OS - Tadap Note Pg:18 PL READ - Page 6

Originally posted by: lee_Ashni

Wow Sujataji awesome OS. Unique cocept and excellent presentation. Waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

Thanks a bunch turgs for this os.You know what you written we actually felt it.As you know i am living in Gujarat and on 26th Janu,2001 there was a disaster of earthquick in Gujarat which made Bhuj and Bhachau fully into plain ground.I just remembered all that incident.It was more horrible bec i lost my father on that same day.But here your ashni are truely lavable.I just love ashu's concern and his care for his wife.Waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: AISHUMA

Turag so good...words are inadequate to express how good i felt after I read it...simple,short and sweet...I wish the CVs read this and show a similar scene in the serial on its closing day...kassh CVs ka akal bhi aap jaise hotha, ethne jaldbaazi mein serial ko finishi karna nahin padtha...thanks for this sweet OS..

I loved the way ashu said''kuch hotha tho mujeh patha hotha'...we the viewers know the indepth relationship btn ASHNI...kash cvs kobhi patha hotha...

LUV you for bringing the intricate human relationship in a different way through diff, characters.

Originally posted by: swati62

Lovely just lovely u write so well.

Originally posted by: harsha6

SPEECHLESS..
you hav written a mind boggling hit OS..i strtd visualisng scenes..seriously u hav mentiond Ashutosh' state so nycly..his dillema for his life Nidhi nd his passion dat is hz proffesion..really..
u r impeccable :)
thnxx alottt!

Originally posted by: pansy123

Great as always! I was about to ask you about your new FF and i saw your OS. Keep writing! you have a great flair for writing and your writing keeps forum lively.

Originally posted by: sshirley

WOW just WOW

This is the only work i can think of for this ff.

thank you Shirley..good to see you here after a long time..

So many emotions - superb. how the day begins on a carefree note and ends on a ... note (dont have the rite word.

yeah..a roller coaster night for both of them...

Loved the scene where Ashu had to give precedence to his duty over his very means of existence - kya scene tha.

☺️

The scene in his cabin was fab too. do i really need to say more ant that scene?

😃 no. not required.

Loved every word kya, every alphabet, even every space in the last scene, how he cares for her, how her bruises become his tears, and his need to assure himself of her presence.

U r just getting better and better with each work of yours. aur kya kahoon?

thank you so much for saying that...

PS: Yes I have a short break now so, i am going to spam the forum now.

😆 enjoy!!!

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

That was a lovely OS turags.

Liked the internal struggle... very well depicted.👏

I know our demand for more will dilute the intensity of the story... but you know me...

perpetual bhhokhi aatma...


PS: my earlier comment was to say hello after siesta... dont take it seriously.😊

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Good morning.

Mithalee! ala enduku anukovadam .ekkada prama chanuvu unte akkadekada koppadadam. sujataku nuvvante chala ishtam . neeku andarikanna pariseelana sakti chala ekkuva. adi Sujataku telusu. Saradaki allari chestundante.

emantavu?

Originally posted by: aardhan

Very well written Sujatha. You have become very proficient in expressing emotions. They are so vivid, I feel that its happening right in front of my eyes. Its a delight to read. 👏

The carefree dinner time suddenly transforms into a chaotic one pulling Ashni apart in all directions at the same time. Yet the moment Ranga mentions the tent accident the entire world comes to a standstill for Ashu. Then comes the stage of denial and assuring himself that all was fine.

denial is the first thing that a human mind does, right? a bad news comes and we say "NO"

Finally the suppressed fear comes pouring out when he sees Nidhi's injuries and makes them want to cling to each other. What to say... You have done full justice to this event...

its a small OS..so am really happy i could convey what i wanted to convey here..

This is the type of stuff we have been asking the CVs of the show to come up with... To show some gut wrenching situations with intense screenplay where the actors can be challenged to their maximum potential... such stuff can keep the viewer glued to the screen. Well done Sujatha! 👏👏