Hi,
As I promised..here I am...hope u don't get bored before u finish reading it about all my blabbering😳...(tried to put out my view from the beginning...with the flow of events as u wrote ...hope u get them).
Should say its a great place to start a story as I feel that after valentine episode everything has been changed of AshNi.
The confession of Nidhi that he is her knight in shining armor was most lovable.
Mallika is too much'I mean she is so mad that she is talking so low about her friendship and so-called love, though trying to hurt Nidhi, but guess she isn't realizing she is accusing Ashu at the same time.
So finally they had a hug'awesome'just loved the way you depicted it and what I loved the most was the aftermath where Ashu was all lost in dat hug and his love that he hardly paid any attention to Mallu.
The fact I admired the most was u didn't drag or postponed about AshNi talking to Baba soon after Shyama's warning or talks with Nidhi.
The way they revealed their love to Baba was nice and Ashu keeping his cool all thru it, though he was all the while torn with the refusal of him. All the facts u put out about how a father would react in a situation like this and Ashu's stand on it was awesome.
AshNi's convo after it was so heart-wrenching, especially thinking about Ashu (me crazy about this characterization a lot), the way he was trying to make her understand about not to hate any1 or argue and to give her life another chance for love and happiness was so beautifully written'with which Baba was smitten too, but guess him being the father couldn't grasp the sudden dreading changes in his daughter's life, at least acc to him at that moment.
So the separation'this was a crazy whip.
DB is too much sometimes, though she thinks good for every1 of her family in her own way'but the taunting was way too much.
Finally Ashu meets his Baba and they bonded up'it really was quite emotional'well happy that he got for what he was waiting for so long and at the same time sad that he couldn't win his love..and going thru a rough phase time and again.
Loved the bond Anji-Rohan-Nidhi share'they really r true frnds and stand for each other in other tough times.
I guess the true love is depicted by Rohan compared to Mallu'the way he wants to see his love happy and content with life is amazing whereas Mallu knowing Ashu's black past is not letting him have happy life with his love, which brought new zeal, happiness, being loved and wanted in his life. And Mallu is findings all ways to blackmail, force or make him helpless to Marry her'but guess the luck is not in favor'yeeeaaahhh'
So finally Nidhi has broke her silence of hearing all the accusations on Ashu'I think this is one of many reasons which made Baba wanting to take a next step about AshNi and his chance of mending the things for good and he too very sure of their bond and Ashu's sincerity.
I just loved the way Baba's approval came out in front of AshNi and the emotional Ashu...his true love was so beautiful to dream about'I really loved the part where Ashu's happiness flows in the form of tears and the calmness that spread after knowing their relationship has been approved and respected from Nidhi's father and he is gonna get his Nidhi for him forever.
And baba's teasing on Ashu's disappointed face for not findings his love was so cute.
So BB is finally aware of Ashu's sadness and the cause of it, and all the more BB-Baba's regrets were nullified by their mutual acceptance of mistakes and learning from it. Feels cool that BB was not affected at all by Mallika's inputs'poor she..hard luck sweety.
And finally the marriage bells are on'loved their planning with Armaan's presence enlightening it all'.he really is a sweetheart and a lovable person'and a cupid in his own ways.
Loved the way u have kept the marriage and its ritual precise and bring out the desired outcome of it was beautiful and Ashu winning his bet great'great to see him so light at heart, playful and happy.
The union of AshNi was passionate and romantic.
Loved the new entry, Tamanna, and her relation to Armaan'guess they just didn't communicate properly which just led to their separation'but thanks to AshNi to bought them together, though some facts have to be dealt with..hope they get solved smoothly for Armu-Tamu soon.
Nidhi's stand about her relationship with Ashu was just beyond brilliant. The way she made all those doctors shut their mouths showing them the strength of her love and the bond AshNi share is just superbly written'I am head over heels with this Nidhi.
Ahaaa'so the Raja-Tithli story is out'ohhooo'glad u put it out..it just add charm to the entire story.
So Nidhi has understood Ashu desire of children..and even her liking towards children had led to her desire of becoming a mother'wowww so heart-touching.
But what cliffhanger ending dear'its just so not good'is their any probs for conceiving for Nidhi..can dat b cured or not'or r u planning something different..or is it going to be d reason for their separation ahead with Mallu's role in it after knowing this fact and she making Nidhi more dejected about it'so, so very unexpected and scary'.do continue soon'waiting very, very eagerly.
Luv
Bhanu.
Jhanak
