Jab Koi Baat Bigad Jaaye ch10 p94, epi-p99 - Page 42

Originally posted by: hilarious44

Sshirley madam kahan gayab hain??

3rd jan hogai...update kahan hai???😡

Is say ziada sharafat nai hai hum mai...😆

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Hi,

Hey

As I promised..here I am...hope u don't get bored before u finish reading it about all my blabbering😳...(tried to put out my view from the beginning...with the flow of events as u wrote ...hope u get them).

I told you na like ur reviews on achiever's post so, no question of getting bored.

Thank you for starting in the begining and covering all chapters.

Should say its a great place to start a story as I feel that after valentine episode everything has been changed of AshNi.

Yes, even i found the magic missing since after v-day.

The confession of Nidhi that he is her knight in shining armor was most lovable.

yes, those dialogues were on the show itself. After that i picked up my story.

Mallika is too much'I mean she is so mad that she is talking so low about her friendship and so-called love, though trying to hurt Nidhi, but guess she isn't realizing she is accusing Ashu at the same time.

yes mallika is mallika - she literally can't help it. she and her stupid, silly tactics - sigh.

@Bold -U know no one else pointed out this - see thats y i wanted your review.

So finally they had a hug'awesome'just loved the way you depicted it and what I loved the most was the aftermath where Ashu was all lost in dat hug and his love that he hardly paid any attention to Mallu.

Yes, i could not handle the no-touch nonsense any more.

@bold - of course, it was the first time they touched each other that way or any way 😉 so kho jaana toh zaahir si baat hai - especially when there is so much hidden passion in their love.

The fact I admired the most was u didn't drag or postponed about AshNi talking to Baba soon after Shyama's warning or talks with Nidhi.

I did not see any reason to delay. In the show, they had their constrainsts due to change of actors.

The way they revealed their love to Baba was nice and Ashu keeping his cool all thru it, though he was all the while torn with the refusal of him. All the facts u put out about how a father would react in a situation like this and Ashu's stand on it was awesome.

I am glad u liked the way AshNi revealed their love to CV. I was highly disappointed with the CV-Ashu confrontation on the show - they were brawling like two illeterates. I am glad u liked the way CV put across his pov without actually insulting Ashu.

@Bold- once again, i think u r the only one to point this out. If people out such subtle things, it gratifies the writer.

AshNi's convo after it was so heart-wrenching, especially thinking about Ashu (me crazy about this characterization a lot), the way he was trying to make her understand about not to hate any1 or argue and to give her life another chance for love and happiness was so beautifully written'with which Baba was smitten too, but guess him being the father couldn't grasp the sudden dreading changes in his daughter's life, at least acc to him at that moment.

Yes, frankly that scene was very difficult to write.It had to balanced and kept in sync with both the characters. Also Ashu's aim behind this last chai had to be achieved and of course as you pointed out, CV had to be impressed with Ashu and moreover his misconception about it being just a crush from Nidhi's side had to be cleared.

@bold - yes, i felt emotionlly drained after writing that convo.

So the separation'this was a crazy whip.

DB is too much sometimes, though she thinks good for every1 of her family in her own way'but the taunting was way too much.

Yes, DB thinks she knows best and that is where the problem lies...she does not want to own up that she was wrong about Ashu and doesnt want to admit that he is the best for Nidz.

Finally Ashu meets his Baba and they bonded up'it really was quite emotional'well happy that he got for what he was waiting for so long and at the same time sad that he couldn't win his love..and going thru a rough phase time and again.

@Bold - i am glad i could bring out this well.

Loved the bond Anji-Rohan-Nidhi share'they really r true frnds and stand for each other in other tough times.

Yes, i too love their bond

I guess the true love is depicted by Rohan compared to Mallu'the way he wants to see his love happy and content with life is amazing whereas Mallu knowing Ashu's black past is not letting him have happy life with his love, which brought new zeal, happiness, being loved and wanted in his life. And Mallu is findings all ways to blackmail, force or make him helpless to Marry her'but guess the luck is not in favor'yeeeaaahhh'

Both are different shades of love, only difference is rohan's love is pure and selfless while mallu is selfish and obssesive and wants ashu by ok or crook

So finally Nidhi has broke her silence of hearing all the accusations on Ashu'I think this is one of many reasons which made Baba wanting to take a next step about AshNi and his chance of mending the things for good and he too very sure of their bond and Ashu's sincerity.

Yes, exactly, DB crossed the limit to which she could bear, so naturally.

@bold, Yes, it made him realize the depth of their love and prompted him to take a decision - a decision which had subconsciously right on the day on AshNi's last chai date, but was procastinating to admit even to himself.

I just loved the way Baba's approval came out in front of AshNi and the emotional Ashu...his true love was so beautiful to dream about'I really loved the part where Ashu's happiness flows in the form of tears and the calmness that spread after knowing their relationship has been approved and respected from Nidhi's father and he is gonna get his Nidhi for him forever.

@pink - i m glad u liked it

@bold - yes thats my personal fave too

And baba's teasing on Ashu's disappointed face for not findings his love was so cute.

Yes, that was my way of showing that cV had already accepted Ashu as his family- after all, you tease only near and dear ones - haina?

So BB is finally aware of Ashu's sadness and the cause of it, and all the more BB-Baba's regrets were nullified by their mutual acceptance of mistakes and learning from it. Feels cool that BB was not affected at all by Mallika's inputs'poor she..hard luck sweety.

@bold - Well, he was not affected due to 3 reasons in this descending order - 1.he had first hand experience with Nidhi at JS and knew the kinda person she is, 2. ashni's love is true - that was clear to him and 3. ofcourse, she is his naatin.

And finally the marriage bells are on'loved their planning with Armaan's presence enlightening it all'.he really is a sweetheart and a lovable person'and a cupid in his own ways.

@bold - Armu is a sweatheart, haina?

Waise how did u like the antakshri? i worked v. v. hard for that part.

Loved the way u have kept the marriage and its ritual precise and bring out the desired outcome of it was beautiful and Ashu winning his bet great'great to see him so light at heart, playful and happy.

Yes, wanted to show a secure Ashu who could play a prank before his elders.- how nids love has made him feel secure

@bold -yes i kept it precise, becoz we have already seen a beautiful mariage in the show, so no point repeating it.

The union of AshNi was passionate and romantic.

Blush blush. Actually, i am very conservative, so took it up as a challenge, but it was the most dificult part of the ff for me.

Loved the new entry, Tamanna, and her relation to Armaan'guess they just didn't communicate properly which just led to their separation'but thanks to AshNi to bought them together, though some facts have to be dealt with..hope they get solved smoothly for Armu-Tamu soon.

I am glad you liked Armanna story.

Nidhi's stand about her relationship with Ashu was just beyond brilliant. The way she made all those doctors shut their mouths showing them the strength of her love and the bond AshNi share is just superbly written'I am head over heels with this Nidhi.

Actually got struck with that scene, Suja (turags) helped out.

@bold - me too me too

Ahaaa'so the Raja-Tithli story is out'ohhooo'glad u put it out..it just add charm to the entire story.

Hehehe

So Nidhi has understood Ashu desire of children..and even her liking towards children had led to her desire of becoming a mother'wowww so heart-touching.

Thanks dear, wanted to show how tuned in they are to each other, so.

But what cliffhanger ending dear'its just so not good'is their any probs for conceiving for Nidhi..can dat b cured or not'or r u planning something different..or is it going to be d reason for their separation ahead with Mallu's role in it after knowing this fact and she making Nidhi more dejected about it'so, so very unexpected and scary'.do continue soon'waiting very, very eagerly.

Dont be scared, you wont be disappointed...

Luv

Bhanu.

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

update dijiye na 😭

Originally posted by: hilarious44

Sshirley madam kahan gayab hain??

dhoondhte reh jaaooge.

3rd jan hogai...update kahan hai???😡

3rd ko update milne ki ab bhi kaafi sambhavna hai😉😉😉

Is say ziada sharafat nai hai hum mai...😆

You only said na ke u will wait...toh maine socha ki aap ke sharafat ka thoda sa fayda uthaye jaaye. jaisa ki maine pahle bhi kaha tha ke aapki hounding ke bina i cant write

Originally posted by: turags

shirley is busy chatting with me... don't disturb us...😆

Originally posted by: sshirley

abbe oye, why r u bhadkaoing fatima against me?

Originally posted by: turags

😛 couldn't resist i guess...😉😆

Originally posted by: turags

😛 couldn't resist i guess...😉😆

Originally posted by: sshirley

self appointed hain...and no, u can't change the job description...only i have the right to change 😆...chalo am off now...

you finish your chap fast and post it...😡 JALDI...