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Anjani9

@Anjani9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Sorry, i can come up with review on Thursday...

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mehrj

@mehrj

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

just read. it was awesome ,something different n cute that could not held me back from commenting.i have always been a silent reader n never attempted something like this before sorry if i am not up to the mark.

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achiever

@achiever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: deepali.rock

ya that i know😆,but any idea, 2days, 3 days, 1 week ?? Any time span, wait karna easy ho jayega😆

deepaliji.. take the max one..😆 i m going off this weekend.. and today is already a wednesday!

sowwie.. bt will need to wait.. pretty much tied up rite now.. bt trying to find time to write at least something daily so tht i can give a timely update..😳

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Cherishh

her thappad was a cracker...huh so much of Ashu..right dear

Tht defined Nidhi actually and made us see how different she is from all the Nidhi's tht we've seen so far! she has guts to stomp and slap Ashuji!😆😆😆😆 not tht he didnt deserve..😳 bt unki harkat itni jaldi pichha nahi chodegi.. Ashuji ko phal to mila ab uska bhugtaan bhi karna padega.. 😃

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achiever

@achiever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Of course its appealing yaar...it different, but quite welcoming for me at least..I mean innocent yet matured Nidhi we have seen on many a occasions..but along with it this strong headed, fierce, cunning is whats refreshing...which is what is more new about ur story

--she is not jst strongheaded girl.. she is ambitious.. resourceful.. and is smart enuf to b cunning, manipulative, and wud b even opportunistic and calculative at times.. thrs a definite aura abt her tht charms everyone around her...😉 and I liked the way Ashu judged her this trait in his own way.. ha ha ha.. he hates it.. he seriously hates it.. bt still cannot resist her.. 😆 Its amusing!

Yes as u said ur descriptions does give a hint of her character

--Yup she is delicate and childlike somewhere.... further chapters wud protray her characteristic traits more distinctly!😳

I am more than okay with the way u presented AshNi..well we don't get to see this shade of AshNi often, now do we..I am loving it

--okay.. this encourages me and gives me more confidence to protray thm exactly how i want.. thnk u sooo much🤗!

Yup..Ashu is too good..he finds his way😉..and i am sparing u now😆

--Actually.. i cudnt resist putting his charm at work in the end..😉😆.. warna aur thoda wait karna padta usko.. bt thn i reminded myself tht this is a short story..😆.. so everything will b fast paced!😳

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**sigh** u jst cant resist falling for this guy!!

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Cherishh
Well when that suitcase thing was brought in..even I was very curious..I thought maybe her past memories are there in it, but when she came down in her very diff attire and their, just made me forget it completely

Well he will when he starts to learn more about her and will find it accidentally I guess

--hmmm...i have more thn hinted wat it stands for.. well.. as u read the story.. u will know the significance of these small things.. and Ashu.. his character is yet to b unfolded completely..

this chapter essentially made us see who Nidhi is..😳

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achiever

@achiever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Sorry, i can come up with review on Thursday...

okay.. will b waiting.. come soon!😳

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
omg awesome part cont soon

lolz.. so did i surprise u? U know its difficult to read betn the lines with ur oneliner comment..😆 bt i keep trying!😆😆😆 neways.. thk u sooo much!😳

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: mehrj
just read. it was awesome ,something different n cute that could not held me back from commenting.i have always been a silent reader n never attempted something like this before sorry if i am not up to the mark.

aww.. not up to the mark??? buddy.. its encouraging tht u came out to comment.. thnks soo much for encouraging and supporting this concept.. i was a bit nervous abt this type of characterization.. its u know.. its extreme for AshNi.. bt it brings a diffrnt flavor of this age-gap story.. not run of the mill... ashu is different here and so is Nidhi and so thr story is pretty much instrsting..😳