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pansy123

@pansy123

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Great as always! I was about to ask you about your new FF and i saw your OS. Keep writing! you have a great flair for writing and your writing keeps forum lively.

Edited by pansy123 - 12 years ago

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

WOW just WOW

This is the only work i can think of for this ff.

So many emotions - superb. how the day begins on a carefree note and ends on a ... note (dont have the rite word.

Loved the scene where Ashu had to give precedence to his duty over his very means of existence - kya scene tha.

The scene in his cabin was fab too. do i really need to say more ant that scene?

Loved every word kya, every alphabet, even every space in the last scene, how he cares for her, how her bruises become his tears, and his need to assure himself of her presence.

U r just getting better and better with each work of yours. aur kya kahoon?

PS: Yes I have a short break now so, i am going to spam the forum now.

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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

That was a lovely OS turags.

Liked the internal struggle... very well depicted.👏

I know our demand for more will dilute the intensity of the story... but you know me...

perpetual bhhokhi aatma...

PS: my earlier comment was to say hello after siesta... dont take it seriously.😊

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Aardhan

@aardhan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Very well written Sujatha. You have become very proficient in expressing emotions. They are so vivid, I feel that its happening right in front of my eyes. Its a delight to read. 👏

The carefree dinner time suddenly transforms into a chaotic one pulling Ashni apart in all directions at the same time. Yet the moment Ranga mentions the tent accident the entire world comes to a standstill for Ashu. Then comes the stage of denial and assuring himself that all was fine. Finally the suppressed fear comes pouring out when he sees Nidhi's injuries and makes them want to cling to each other. What to say... You have done full justice to this event...

This is the type of stuff we have been asking the CVs of the show to come up with... To show some gut wrenching situations with intense screenplay where the actors can be challenged to their maximum potential... such stuff can keep the viewer glued to the screen. Well done Sujatha! 👏👏

Edited by aardhan - 12 years ago

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Chusara? Andi...andaru ade maata antaunaaru...show lo illa aayte enta baaontundi,cv's illa raaste enta baauntundi kaani nenu ade maata meeku ante meeru nanu tidtaru...enduku titaru Mithalee ante meeku kopam... Ponile meeku inka frnd..."BESTFRIENDS" unaru kada enduke meeru nanu kopadto untaaru 😭

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Good morning.

Mithalee! ala enduku anukovadam .ekkada prama chanuvu unte akkadekada koppadadam. sujataku nuvvante chala ishtam . neeku andarikanna pariseelana sakti chala ekkuva. adi Sujataku telusu. Saradaki allari chestundante.

emantavu?

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: bc123456
loved it 🤗to tired to write more

thanks Dr Babs...take rest..happy weekend...🤗

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

@ Jayasree..@ Mithalee...enti idi..poddunne...telugu sabhaamandali pettaru?? Oye Mithalee..ninnu eppudu tittanu nenu?? Jayasree garu...neelaapanindalu vestondandi..

jeez..i can't type telugu words any more...its too tough...😆

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: vidyasabde
short simple and sweet os ...loved it.
part2 of Tadap hai kya?

thanks Vidya..

part 2 mein hoga kya ji?? 😕

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: deepali.rock
Finally, read it. Another dimension of ur writing. The concept, theme, portrayal and execution of characters was so beautiful. Emotions and expressions spoke much more than words could express. This piece of ur writing was just fab, absolutely blissful...keep coming up with more concepts...its always a treat to read ur writings...

thank you Deepali...glad this thought came to me...i had to go to google and see what kind of apartments and building are there in Lucknow..never been there...😛 thank God to google...😉

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