nidhi from the man again and again .. awesome..

I really which despite of showing so much negativity in the show they would have shown different avatar of Mallika..

u r correct Sukirti..

all the scenes that they showed, could have been shown but with a different angle. that negativity of Mallika in the serial did not make any sense...😕

thank you..😃

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